Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Yeh: A Pandya Family OS (Author’s Note Pg 3) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

A lovely one shot. Loved the bond between Rishita and Shiva. This form of her is much better than that irritating shouting mess.

GauRa and Shivi ❤️❤️

Krish you're a darling.

The last moment with Shivi on call, that's my fav

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

So lovely.

Loved Krish Raavi and Shiva Rishita bonding❤️

Finally Shiva went to meet her... Can we have a second part to this?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

This was so so good.. Can we know what happened after the window was opened? And did Dev solve his issues? And most importantly Gaumbi ka kya hua???

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Damn I love this so much! Especially the bond between Shiva and Rishita! ♥️

And then the GauRa dance 🤣

Krish is one big cutieee!

And finally this dialogue Aye MaamiKiBehenKiBeti, apni kirki kolegi ya main Maami ko uthao?
Beautifully written!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

All are happy ❤️ which makes me too happy 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Really enjoyed reading this version of Rishita!

Her bond with Shiva and Raavi's bond with Krish are so wholesome here ❤️

Poor Dev, he anyway has issues and then getting traumatised by Gaura 🤣

Would love to see you continue this! Really want to see Shivi's conversation here

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

This is amazing.❤️❤️


Loved it.

Rishita-Shiva bond is something I would love to see in the show in future.. I really loved the way you portrayed Rishita- Shiva bond here.


GauRa and Dev...🤣🤣


Krish is always a cutie pie.

ShiVi ❤️ The last dialogue of Shiva was epic....


You've penned down this OS beautifully.


I would love to read ShiVi patch up; a sort of sequel to this OS.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

This os was amazing....

Loveeed Shiva and Rishita’s bonding...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Esha, it was great! ShiVi like always don’t talk but love each other so much You brought in GauRa’s romance too😆 I was most surprised about Rishita was involved in bringing these 2 together. This is how the story should be and not the one we get to see on TV. You are calling it random but it is perfect for us fans to read and enjoy!😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Thank you everyone for all the lovely comments 🤗 I honestly didn’t expect such amazing response!! A bit busy with work so won’t get to individual replies until later but I’m loving all the appreciation ❤️ So so glad everyone enjoyed reading it 😆

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