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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha
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sorry hon...I am stuck in the Meerasim's first meeting... Part 2 is going to be a bit long....so please be a little bit patient š
waiting patiently ... šOriginally posted by: Rehana86
sorry hon...I am stuck in the Meerasim's first meeting... Part 2 is going to be a bit long....so please be a little bit patient š
after yesterday's epi , i need a energy booster update
Part 2
āI know it must be heartbreaking and very disturbing for youā Mrs. Begam tried to make the new bride comfortable on the bed as she held both her hands in hers, giving it a warm touchā¦ the moment she saw her coming out of the car, her eyes sparkledā¦. She made sure all the wedding night arrangements were completed in 1 hour when Shahnawaz called herā¦ the entire room was decorated with fresh flowers, decorative ornaments, and candlesā¦. the pale violet paint in the room complimented the lavish silk curtains with matching bedsheetā¦.
Meerab kept her gaze fixed on the groundā¦. not knowing what to answer as the fact was trueā¦. ā I know it will take time for you to adjust but we all arehere to help you make it your home āā¦. She looked up to meet the eyes of the woman, who just brushed her soul with a feather of motherly affection that she always experienced with Anilaā¦. āhomeā she repeated in her mindā¦. āMashAllahā¦ you are very beautifulā Mrs. Begam complimented as her eyes met with those round beautiful innocent ones for the first time and she dropped a light kiss on top of her forehead tikaā¦. She could not ask for anyone better for her sonā¦. She was perfect! ā¦.
āWelcome to the family, Meerabā a young lady in her mid late 20ās smiled at her as she softly left a peck on the brideās cheekā¦. ā... Iām Sabaā¦ your husbandās twinā¦only 2 mins older, thoughā¦ā Saba introduced herself with a wink, which managed to bring a half smile on Meerabās face.ā¦ not obvious but interesting to know he had a twin sisterā¦.. ā... He calls me Apiā¦ but you can call me by my name if you would likeā¦ I donāt mindā, Saba cleared out, trying to make the girl comfortableā¦. there was no restriction when it came to comfortness of individuals in the houseā¦. āApi!ā Meerab softly repeatedā¦. her voice was husky yet soft ā¦ both mother-daughter exchanged an approval for the bride smilingā¦.
āMaa Saab, Emad will wake upā Saba looked at the clock by the bedside tableā¦. ā...Sorry I have to go, my son is sleepingā¦. I have to nurse him ...ā she apologized, and reluctantly took her sister-in-lawās leave ā¦. ā I will also take your leave ā¦ but first let me help you sit properlyā¦ ā saying that Mrs. Begam bent down to hold Meerabās feet in order to put them on the bed, knowing that it would not be easy for the feather-like girl to do it herself with the heavy bridal lehenga ā¦. ā... Maa, please!...ā keeping her voice low, Meerab stopped her before the older lady could touch her feet and realized what she just utteredā¦.
No one has ever called her by that name, but coming out of Meerabās mouth sounded like a perfection to Mrs. Begamās identity in the family ā¦ it seemed like she added a new value to her existence as a mother! ...ā.. Sorry, I dont know what to call you ā¦ I thā¦ā Meerab was interruptedā¦ ā ā¦ Maa ā¦ you can call me Maa ā¦ā Mrs. Begam did not want to let that feeling out of her system ā¦ that name was sealed for her daughter-in-law only as she lightly touched the cheek of the bride, fully content with the choice of her dear husband, Mr. Shahnawaz Khanā¦
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āYou are very well aware of the fact that I donāt even look at things that I donāt know about ā¦. and here, forget about knowing, you got me married to a girl whom I have never even seen before in my life, let alone meet herā¦ May I know what sin I have committed to deserve this injustice??.... Is this a punishment for always respecting your commands??ā Murtasim questioned his father as he met face-to-face with himā¦. not ready to get over the storm that was thrown at him by his own father ā¦. āI understand your anger and frustration ā¦. but donāt forget Maryam is the daughter-in-law of Gulzar family nowā¦. knowing their history with us, I do not want them to mistreat your sisterā¦. if their daughter is here, then they will think a thousand times before hurting Maryam ā¦ā Shahnawaz tried to make his fake case ā¦.
āSeriously? This is the solution you found? You couldnāt think of anyone else?ā Murtasim laughed with sarcasmā¦ āWell, unfortunately, I donāt have a second sonā¦. so yeah!ā Shahnawaz tried to lighten up the mood ā¦. this time he did not find his fatherās sense of humor funny at all ā¦. Murtasim closed his eyes, breathing heavily as he shook his head, clenching his fistā¦.
āIf you guys are done arguing, can you please let your son go to his room? He has got his newly wedded wife waiting for him.ā Mrs. Begum entered her bedroom ā¦. āThis was too much, you knowā¦. I had so many dreams about his wedding ā¦. thanks to you for crashing themā she threw a disappointed look at her husbandā¦. āAnyway, I will fulfill ALL my wishes on the Walima but before that, here, Murtasimā Mrs. Begum looked at his son with a smile ā¦.. āThis is for herā¦ā she took off a ring from her finger that was said to be given by her mother-in-law as a family tradition, and handed it over to her son.ā¦ āWow! Everyone is celebrating Eid over my perdition! Afsoos!ā Murtasim took the ring and stormed out of his parents room, highly disappointed ā¦.
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āI am sorryā Shahnawaz finally admitted to his wife as he continuedā¦.ā you know I never wanted his wedding like thisā¦. I, myself, am surprised with my own actionā¦. there were so many things going on in my mindā¦and I already told you about herā Shahnawaz confessed to his wife ā¦
Shahnawaz and Murtasim, despite being father and son, inherited a totally different nature of behaviors. Along with the pride and power, Shahnawaz was a light-hearted and sensible father, who built a strong bond within his family members, whereas, Murtasim was a calm and self-controlled son, who made sure to protect his family from the evil eyes ā¦.
āI know I donāt have to say it but I still want toā¦. I chose Meerab for Murtasim from the day I laid my eyes on her.ā Shahnawaz gently squeezed his wifeās hands, he owed her an apology for destroying all her excitement and desires she had for her sonās big day. ā I did not know it was her wedding ā¦.I think Allah wanted me to be there because he knew my desireā¦. and he also wanted itā¦ Allah always has the best plans for his followers'', Shahnawaz exclaimedā¦. He knew he did not have to request his wife to not make their daughter-in-law feel unwelcomed as his Begam also loved her and expressed her desire to make Meerab her daughter-in-law when Shahnawaz showed her Meerabās picture 6 months ago for the first timeā¦.
āShe called me, Maaā¦.only Maaā, Mrs. Begam smiled at her husband, who witnessed his wifeās face changed with concernā¦ ā ā¦ She is very soft ā¦. itās all new to herā¦. and of course unexpectedā¦. but do you think she would be able to forgive youā¦. orā¦. accept Murtasim?ā Mrs. Begam finally let out her fear ā¦. ā..Did we indeed do injustice to both of them ? ā¦ā she questionedā¦ā¦
The question that ate him inside and he prayed that he would not have to face it ā¦. but sadly, it was there, right on his faceā¦āLife, death and marriage ā¦. we, human beings, have NO control over these three, EXCEPT the creatorā¦. I would not even go into the fact, what if I did not take the stepā¦ this marriage was bound to happenā¦ this way or the other ā¦ however, it is within us, how we take our destiny thrown at our face ā¦ā Shahnawaz justifiedā¦ ā...both their anger are totally justifiedā¦. to be honest, I donāt know why, but I just could not let her go ā¦ā he took a deep sighā¦ āNow about Murtasim, I have this strong feeling that only Meerab can make him see through his heart ā¦ She is a kind-hearted girl, otherwise, being a princess of a mansion, why would she worry so much about a poor little girl?ā Shahnawaz recalled his first meeting with Meerabā¦. ā....donāt worryā¦ everything will be fineā¦ā he convinced his wife, who nodded with hopeā¦.
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āWhy didnāt he object to his fatherās command?... How can an outsider make a decision in my life? ā¦ not that Baba ever cared about my consent in marrying Rohail ā¦ but why me?ā Meerab got off the bed as her back was hurting from sitting in the heavy dressā¦. she stood by the large window giving her back to the room entrance ā¦. trying to figure out a way to start her new journey of hell ā¦.
ā..Baba..ā the broken voice was still echoing somewhere in his ears when he first heard her crying out her fatherās name as she rushed to sit before Anwarā¦. even in the undesirable circumstances, her voice managed to cross through his heart to make a little space for itself ā¦. there was a strange awareness in his heart when the pain in her voice pricked through it ā¦.
Even in the heavy attire, her slender body stood still like a mannequinā¦ although he was facing her back, it was visible she had not taken the veil off her face yetā¦ not that he was interested anymore but because it was too late nowā¦. the damage was done already!.... Now he had to make sure he took care of this unwanted marriage for the sake of his sisterā¦. but deep down he did not know how long he would be able to carry this burden on his shoulderā¦.
ā.....Iām sorry for all theseā¦..ā Murtasim cleared his throat before asking, only to get silence in responseā¦. ā...Seriously?!?!? SORRY?!? what the f*** am I supposed to do with your apology??? Does your apology allow me to go back to my life???.... Is this guy even listening to himself??ā Meerab closed her eyes in disbeliefā¦ clenching her lehenga into her fists for 5 seconds before taking a deep breath, trying to release herself from the stress as she decided to have a proper conversation with her āunwantedā husband regarding her condition to this marriageā¦. She opened her eyes, looking at the moon as she rested her left hand on the chair beside the window ā¦. trying to focus!
Taking a step forward, he was now only 2 steps close to her as he slightly moved to her leftā¦ The sensational fragrance from Miss Dior blooming bouquet froze his brain as he felt captivated by her, when his eyes caught the sight of her left hand ā¦. those beautiful thin fingers covered with heena and various designer rings ā¦. he took out the ring from his pocket that Maa Saab had given him for his wife ā... This is from Maa Saabā¦ā he cleared out, then without his knowledge, he found himself gently taking her left hand from the chair and slipped the ring into her ring fingerā¦. perfect fitā¦
As if a current had passed through her vein and electrified every inch of her body, when she felt him against her skinā¦ It was gentle yet strong! ā¦ she could literally hear her heartbeat screaming, when she quickly took her hand away after he was doneā¦ refused to expose the state of her misbehaved heartā¦. Focus Meerab. Focus! This is NOT what you wished for! You do not belong here! Not with him! For Godās sake, you did not even see his face!...
ā... I know you must have been very upset with the turn of events and the unpleasant circumstances under which we had to tie the knotā¦Just wanted to clarify that I did not want this to happen but I could not disrespect my fatherā¦ I know you must have dreamt to spend this night with yourā¦. ā keeping him calm, Murtasim tried to make his case when he dumbfounded himself at the first sight of herā¦.
āOh Please !!! Give me a Break !!! ā Meerab yanked off her veil to look into those estranged yet intense eyes for the first time as she could not tolerate her name being taken with Rohail... ā... I did not want to get married to that clown in the first placeā¦ but that does not mean that you did me any favor here ā¦. Let me get this clear, I did not want to get married at this point in my life but look at my bad luckā¦.ā she let out a quick sarcastic laughā¦ ā..anyway..so you were saying, you also did not want to marry me??.. Good ā¦So, let's set up some ground rules hereā¦ā She continued as she moved towards the large dressing table and started to take off her ornaments ā¦when she unknowingly missed his eyes following her wayā¦. āSince, none of us wanted to get into this relationshipā¦.. so please, donāt expect any kind of ārights'' on meā she quoted as she re-hooked one of her earrings before placing it on the table carefully ā¦.
The moment when she revealed herself, if the world would have told him that angels do not exist on earth, then he would have gladly slapped the face of the planet to prove it wrong!!...because right now, he knew he could proudly admit that āhe owned oneā ā¦. his eyes refused to blink as they did not want to miss those beautiful round eyes that would move wherever she wantedā¦ he was in awe of how her expression changed from amusement- to-self-pity-to-confusion-to-concern as she talked ā¦ taking note of every point of her face, he came down to her lips, pink glossy lipsā¦. he could feel his heart pounding at the unforeseen desire of touching those pink luscious lips of hers with his ā¦. there, he knew he lost both himself and his heart to his no longer āunwantedā wife !!! She managed to slide into his heart through his eyes ....
Sorry for the late post.... I am trying to manage time between work, home, and kid, so please bear with me :) ...all kind of criticisms are welcome!...Could not proofread it so let me know of the blunders!
Love
Rehana
thank you for the update š¤
i am loving where the story is going ...
at first i was like maybe MB will be khadoos but she is sweet ..
Thank God meerab spoke up , at first i thought she is going to be all quiet and shy types ... i am not used to this meerab š
i love it ..
please update soonish .. ā¤ļø
It is beautiful šā¤........i can imagine themš and the photoshoot look is fitting perfectly ā¤...Murtasim looking at meerab for the first time remind me the actual scene when he saw her at their haldi and mehndi ceremony....thank you so much for the update .....i can understand it is not easy to write and when you have a kid it is just impossible....but you did itš...do write the next part whenever you get time...waiting eagerly š¤
Loved the update.
Can't wait to read about this version of MeerAsimā¤ļø
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Part 3
The moment she revealed herself, if the world would have told him that angels do not exist on earth, then he would have gladly slapped the face of the planet to prove it wrong!!...because right now, he knew he could proudly admit that āhe owned oneā ā¦. his eyes refused to blink as they did not want to miss those beautiful round eyes that would move wherever she wantedā¦ he was in awe of how her expression changed from amusement- to-self-pity-to-confusion-to-concern as she talked ā¦ taking note of every point of her face, he came down to her lips, pink glossy lipsā¦. he could feel his heart pounding at the unforeseen desire of touching those pink luscious lips of hers with his ā¦. there, he knew he lost both himself and his heart to his no longer āunwantedā wife !!! She managed to slide into his heart through his eyes ā¦
ā...I do not accept you as my husband...ā Meerab dropped the last strawā¦ ā...Excuse me!...ā this was enough for Murtasim to come back to realityā¦. ā...and what is this supposed to mean?..ā he demanded to know as he got her full attentionā¦
Keeping her earrings on the table, she walked towards Murtasim to face him, making sure to keep a decent distance between them ā¦ ā...First of all, I had nothing to do with this family feud but YOU guys dragged me in the middle of nowhere ā¦ā She was fuming! ā¦ ā... Then, you literally married me at gunpoint and still expected me to live with it?...ā She questionedā¦. ā... your father and brother should have done the calculation before they got my sister involved in this! ā¦ā Murtasim retorted backā¦
ā...Are you serious, right now?..ā Meerab was surprised that the guy who claimed to be the God of the Royal Feudal System had no clue about the life of his own sisterā¦. ā...Maryam and Zubair love each other and no one forced your sister to marry himā¦ there is no way she will be treated any differently than the other women in our palaceā¦. she has been accepted as a family with full respect by everyoneā¦this was a positive step and things could have been resolved in a better wayā¦.but you guys had to screw it up all over againā¦and in the way, got my life messed upā¦.ā Meerab explainedā¦
ā..Really?.. then how come we were never informed about the marriage??....ā Murtasim asked.
ā... That one! Ask your sisterā¦. to be honest, I now understand why she didnāt inform anyone of you about her situationā¦ all you guys know about is fight, revenge, and hatredā¦ but guess what, you also turned out to be a cowardā¦ you are telling me that you did not want to marry me and yet you did not have the guts to object when your father asked me to marry you at the gunpointā¦ Maryam knewā¦ she knew you guys would have never understood her!...and the example is right here ā she pointed at herselfā¦. ā....Now, since you wanted to keep this Fued ON ā¦. FINE! .... I will make sure it stays ON!..ā Meerab moved closer to be only a step away from himā¦. āSo, Mr. Murtasim Khan, STAY-AWAY-FROM-ME!...ā She pointed her right finger at his chest, poking it hard!... If only she knew she was unknowingly inviting herself for a wedding night kiss with that sweet little painful pointer!
He held her right hand by the wrist that was pointing at him with his left hand while slipping his right hand around her neck to pull her closerā¦ Meerab instantly grabbed onto his right wrist with her left hand, trying to release herself from his strong gripā¦. ā...How dare you talk ill about my family? What do you know about my family? If you do not know things, then better keep your mouth SHUT!...ā Murtasim kept his voice low but the rage was visible from his pitch! His fury took over his mind as he did not realize the pain he was causing her through the broken bangles on her right wristā¦
ā....and Let me get this clear once and for all, whether you accept me as your husband or not, YOU are MY WIFE!... Donāt you ever forget that!...ā at this very moment, he wanted to strangle her but at the same time hated to see those tears in her eyes that were ready to flow down any moment ā¦ not having to kiss away those tears from her face was another torture for himā¦ let alone taste those lips that were only a centimeter awayā¦. Murtasim stormed out of the room as he needed to gulp in all these mixed emotions into his system, while leaving her behind alone to watch over her wound ā¦.
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She looked at the little scratch caused by the broken bangle, there was no blood but the wound managed to pierce through her heartā¦..Meerab grabbed a light pink suit from her bag and left for the washroom to get a cold showerā¦ the only diversion that could give her some peace at her intensely nonpassionate wedding nightā¦.
He knew Meerab was right when she said Maryam did not trust her family, when it came to her loveā¦. and it hurt him intenselyā¦. he thought he held a unique equation with his little sister where she would share everything with him but today Meerab proving him wrong was the most unfortunate truth thrown at his faceā¦
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Murtasim returned after an hour to find his wife sitting in front of the mirrorā¦. Meerab had her face to the wall adjacent to the dressing table as she was applying some cream on her right ankle that was placed on top of her left thighā¦. This was a regular night routine that she always followed before going to bedā¦
The pink floral dupatta was half way hanging on the floor where the other end was placed against her upper body over to her left shoulderā¦. who knew his life would take such a turn that the room that belonged to him till yesterday had now been occupied by a new unexpected member for the rest of his lifeā¦ Murtasim kept his cell phone on his side of the bed closer to the dressing table, as he stood right behind herā¦.as he was about to take off his wristwatch, his eyes caught the most beautiful sight of her when she turned her head to the right to remove her hair from the shoulder as she tried to brush them ā¦.
This was her real faceā¦. he was observing her waist length wavy hair, which was currently a little wet, she must have taken a shower, he could tellā¦. he could smell a new floral fragrance coming from herā¦. she did not have any make-up on but looked even more beautiful than beforeā¦. Is this how natural beauty is defined? ā¦. How can a girl look so pure and natural with no artificial product? ā¦
Before he could go into details of every part of her body, she caught his gaze through the mirror and he instantly turned away to face the bed when he saw his part of the bed was occupied with her stuffā¦.he again without his knowledge picked up her dupatta from the bed and told her to get the bed free of her stuff, āI need this bed empty in 10 minsā ā¦ Meerab instantly came and grabbed her dupatta from his grip, āwhat do you mean?....you are not sleeping in this bed..ā she continued as she started to fold the dupattaā¦. ā...Excuse me!..ā Murtasim was confused as he placed the wrist watch on the bedside table and started to unbutton his coatā¦. ā..This is my room and my bed..ā he stated as he took off his coat and started to losen his tieā¦ āBut YOU got me into this room by forcefully marrying me, so I will sleep on the bed and you can make yourself comfortable on the sofaā¦be my guest for the rest of your life!ā Meerab quickly got on the bed as she pretended to fold the rest of the lehenga setā¦.
ā...Waitā¦ YOU donāt accept me as your husband and YOU want to stay away from me, so you go and sleep on the sofaā¦ā Murtasim reminded herā¦. āExcuse me!, you also did not want to marry me..so-...ā Meerab was interrupted in the middle, ā... That was a past tenseā¦ in the present, you are my wifeā¦ and I accept you fully as my lawfully wedded wifeā¦ Now tell me, what are your thoughts?!ā he raised his brows, crossing his arms against his chest, he patiently waited for his wifeās answer ā¦.
She found herself to be locked by his intense gazeā¦. It took her a moment to conceive the features of her āhusbandā....the short hair was combed to stay slightly to the right with gelā¦. clean forehead, which currently had some horizontal waves as he was looking at herā¦ his eyes were deep..as if piercing through her soulā¦ She always thought a beard makes a guy look oldā¦ but she was bowled to find herself admiring the light stubble beard that made her āmanā look not old but rather mature and seā... Meerab stopped her vision midway as she was surprised to find her mind taken over by a man she just met a while ago, who was to be addressed as her husband for the rest of her lifeā¦ āGO-TO-HELL!ā She slowly emphasized her words ā¦. then diverted her attention back to folding her outfitā¦.
He caught her resistance and smiled to himselfā¦ to be fair, he wanted to give her time to accept this relationship and himā¦ for that he could wait for ages ā¦. Without a word, he picked up his coat from the corner of the bed and left to freshen upā¦.
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The moonlight was still bright as it passed through the window to rest on her face, protecting her from its own evil eyesā¦ Murtasim almost missed a heartbeat at the sight of her as he came out of the washroom, changed into a cream colored kurta-pajamaā¦ she must have been tired as she found to be in fast sleep clutching onto her bridal dupatta, which she was supposed to be foldingā¦. he was not sure if she had her dinner or not but thinking of his mother and api, he somewhat knew they would not keep her hungry, especially after whatever she had to go through tonightā¦
Murtasim quietly walked towards her side of the bed, making sure not to wake her upā¦. he gently removed the folded lehenga and top from the bed and placed them at a corner of the sofa, then he very carefully unclutched the dupatta from her grip and kept it with the rest of the outfitā¦ he froze for a moment when she snuggled with the pillow that was lying by her chestā¦.he smiled at her innocenceā¦. she looked like an angelā¦. a pure distinguished angel ā¦. the fair complexion with no makeup on, she was the ideal example of purity blended with beautyā¦. he could hear his own heartbeat as he silently watched her sleep and again unaware of his action, he found himself, lightly tracing his right index finger on her face from forehead all the way down to her left cheek as he tucked the small strand of hair, which came as a distraction for his view, behind her left ear ā¦
He continued to watch her as she rubbed her cheek against the pillow then wet her lips with the tip of her tongue while still in sleepā¦ instantly, his admiration turned into a desire as he desperately wanted to taste those lipsā¦. Murtasim carefully traced his right thumb on her lower lip ā¦. for a moment, he was absorbing herā¦. the man who was ready to murder every single person on the planet a few hours ago because of getting involved with her, was now helplessly drowning into her proximity ā¦. he silently gulped in the intoxicated concupiscence that came across his mind as he moved away from her ā¦. walking towards his side of the bed, he quietly lied down making sure to keep a not too far of a distance from herā¦. from now on, he needed to feel her close, before closing eyes in the night and after opening eyes in the morningā¦
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Hope you like it
Rehana
Ohmydz absolutely loved it š
So much happened in one night.
From hate, to dazed, to mesmerised...āŗļø
Can't wait to read Meerab journey in accepting Mu...
Enjoying this bold Mu
Thank you for updating š¤
Beautiful...ā¤š.....you updated it after a long wait but its worth it....it reminds me the good old meerasim timeā¤...i can see them ...waiting for the next update.
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