Ariya TS The Retribution - Page 5

Originally posted by: ishitadalal

Wow....wonderful....

A marvelous story....

Loved the way Arjun settled his scores with Sam....

A heart warming Ariya union....

Just a request.... If u could consider writing an epilogue depicting how fulfilling Ariya are for each other.... their private life full of peace and warmth...

Plz do give it a thought....

Will be waiting for your next story.

I'll think about it, maybe a short OS or something

The way you potrayed Arjun's character and his view was really beautifully done. Riya and Arjun's moment was awesome.

Loved it a lot.

Wow u made me cry ..

But when u know u have one person u trust life does make it worth living like ariya

Arjun pain in betrayal came across so well

The dichotomy of anger Betrayal for his rosh and friend ..

I did like what ayesh said also

Shree really cares for arj and did not want his betryal to be public

I do understand his reasons

Please write another one soon

Reversal of role types ri a army agent whose partner cum husband MIA and then on investigation meets Arjun or something?

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Wow u made me cry ..

But when u know u have one person u trust life does make it worth living like ariya

Arjun pain in betrayal came across so well

The dichotomy of anger Betrayal for his rosh and friend ..

I did like what ayesh said also

Shree really cares for arj and did not want his betryal to be public

I do understand his reasons

Please write another one soon

Reversal of role types ri a army agent whose partner cum husband MIA and then on investigation meets Arjun or something?

interesting, I'll keep it in mind

That was amazing.
finally Arjun beat up Sam.
i am glad everyone got to know Sam’s real face.

Ariya’s confession was cute.
Thanks for the pm

I hope you write an epilogue to show how Ariya moves forward.

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

That was amazing.
finally Arjun beat up Sam.
i am glad everyone got to know Sam’s real face.

Ariya’s confession was cute.
Thanks for the pm

I hope you write an epilogue to show how Ariya moves forward.

I am planning to, will hopefully do soon

Bahot acche se khatirdari hui Mr.Dhokebaaz ki...

Whatever Arjun did was right...

Betrayals r always hard to forget but with time and riya's love he will heal soon ...

Feeling bad for Ayesha...

Lekin ant bhala toh sab bhala😊

Hope Ariya will find solace in each other 🤍

Thanx for PM

Oh that got worst n sam got transferred

Can't even imagine sam cheating with his wife

Nice story 💔💔💔

Originally posted by: bloomie

I am planning to, will hopefully do soon

can’t wait

Originally posted by: bloomie

I am planning to, will hopefully do soon

Isski planning kya complete ho gayi hai? Kab karne wali ho publish?