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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anirudh was arranging bondita's book...


Bondita:patibabu aapse ek baat puchhu?


Anirudh:ha puchho bondita...


Bondita: hamne jo photu li thi kya me vo le ja sakti hu?


Anirudh(laugh at her):bonditaa use puchhna nai mangna kahte he n vo photu aapki he to aap le ja sakti he ...


Bondita(clap in excitement):dhanyavad patibabu ...me abb sabko apna photu dikhaugj... 


She was so exited tht she can take her photo n will be able to show tht to her frnds...she started her talk n ani was listening carefully watever she wS saying....its childish talk but her talk is most important for him...it became routine for him..he will arrange her books in bag n she talk to him about her whole day....n suddenly one book fell down...Ani looked at tht book...there is one photo...it was boy..boy age of bondita...Ani feel something different seeing tht photo...


Ani: bondita ye kiski photo he ?


Bondita:ohho to ye yaha he me kabse dhundh rahi thi ise....


Ani:kon he ye?


Bondita:ye mihir he...batuk ki kaksha me padhta he...aur ye hi muje chidha raha tha ki mere pass photu nai he isliye me le ja ri thi photu use dikhane...ki mere pass b he photu 


Anirudh: achhaa,kesa he vo?


Bondita: bht badmas he mihir ...apako pata he meri choti b khinch leta he...aur pata he bol rhaa tha ki vo meri photu b le lega...aur mera tafan b kha jata he kabhi....meri bht ladai ho jati he aur aapko pata he...


Anirudh:achha tumhara photo kyu lega vo...


Bondita:muje kya pata unhone bola unhe chahie ..

anirudh:achha..


Bondita: badmash karta he thoda par achhha b he...pata he meri sahayata b ki thi....me ek baar gir gayi thi to muje bachaya b tha..aur pata he muje baki sab se b bachata he... aur ek baar muje homework me b sahayata ki thi...aur gir gayi thi to hath pakdke...



It was enough for Anirudh...he can't listen more of mihir ....he just keep her book 


Ani: ese ladko se dur raha karo bondita?


Bondita:ese mtlb kese patibabu..


Ani: ese mtlb ese masti karne walo se ..badmash ladko se....n koi nai jarurt photo le jane ki...


Bondita(she laught at him):par usko to me jyada pareshan karti hu aur me to usko ....


ANI: na bola na bondita....n he snatch her photo tht he give to her...


N he just leave d room...n went too terrace...


Anirudh was holding her photo ...his wife's photo....why ?why he feel something when she said tht boy want too keep her photo with himself...why he feel irritated when his wife said tht boy pull her choti n play prank on her....its something strange tht happened to him....he didn't like when bondita said uski help b karta he...bchata b he ...kese ??bondita ko bachane ka haq to sirf Anirudh Roy chaudhari ka he na....uska hath pakdne ka haq b sirf uska he...ese kese koi hath pakde uska...



Anirudh himself doesn't understand why there is sudden pain  when he listen about tht mihir...he looked at bondita's photo which he snached away from her...he was sorry for tht but he can't afford to give her wife's photo to someone....he look at photo...


Ani:ese kese tumhe kisi aur ke pass jane du bondita ..ye aanke dekhi he  itni khubsurat he ...jhil se aankhe he tunhari ...jo b dekhe isme dub jaye bondita.....ye pyari si muskurahat jo har gam bhula deti he ...ye naak jo haste samay sikud jata he aur tumhe aur pyara banata he...ye gaal tumhare ...jo rosogulle kha kha ke uske jese hi ho gaye he....ye pyare hath jo he to chhote pr jab b taklif ho ese hath tham lete he mera ki ek himmat aa jati he..


He laugh at his own words....he was thinking about bondita ...n it make him think about his past...


Ani:mere sath mini b to thi...par mene uske liye kyu ye kabhi mahesus nai kiya...kyu kabhi vo itni khubsurat nai lagi...kyu kabhi uske liye esa nai socha aur aaj bondita ke liye...aaj jo mahesus kiya vo kabhi nai maesus kiya mene mini ke sath...jo sukun muje bondita deti he jab vo pass hoti he vo mene kabhi nai jana mini ke sath...jo rahat milti he jo ek apnapan lagta he vo muje kabhi mahesus nai hua...


Par aaj jo ek kisi ladke ki photo dekhke muje hua vo kya tha .. .kya muje jalan hui??ki vo bondita ka dost he aur uske sath rahta he...."anirudh Roy chaudhari tum ese 14 saal ke ladke se kese jal sakte ho ...jo ki sirf ek dost he tumhri patni  ka.... n pahle to ye jalan kyu....mini ke b dost the na unse to kabhi nai hui jalan...na esa kabhi socha ....to aaj kyu...aaj kyu esa lag rhaa he jese bondita ko chhupa lu apne pass...us ladke ki baat hui to jalan hui..esa kyu laga ki jese kisi ne dil pe sui laga di ..dil me ye tadap kyu.....man bechen kyu hua... Ashant kyu hua me..esa kyu laga ki vo dur chali jayegi...dar kyu gaya me.. ...esa kyu lagta he ki uski pyari baate sirf me sunu ....use apne pass rakhne ko man kyu karta he...use dkehke khush kyu hota hu...kyu use har ek drd se dur rakhna chahta hu...kyu use duniya ki sari khushiya dena chahta hu..kyu uske chhote se hath ko apne hath me leke sari muskil se use dur le jana chahta hu......kyu uske sath apni jindgi bitana chahta hu....


Ye sirf jimmedari to nai he ....


To


kya ise pyar kahte he? 


He looked at her photo....


"Bondita tumhe pata b nai he aur tum apne patibabu ko ulzano me daal ri ho....aur ye ulzan b itni pyari he ki use sulza ne ka koi man ni he mra"


He smiled at her photo...but name of mihir came in his mind n his jealousy stared flowing from his eyes...


Downstair


Bondita: ye patibabu b kaha chale gaye....pata nai kya ho gyaa ...photu b le gaye...abb me mihir bhaiyaa ko kya bolugi? Abb vo firse chidayege...firse buddhu bolege muje aur ye batuk apni kitabe apne dosto ki photu mere bag me rakh deta he to uthana na pade use...chhodugi nai me batuk ko......n she frown her face...she don't have any idea how her husband is frowning in jealousy tht too without any reason😛.


P.S: no proof reading ..bas nind nai aa ri iske liye likh diya ..no juta chappal,tamatr anything...😂n thanks in advance...


Other work:

1)patni ho tum meri :os

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5210774

2)can't lose you:os

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5212039

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hiii buddy! 🤗 

very sweet OS. Loved the concept. 👍🏼❤️ Pati babu ko prem hogaya hai. 😛😆 

It was very sweetly written and I loved Aniruddh's monologue. Bechare ko samajh hi nahi aarhy ke kia hua, kyun hua, kaise hua, kab hua? 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Hiii buddy! 🤗 

very sweet OS. Loved the concept. 👍🏼❤️ Pati babu ko prem hogaya hai. 😛😆 

It was very sweetly written and I loved Aniruddh's monologue. Bechare ko samajh hi nahi aarhy ke kia hua, kyun hua, kaise hua, kab hua? 😆

😆😆thank you ....show me b bas patibabu ko prem ho usi ka wait he..

It feel so good when someone do comment...it means a lot...😳achha lagta he  ....thank you buddy 🤗🤗 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Very cute ,veryyy cute😳❤️

I want exactly this to happen in the show as well😆

Keep writing love❤️

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Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Very cute ,veryyy cute😳❤️

I want exactly this to happen in the show as well😆

Keep writing love❤️


Me too want ki bht hua atyachar abb bondita ko nyay milna chahie aur ani jalna chahie bht nai par thoda to ..🤣

Thank you🤗🤗ur comment means alot...😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nany


Me too want ki bht hua atyachar abb bondita ko nyay milna chahie aur ani jalna chahie bht nai par thoda to ..🤣

Thank you🤗🤗ur comment means alot...😳

Welcome Nany🤗😆

We are so partial no?We want a partner for Bon but can't stand it when the same happens with her patibabu🤣😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was very sweet bhakti 😳

Loved Jealous Ani 😆

Isko continue karo 

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Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Welcome Nany🤗😆

We are so partial no?We want a partner for Bon but can't stand it when the same happens with her patibabu🤣😆

🤣haa...thts our love for her patibabu...🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

It was very sweet bhakti 😳

Loved Jealous Ani 😆

Isko continue karo 

Thank you rimi...continue ka to pata nai ...bht lazy hu me 😆...isliye to bas OS hi likhti hu...thank you 😊 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nany

🤣haa...thts our love for her patibabu...🤣

He's omnipresent 🤣

All inclusive patibabu🤣humare patibabu🤣

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