My Beautiful Mistake S#2/pt13/pg41/ 4 march - Page 3

Who broke his heart? Was it Geet or Maya?

Maya is the rich princess, Geet is the poor kid. Maya is already spoiled and using Geet to do her work.

Maan is a sweet child. For now.

Very nice update. Maan was talking abt his beautiful mistake who became his inspiration. Hope they meet again. Past is sad, for Geet. Her story seems difficult. Maan, maya and Geet, a triangle story.. so eager for more

Wonderful story looking forward for it maan ka dil kisne toda waiting

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congrats for new story

very interesting

who break maan's heart 

geet n maya are friends even though geet's father working as driver at maya's father 

mr. malhotra treat geet like maya but differences are there 

geet do all maya's school work 

hope maan not going to loose his mother as she is having brain tumor n pushing operation for coming baby   

Originally posted by: taahir004

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A Lovely Start but Sad too

Maan is simply so cute and yes both he and his father 

love his mother but sad that she has a brain tumor and wants to

first give birth before going on medication 

Geet seems to be intelligent doing her homework as well as Maya's too

Yes geet is hard working girl 

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: tellyme

Maan is dil toots.. and now ghayal sher 

My guess… Geet is the beautiful mistake 

Thanks di

With further parts u get to know soon 

Simply amazing prologue so maan is like wounded lion who is roaring back like a king...who is the girl who left him ...it's kind of curious waiting to read more 

Part 1 

this was amazing start and glimpse of all 3people whom the story is gonna reveal one is pampered Malhotra kid Maya who takes things for granted and take help from her best friend geet for homework... Who is daughter of their driver...other end geet is handling things with maturity in young age takes care of her parents and studies also by herself... meanwhile maan is Raja bet of his parents whose mother is suffering from brain tumor and is pregnant too... waiting to read more ❤️ thanks for the PM

Superb story. Geet eems innocent and Maya is spoiled brat.