Yeh vaada raha...It's a promise..RaSiya,Zorawar-Mannat SS

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Yeh vaada raha...It's a promise.. Part 1

This SS is inspired by the movie Yeh Vaada Raha.

Thank you so much my dear friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page.


A college....

 A girl went near a boy with a rose.

She:I love you Raghavendra.

Raghavendra took the rose from her.She smiled happily.

He stared at her and threw away the rose shocking her.

She:What did you do?

He stared at her and said:I hate you Siya.How many times should I tell you that?Just stay away from me.

Siya got hurt.

Siya:Why do you hate me so much?

Raghavendra:I know how rich girls like you are.I can't stand an arrogant girl like you.

Siya got frustrated.

Siya:I am rich.Is that a fault?I am short tempered.But does that make me arrogant?

Raghavendra:I saw how you slapped Varun just because he is poor.You could not tolerate him loving your friend Alakha.If you hate poor boys why do you always say 'I love you' to me.Something is fishy.

Siya:You are misunderstanding me Raghavendra.Please listen to what I want to tell.

Raghavendra:I don't want to hear anything.

Raghavendra walked away leaving Siya in pain.




Raghavendra passed by the washroom.He overheard 2 people talking.They were his college mates Varun and Alakha.

Varun:Why did you leave me Alakha?

Alakha:Don't play victim card Varun.I loved you blindly.But later I realized that you are a gold digger.That's why I broke up with you.You knew why I left you.But you tried to blackmail me with our photographs.Only Siya knew the truth.That's why she slapped you.But Raghavendra thinks that Siya slapped you because of your financial status.

Varun smirked.

Varun:So Raghavendra supports me.I will leak our photographs and tarnish your image.

Alakha was shocked.Suddenly she snatched the phone from him and tried to delete the pictures.

Raghavendra who was shocked got inside the washroom.

Varun snatched the phone from Alakha and pushed her.Her head hit the washbasin and fell down unconscious.Raghavendra was shocked.

Raghav:Varun!

Varun was shocked to see him.Raghavendra sat near Alakha and placed her head on his lap.

Raghav:I did a big mistake by believing you and misunderstanding Siya.You are so cruel.

Without saying anything Varun left the room.

Siya got inside the washroom without knowing anything.She was shocked to see Alakha lying unconscious on Raghavendra's lap.

Siya:What happened to Alakha?

Raghav:Varun did this.

Siya was shocked.Raghavendra explained her everything.



Raghavendra and Siya took Alakha to the hospital.After some time Alakha regained consciousness.

Siya and Alakha hugged each other tearfully.

Siys:Don't be upset Alakha.

Alakha was crying.

Alakha:Varun!

Siya:You don't worry Alakha.We will not let Varun win.Our family friend Abhilash will help us.

Raghavendra:I will also support you both to defeat Varun.

They were surprised.

Raghavendra:Yes.Now only I came to know Varun's true colour.I am sorry Siya for misunderstanding you and hurting you.

Siya was stunned as Raghavendra apologized to her.

Raghav:Please forgive me.

Siya became emotional.

Siya:I have already forgiven you Raghavendra.

He became emotional.





Raghavendra and Siya visited Varun's house with the police officer Abhilash.Varun was shocked.

Siya:You thought we will sit simply being scared of you?

Abhilash punched him and asked:You will blackmail a girl?How dare you?Where are the photographs?

Varun:In my phone.

Abhilash:Give me the phone.

Varun gave him the phone.He gave the phone to Siya.

Siya:Thank you Abhilash.

Siya deleted all the pictures and threw it away.

Varun got arrested.

Siya looked at Raghavendra

Siya:Thank you Raghavendra for your support.

Raghav:I will be there for you whenever you need me.

Siya smiled with surprise.

Raghavendra extended his hand towards:Shall we be friends?

Siya could not believe it.

She got excited:Yes..sure.

She held his hand.They smiled at each other.




After some months....

Now Raghavendra and Siya are very good friends.Raghavendra took Siya to a place which was decorated with lights.

Raghav:I cannot afford such expensive decoration.But still with Alakha's help I managed to do it.

Siya was surprised 

Siya:But Alakha did not tell me anything.

Raghav:Because we both wanted to surprise you. Alakha is the one who knows our bond very well.

Siya:It is a nice surprise. 

Raghav:The real surprise is not this.

Siya:Then what?

Raghav:Siya...you proposed me many times.But I kept rejecting your proposal.But now I am proposing you.Will you be my life partner?

Siya could not believe her ears.

Siya:What?

Raghav:After knowing your beautiful mind I have started loving you Siya.

Siya smiled emotionally.

Raghav extended his hand towards her and asked her:Do you still love me?

Siya replied emotionally holding his hand:I have only loved you Raghavendra and I will always love you.

They both smiled happily and embraced each other.




Raghavendra and Siya's love blossomed.

They enjoyed being in love with each other.



La la la la la la
Too too hai wohee dil ne jise apna kaha
Too hai jaha mai hu vaha
Abb toh yeh jina tere bin hai saja
O mil jaaye iss tarah do lehare jis tarah
O mil jaaye iss tarah do lehare jis tarah
Phir ho naa juda ha yeh vaada raha
La la la la la la la la la la

Mai aawaj hu toh too hai git meraa
Mai aawaj hu toh too hai git meraa
Jaha se niraala manmit meraa
Mil jaaye iss tarah do lehre jis tarah
O mil jaaye iss tarah do lehre jis tarah
Phir ho naa juda ha yeh vaada raha
Too too hai wohee dil ne jise apna kaha
Too hai jaha mai hu vaha
Abb toh yeh jina tere bin hai saja



Kisee mod pe bhee naa yeh saath tute
Mere haath se teraa daaman naa chhute


La la la la la la la la
Kabhee khwaab me bhee too mujhase naa ruthe
Mere pyaar kee koyee khushiya naa lute
Ho mil jaaye iss tarah do lehare jis tarah
Phir ho naa juda ha yeh vaada raha
Too too hai wohee dil ne jisse apna kaha
Too hai jaha mai hu vaha
Abb toh yeh jina tere bin hai saja

Tujhe mai jaha kee najar se chura lu
Kahee dil ke kone me tujhako chhupa lu
Kabhee jindagee me pade mushkile toh
Mujhe too sambhaale tujhe mai sambhaalu
O mil jaaye iss tarah, do lehare jis tarah
O mil jaaye iss tarah, do lehare jis tarah
Phir ho naa juda ha yeh vaada raha


Too too hai wohee dil ne jise apna kaha
Too hai jaha mai hu vaha
Abb toh yeh jina tere bin hai saja
Ho la la la la la la


Phir ho naa juda ha yeh vaada raha
Yeh vaada raha.(Yeh Vaada Raha).


Edited by jasminerahul - 10 days ago

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Posted: 10 days ago
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Raghavendra rejecting Siya was shocking. Varun threatening Alakhawas so shameless of him, good that the truth came in front of Raghavendra, Varunhitting Alakha and she going unconscious was sad. Glad that Raghav apologized andshe forgave him. Finally Varun got arrested and RaSiya became frnds. Raghav surprisingSiya and proposing her and she accepting him was very much expected. Song at theend was very nice, perfect pics, waiting for next 

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Posted: 10 days ago
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Wow i had completely forgotten about this couple...I loved Zoravar and Mannatsmiley27

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Posted: 10 days ago
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Raghavendra judged Siya without listening to her fully. He should have given her a chance to explain.

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At least Raghavendra knows the truth now and he will support the girls against Varun.

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Beautiful update dear πŸ™‚ 

Amazing start dear 😍 

Just loved it πŸ€— 

Thanks for the PM ☺️ 

Continue soon πŸ€— 

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Awesome start, it was sad when raghav misunderstood siya but glad that he realized the truth after overhearing varun blackmailing alakha. Glad that siya with her police friend deleted the photos and got him arrested. Surprising that raghav become her friend and then proposed her. Their romance sequence was so cool and romantic. Waiting for the next chapter.
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Thanks for the pm


Part 1

Amazing update... well written 

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Part 1


Amazing Update

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Salley

Coderlady

Kavithawrites

MochaQueen

GOLDIE ABROL 

 Taahir

khwaishfan

 

Thank you so much for the lovely comments





Yeh vaada raha...It's a promise.. Part 2

Siya took Raghavendra to her house to meet her parents Atul and Vedika.

Siya:Mom....dad....meet my friend Raghavendra.

Raghavendra:Namaste uncle and aunty.

Atul and Vedika became dull.

Raghavendra tried to touch Atul's feet for his blessings.But he moved backward quietly.Siya and Raghavendra felt bad.

Atul:Siya...now you are only in college.Focus on your studies.I have an important meeting.So bye.

Without even looking at Raghavendra,he walked away.

Raghavendra tried to touch Vedika's feet.But she didn't touch his head.She looked at Siya.

Vedika:Your friend came here for the first time.So have tea and go.

She ordered the maid to give him tea and walked away.

Raghavendra felt sad.

Raghavendra:Guess your parents did not like me.

Siya felt sad.

Siya:Don't worry Raghavendra. There is nothing like that.It's just that they don't want me to lose my concentration on studies because of a relationship. You watch and see.After our college gets over,they will accept you wholeheartedly. 

Raghavendra smiled.






Siya and Raghavendra went to the temple and prayed.

Siya:What did you pray Raghavendra?

Raghavendra said emotionally:I prayed to keep us together forever and never get us separated. 

Siya smiled.

Siya said with a blush on her face:I prayed to unite us through a beautiful wedding ceremony.

Raghavendra blushed.





Raghavendra and Siya completed their college.




Siya was sitting with her parents.

Siya:That day I introduced Raghavendra to you both.But why you both are not asking me anything regarding it?

Atul:Because we know that he is not just your friend,but your lover. 

Siya:Yes.Raghavendra is my lover.

Atul:I had enquired about Raghavendra and came to know that he is an orphan.

Siya:I know that already.

Atul:I can't get you married to an orphan.If my daughter marries an orphan it will harm my reputation in the society.

Siya:Dad,you care about the society more than my happiness?

Atul:You are misunderstanding me Siya.Raghavendra doesn't suit our status.

Siya:What status dad?Does status decide relationships?I don't care about the society. 

Vedika said painfully:Listen to your dad Siya.That will be better.

Siya got frustrated and burst out:I will marry only Raghavendra. 

Atul and Vedika became dull.





Siya met Raghavendra. 

Siya:Raghavendra,let us get married soon.

Raghavendra was shocked. 

Raghavendra:What are you saying Siya?I didn't even get a job yet.

Siya:But we need to get married soon.Because my family is against our relationship. So if we don't get married soon,dad will not let that happen.

Raghavendra became upset.

Raghavendra:We can't get married without your parents' permission. 

Siya:Raghavendra..please try to understand. 

He became upset.He was in a dilemma.





The next day...

Siya met Raghavendra again.

Siya:Raghavendra,did you think of what I said?

Will you marry me?

Raghavendra replied:I thought about it a lot.

He looked at her deeply and said:I cannot lose you.So...yes Siya.We will get married.

Siya became very happy.

Siya:Let us go to the temple and get married.

Raghavendra smiled:Yes.

They both were excited.





Raghavendra and Siya started dreaming of a happy romantic life with each other.

They imagined their wedding.



Aisa kabhee huwa nahee
Jo bhee huwa khub huwa
Aisa kabhee huwa nahee

 Siya gave a bouquet of roses to Raghavendra and surprised him.


(Thank you Salley for the lovely edit).


Jo bhee huwa khub huwa
Dekhate hee tujhe hosh gum huye
Hosh aaya toh dil meraa dil naa raha
Aisa kabhee huwa nahee
Jo bhee huwa khub huwa



Raghavendra placed a necklace around Siya's neck.



 


Reshamee julfe hain saavan kee ghataao jaisee
Palake hain teree ghane ped kee chhaanv jaisee
Bholaapan aur hansee aafreen aafreen
Aisa kabhee huwa nahee
Jo bhee huwa khub huwa



They had a romantic dance with each other.




Dekhate hee tujhe hosh gum huye
Hosh aaya toh dil meraa dil naa raha


Aisa kabhee huwa nahee
Jo bhee huwa khub huwa

Jheel see aankho me mastee ke jaam lehraaye

Jab honth khule tere sargam baaje mehake fijaaye


Har ada dil nashee aafreen aafreen
Aisa kabhee huwa nahee


Jo bhee huwa khub huwa
Dekhate hee tujhe hosh gum huye
Hosh aaya toh dil meraa dil naa raha



Aisa kabhee huwa nahee
Jo bhee huwa khub huwa



Patalee see gardan me ek bal hai surahee jaisa
Andaaj matakane kaa dekha naa kisee ne aisa


Gulbadan naajanin aafreen aafreen
Aisa kabhee huwa nahee


Jo bhee huwa khub huwa
Dekhate hee tujhe hosh gum huye


Siya is pregnant.Raghavendra and Siya played with a doll considering it as their baby for fun.


Hosh aaya toh dil meraa dil naa raha
Aisa kabhee huwa nahee
Jo bhee huwa khub huwa.

(Yeh vaada raha).


Raghavendra and Siya were travelling in the bike to go to the temple to get married.On the way unexpectedly a car hit their vehicle and they met with a terrible accident.


Edited by jasminerahul - 5 days ago
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