MG FF - The Burnt -Chapter 10 Pg 60 Apr 14 - Page 57

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Posted: 1 months ago

Very heart touching update💖

Geet rang the bell and Jenny came to open the door

Both Maan and Jenny is getting surprised to see each other

Then suddenly Advay came and called mumma

Maan thinks that Advay is calling Jenny

But he was surprised when he hugged Geet

Maan ki khusi ka koi thikana nahi rehta hai that Advay is his son

Advay and Maan are lost in each other

other side Geet thought that this is all Maan’s game

He knows about the truth of Advay and now he comes to take his son from him

Becaue in past Maan always threaten her that when the baby comes he will seprate him with her

Now Geet is fearing that Maan will know the truth

What will Maan do now and Geet is fainted 

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Posted: 1 months ago

Finally after seeing Adhvay he realized that he is his own son. Geet remembered her past on how the baby topic came in to their relationship. Maan was really a monster what Geet had to go thru the torture that too the whole family is aware. Geet faints. What will happen next.

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Posted: 1 months ago

Thank you for pw❤️

Nice part ❤️🤗 Maan come to know about his son and he is happy 😊 but other side geet remember past 🥺. geet don't know Maan change a lot

She is unconscious 😳now what happened to her

Waiting for next part ❤️

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Posted: 1 months ago

Hello Anu

always appreciate the updates


Chapter 3

Majestic update… intensely written 

Geet's nervousness and fears were justified

she cannot help but drool on Maan

despite what Maan did to her, she still loves him

Maan and Jenny were indeed amazed seeing each other

of cos Advay ran out calling Mumma

Geet's reaction was justified

Maan was clearly shocked that Advay hugged Geet

now Geet knows that Maan is Advay's "ice cream uncle."

loved that Maan knew that Advay is his son

Maan was clearly emotional

Geet was certainly perplexed seeing Maan behave so lovingly with Advay

Geet's thoughts and confusion were reasonable

as expected she assumed that Maan already knew that Advay was his son

Maan was certainly overwhelmed understanding his connection with Advay

so Geet recalls the past 

dismayed that Maan misunderstood Geet hearing Geet and dadima's convo

well dadi advised Geet to have a baby

alas Maan saw this as Geet's trick to trap him

hate Maan... 

upset how he behaved with Geet

at least dadima tried to intervene

alas Maan stopped her

not surprised that Maan blamed Geet

great that dadima spoke in Geet's defense

but Maan did not listen to her

sad that he believed that Geet tricked him into marrying him

can he not see the innocence in Geet's eyes?

Maan was so harsh and mean to Geet

he had no right to that 

Geet was really scared of him

disappointed that he compared Geet with Sameera

ahh he does not trust Geet

hmm Maan was behaving like that with Geet to hide his feeling for her

nothing justified his behavior with Geet

she faced the brunt of his anger

his siblings and dadima hating him for this was justified

he spared no opportunity to humiliate, insult and taunt Geet

angry how Maan treated Geet

he assumed that she used to become Khurana DIL

oh he wants her to have a baby and keep her away from the baby

Geet tried her level best to gain Maan's trust

Geet's fears surfaced again

cannot blame her 

after all Maan instilled this fear in her

Gosh Geet fainted thinking Maan would take Advay from her

loved Maan's concern for Geet

hope they talk 


update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 1 months ago
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Posted: 1 months ago

Dear pls send me the pw

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Posted: 1 months ago

Chapter 9


Fascinating Chapter


Though Geet was scared of Maan’s reaction on seeing Advay

but instead Maan was happy seeing the little boy he has become friendly with.

Maan also realizes that Advay is his and Geet’s son , and this makes him

so happy that he wants his son to do anything to him

the past as always is painful , though I felt Maan been rude but when

intimate with Geet she can sense his love .

Maan in the past had warned Geet that he will keep the baby away from her

and then his rudeness also towards her drove her to leave him

now I’m waiting to see if Geet reunites with Maan or will she only

allow Advay visiting rights to his father .


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Posted: 1 months ago

Thank you for this update.. As always this update too made me soo emotional smiley19 omg this was far worse than what I thought. Geet had to go through a horrible time & what a humiliating journey it was . I am so mad at Maansmiley7 & feel like his penance or whatever is not even close to getting anywhere near Geet. Now it all makes sense. Why Geet left the way she did.. I always felt that there is a much stronger reason for her to leave him after getting pregnant, but it got clear why she left once she got pregnant . Omg this was not even an unplanned one, it was planned and how!! How low he had fallen to behave that way. No consent, no respect no humanity…! Plain arrogance throughout. It is a wonder Geet still loves a man like that. The man who forcefully got her pregnant with the continuous warnings on how he is going to treat her after the baby is born, warning her that she won’t get to be anywhere near her baby!!! Is it a surprise that she left him with this fear.. that constant fear in her that once he knows about Advay what he could do to her, it all makes much more sense now that it is clear. How sir came to realize her value in his life is also now a mystery to me. How did he come down to that realization??? It must have taken a lot for him to get down his pedestal onto the ground! How much arrogance! Fell like shambles with her absence! I am so emotional with this update. I feel like Geet shouldn’t be entertaining him anywhere near her. He doesn’t deserve to get her. 
And that Sameera matter also came up, was surprised when it was said Sameera left him so he couldn’t trust Geet. But there was an instance where he mentions he went to Sameera to spend the night with her when Geet left, and also that he always went to her, but couldn’t get to sleep with her.. Confused about this part in the story. Eager eager for next. By now I am sooo hooked to this story, such emotional stories with Maan being unfair to Geet are arguable my most favourite & I am eagerly waiting for the next update! 

Edited to add : ofcourse this was a momentary vent on Maan, I don’t wish to change anything in him or his character journey as u planned. smiley9

Edited by babelicious - 1 months ago
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Posted: 1 months ago

Great part 

her life was Maan but he taking this steps made her come far from him 

feeling bad for Geet to go through so much 

just hope he is able to gain his Geet with full respect she deserves 

cont soon

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Posted: 1 months ago

Please share me the password. I haven't received yet.

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Posted: 1 months ago

Amazing chapter 

Maan and geet  shocked ,seeing the boy he has come to like so much turns out to be his own son was a great shock to him while geet  knowing the ice cream uncle advany talks about turns to be maan she is in shock and fear to lose his son .the past was so horrible maan tortured her so much and fear that he will take the baby when is born made her to take that brave decision to run away now seeing their bond the fear  she lives with all this time has come true and she end up fainting hope maan will make her understand he is a changed man now