Thanks for this wonderful story. Reading your second story after silent whisper. Read all 27 parts within 2 nights. Iam really loving your character sketching of Maaneet and others. They were very unique in your stories. They were never fully black and white. They always have grey shades. That's the reality of human being which makes me feel connected to the story very much.
The way you write about them I feel more connected and enjoyable.
Loved Parts - Maan being very understanding and handling situation of his attraction and his love towards Geet(when she was married to Dev) with much respect and without destroying the dignity of the relationship. Geets slow realisation and take everything under control with the help Maan. Nyra being maaneets apple of eyes. Geet getting and unbearable yet so Lovable family from Maan. I liked each and every parts.
I will continue to read 29 n 30 in next thread.
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