Yeh vaada raha...It's a promise..RaSiya,Zorawar-Mannat SS - Page 4

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Is she already feeling a connection with Raghav? Its not just the name. There is more to it.

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Yeh vaada raha...It's a promise.. Part 4

Siya rang up Alakha.

Siya:Alakha,I want to meet Raghav again.Can you please take me to his house?

Alakha was surprised.

Alakha:Sure.I will you take you to his house to meet him.

Siya smiled:Thank you Alakha.

Alakha:Why do you want to meet Raghav?Just because his name is Raghav?

Siya:Not just because of the name,there is something else which is pulling me towards Raghav.

Alakha:What is that?

Siya:His voice.

Alakha:What is so special about his voice?

Siya:Have you not noticed that?He sounds like Raghavendra. I mean his voice is exactly like Raghavendra's.

Alakha was surprised.

Alakha:Are you sure?I think you simply feel like that.Maybe because of his name,you got reminded of Raghavendra.So you feel like that.

Siya:No Alakha.He really sounds like Raghavendra. I want to hear his voice again.His voice is haunting me.

Alakha became upset.




Siya went to Raghav's house with Alakha.Raghav was surprised to see her.

Siya:Hi Raghav!

Raghav:Hi!

Alakha:Siya wanted to meet all of you.Because I have told her about you all many times.

Raghav was expressionless while Jaydeep and his wife Anuraga smiled.

Jaydeep:Welcome Siya.I am glad that you visited us.

Siya:It's my pleasure uncle.

Anuraga:Come beta...Alakha has told me about you.But it's the first time i am seeing you.But I always wanted to meet you.

Siya smiled:Me too aunty.

Anuraga:I will bring coffee for you.

Siya:No thanks aunty.My stomach is already full.

Siya looked at Raghav and asked:Hey Raghav...why are you silent?Why are you not talking to me?

Raghav was stunned.

Raghav:What to talk Siya?We are not even friends.

Siya became dull.

Siya:But we can be friends.

Raghav:But what reason do I have to be friends with you?

Siya thought:He has the same attitude of Raghavendra's. He also behaved the same way to me when I tried to make friends with him and propose him.

Siya:I am your cousin's best friend.So you can make me your friend.Right?

Raghav was silent.

Anuraga:Give her a shake hand Raghav.

Siya extended her hand towards him.

Slowly Raghav extended his hand and held her hand.She felt an electric sensation while holding his hand.

She closed her eyes and remembered Raghavendra holding her hand.

Raghav removed his hand off hers.

Suddenly Siya saw Raghav's picture with Jaydeep-Anuraga on the wall.

She smiled.

Siya:Nice photograph.

Anuraga and Jaydeep became emotional.

Anuraga:That photograph was taken last year during a foreign trip.

Siya just smiled.




Vedika sat near Atul.

Vedika:Atul..even though you told Siya that Raghavendra is no more,she is not willing to move on.So what if she comes to know that Raghavendra is actually alive?

Atul became dull.

Flash back...

The doctor told Atul:The boy who was with Siya...

Atul:I don't want to hear about him.Because of him,my daughter got distanced from me.

The doctor:I just want to tell you that his face has been deeply disfigured.

Atul was shocked.

Doctor:I have called my friend Dr.Jaydeep who is an excellent plastic surgeon. He will do his plastic surgery.

Atul:You can do anything.But I don't want him im my daughter's life.

Atul walked away.

The doctor became dull.




Present...

Alakha told Raghav:I think purposefully Siya made friends with you.Because she feels that your voice is exactly like Raghavendra's. She wants to feel his presence by hearing your voice.

Raghav was stunned.

Raghav:If she loved Raghavendra that much why did she agree to marry another guy so soon?Why didn't she wait for me?

Raghav burst into tears.

Alakha felt upset.



Flash back....

Raghavendra's plastic surgery was done by Dr.Jaydeep.He removed the bandage.Raghavendra saw his new face on the mirror.He became emotional.

Raghavendra:Thank you Doctor for operating my disfigured face and giving me a lovely face.

Jaydeep smiled emotionally:This is my late son Raghav's face.

Raghavendra was surprised.

Jaydeep:We lost him in an accident.I feel that I am seeing my son alive.

Jaydeep was becoming emotional.

Jaydeep:Anyways...now you can meet your girl friend Siya.After all she is my niece Alakha's best friend.

Raghavendra smiled.

Raghavendra:I can't wait to meet her.But how will she recognize me?

Jaydeep:I will come along with you to the party.

Raghavendra smiled.

Jaydeep:Can you please meet my wife?She will be happy to see you.

Raghuveer:Sure.



Jaydeep took Anuraga to the hospital to see Raghavendra.

Anuraga became emotional.

Anuraga:Raghav!

She ran towards him and hugged him.

Raghavendra became emotional.

Raghavendra said painfully:But I...I am not your son Raghav.

Anuraga:I know that you are not my Raghav.But for us you will be our Raghav.

Jaydeep:Yes.You told us that you are an orphan.But now onwards you are our son.You should stay in our house as our son.

Raghavendra became emotional.

Raghavendra:Definitely. Because I always wanted parents' love.

Jaydeep and Anuraga smiled.

Anuraga hugged him again emotionally. He hugged her back.



Raghavendra was excited to meet Siya.

Raghav:I can't wait to surprise Siya by revealing my new face to her.She will be so excited.After that we will get married.I can't wait to make you my bride Siya.

Raghavendra dreamt of romancing Siya.

Ho maine tujhe kabhi kuchh kahaa thaa
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa
Are maine tujhe kabhi kuchh kahaa thaa
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa
Sadaa ke ye rishte nibhane hain sadaa




Maine tujhe kabhi kuchh kahaa thaa
Jo bhi kaha wo kiyaa haan
Sadaa ke ye rishte nibhane hain sadaa
Maine tujhe haan kabhi kuchh kahaa thaa
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa


(Thank u Salley for the beautiful edit).



Dulhaa banunga main baajaa bajega
Dulhan banegi tu mandap sajega
Duulhaa banunga
Baajaa bajega
Dulhan banegi tu mandap sajegaa
Phir tu meri mang yoon bharegaa
Ho jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa
Sadaa ke ye rishte nibhane hain sadaa
Maine tujhe kabhi kuchh kahaa thaa
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa

Phoolon ki sej pe do dil milenge
Mahakegi zindagi sapane khilenge
Phoolon ki sej pe
Do dil milenge
Mahakegi zindagi sapane khilenge
Har daur mein apana pyaar hansega
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa
Sadaa ke ye rishte nibhane hain sadaa
Maine tujhe kabhi kuchh kahaa thaa
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa

Aa… Aa… Aa…
Apanaa to mel hai sadiyon puranaa
Judaa kar sakega na hamako zamana
Apanaa to mel hai sadiyon puranaa
Judaa kar sakega na hamako zamana
Main hoon teri tu bhi meraa rahegaa
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa
Sadaa ke ye rishte nibhane hain sadaa
Maine tujhe kabhi kuchh kahaa thaa
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa
Jo bhi kahaa wo kiyaa
Aa… Aa… Aa…

.(Yeh vaada raha).



Jaydeep Raghavendra and Alakha got shocked to hear the marriage announcement of Siya and Rudra.Raghavendra was shattered.

Alakha:I will tell Siya that you are Raghavendra.

Raghavendra:What's the use of telling her that when she moved on fast forgetting me?Don't tell her that I am Raghavendra. Tell her that I am Raghav Jindal.After all I look like your cousin Raghav.Right?

Alakha nodded sadly.

Raghavendra:Now onwards I am Raghav.Raghavendra has died mentally.

Jaydeep and Alakha felt sad for him.

When Rudra sang for Siya,Raghav was burning with jealousy.



Present....

Alakha:Siya has not forgotten you Raghav.

That's why she wants to hear your voice.

Raghav:Then why she agreed to marry Rudra?

Alakha:What if her parents forced her?She pressurised you to marry her before the accident fearing that her dad will not let her marry you.Right?

Raghav:Yes.So she was forced to agree for the marriage?

Alakha:Maybe.You tell her that you are Raghavendra.

Raghav:I can't reveal it to her until I feel that I should tell her.

Alakha:Okay.Your wish.


I dedicate this SS to my dearest friend Salley who wants me to write a story on plastic surgery with Gaurav Bajaj/Dheeraj Dhoopar playing Raghav and Amandeep as Siya.


Edited by jasminerahul - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
#33

Part 4

Fabulous Update

Certainly Siya has not forgotten Raghav

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Posted: 2 months ago
#34

thanks for the pm

Part 4

Majestic update... finely written

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Posted: 2 months ago
#35

Wow so he is really the same person....and her heart recognised himsmiley27

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Posted: 2 months ago
#36

Beautiful update dear

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 2 months ago
#37

Chapter 3
It's sad that Raghavendra couldn't survive the accident. Siya's dream of bidding Raghavendra was very emotional. All the pics are very nice. Poor Siya. I am surprised that Atul decided Siya's wedding alliance with Rudra without even asking her. That's very bad. Seems Rudra is genuinely interested in Siya. His dream dance with Siya was cute. Surprised to see a new entry Raghav. Alakha's question kind of makes sense. Is she attracted to the name?


Chapter 4
Raghav has the same attitude of Raghavendra. Siya's intuition has come true finally. Atul lied that Raghavendra has died. Anuraga and Jaydeep's scene with Raghavendra was nice. So Raghavendra misunderstood that Siya had moved on and accepted the alliance with Rudra. Glad that Alakha is trying to bridge the gap. Your edits are beautiful.

Edited by Sshesha - 2 months ago
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Posted: 2 months ago
#38

Are their voices really same? Electric sensation was a must.Wonder why Anuraga and Jaydeep are emotional. So Atul gave Siya the fake news ofRaghav dying, knew it. Sad for Raghav, but soon he will know the truth. Jaydeepand Anuraga accepting Raghav as their son and Jaydeep giving him his late son’sface reminded me of ek haseena thi, same thing happened there. Thanks for the dedication.Waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#39

Yes their voice is same in this ss.Anuraga and Jaydeep became emotional as the person in the photograph with them was their real son Raghav who passed away.

Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Are their voices really same? Electric sensation was a must.Wonder why Anuraga and Jaydeep are emotional. So Atul gave Siya the fake news ofRaghav dying, knew it. Sad for Raghav, but soon he will know the truth. Jaydeepand Anuraga accepting Raghav as their son and Jaydeep giving him his late son’sface reminded me of ek haseena thi, same thing happened there. Thanks for the dedication.Waiting for next, perfect pics.

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Posted: 2 months ago
#40

Is Raghav feeling anything on his side? Is it just Siya who is feeling everything?

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