MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 10 Pg 60 Apr 14 - Page 59

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Posted: 1 months ago

Thanks for the update 

Very beautifully portrayed the emotions of geet , she is  clearly disturbed with the thought  that maan knowing advay and in past how maan behaved with geet in the pretext of heir .she is in fear knowing  maan would not let advay  meet geet once he comes to know that he is his own son. Waiting  for the next chapter .

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Posted: 1 months ago

Thanks for password

Awesome update

Finally the truth is out 

Past is very painful 😣

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Posted: 1 months ago

Amazing update. 

Geet fears that maan will take advay after he got to kwn that he has son.

Y maan behave with geet like that in past? Wanna to kwn abt it.

Very portray geet feeling n connection with  past also.

Let see what maan is going to do with geet n advay has he kwn that he has son now.

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Posted: 1 months ago

Past is painful for geet... Geet fears come true... When he called her mumma in front of maan... He join the dots n realize he is his child... Geet is do scared to loose her child... In past he told her he will make sure to not touch their child n here he is standing with him... Loved them.. Let's srr how maan is going to comfort geet or advay is the key to unite them

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Posted: 1 months ago

Password please i am waiting eagerly

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Posted: 26 days ago

Superb update 

Loved it 

OMG geet s fearing so much , she s hoping that advay will be sleeping and not to come in front of Maan .. 

Wen advay came running towards calling her mumma , Maan s shocked and he feeling happy and he know that advay is his son..

One side geet s feeling happy with father son bond but other she s fearing that Maan will take advay away .. 

Continue soon 

Waiting 

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Posted: 26 days ago

next part please

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Posted: 15 days ago

Hello Anu

Hoe are you?

hope that you update soon

thanks 

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Posted: 15 days ago

Dear Readers,


While I type 'Intezaar'  .........smiley42smiley42


These are new story and taking it's shape. So to keep up the continuity , I do not want to keep longer gap. 

So you will get Chapter 10 of this one tomorrow...smiley40smiley40


Who all are in for itsmiley2smiley2


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Posted: 15 days ago

Please update soon