My Beautiful Mistake S#2/pt13/pg41/ 4 march - Page 2

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Posted: 8 months ago

Originally posted by: Charanjeetkaur

Very nice update dear

Maan and geet parents are truly loved their children

Maya is also pampered kid

Thanks for pm

Watting for update dear


Thanks.dear

I try to give one more part soon

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Posted: 8 months ago


Thanks kingali

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Posted: 8 months ago

Congratulations on Season 2 


Curious Prologue 

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Posted: 8 months ago

Interesting Character Sketch 

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Posted: 8 months ago

Part 1 


A Lovely Start but Sad too


Maan is simply so cute and yes both he and his father 

love his mother but sad that she has a brain tumor and wants to

first give birth before going on medication 

Geet seems to be intelligent doing her homework as well as Maya's too


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Posted: 8 months ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Congratulations on Season 2 


Curious Prologue 


Thank u taahir

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Posted: 8 months ago

Maan is dil toots.. and now ghayal sher 

My guess… Geet is the beautiful mistake 

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Posted: 8 months ago

Thanks for reposting! 

Congrats on season 2.


Captivating prologue

Maan was shattered after she broke his heart

he owes his success to her

Edited by khwaishfan - 8 months ago
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Posted: 8 months ago

great character sketch

thanks for posting

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Posted: 8 months ago

Part 1

Nice update... well written 

Maan is happy go lucky boy

well Geet has a tough life

Maya is a spoilt rich girl

hate that Maya makes Geet do her homework

so Geet's dad works for Maya's dad as a driver

sad that Maan's mom has brain tumour

she is waiting to deliver before taking treatment

of cos Geet helps her parents

Maya cannot so anything for herself

Jaanavi had a point


updaet soon