Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: jojyu

Hayeeeeeee... i got lost while reading this os ❤️

what an amazing piece of work dear. the way you have described their feelings superbbbb. the dance, eye locks and then the hug ❤️  loved their cute nok jok even at the end the cute nok jhok over the rosogulla was so cute. 

Waiting for the next chapter of this os. post soon please. 

Hayeeeee sachi?😆😆

Thank you so much jojyu

That nok jhok part was interesting nahi?😆

So glad that you are enjoying this❤️

Will try to update next one really soon😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Thank you Javeria❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: rikara94


Thank you so much dear🤗

Aww busy bee😆 hope abhi complete ho gye ho sare projects😳

@bold- kya baat hai kya baat hai sahi😆

Will update soon..stay tuned!

Ha yaar ho gaya complete sab.

But I'm in boiling hot soup😭

12th se offline classes aur exams 😭😭Update karte raho ,varna depression mein chali gayi toh😲.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Ha yaar ho gaya complete sab.

But I'm in boiling hot soup😭

12th se offline classes aur exams 😭😭Update karte raho ,varna depression mein chali gayi toh😲.

Don't worry nahi jayogi depression mein😆😆

I will try to update tomorrow otherwise sunday pakka😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: rikara94

Don't worry nahi jayogi depression mein😆😆

I will try to update tomorrow otherwise sunday pakka😳

Thank you yaar❤️Haa kitni acchi ho tum Jyoti! Love you unlimited😆😳🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

It's really innovative ... The addition of the lyrics of amazing songs to the awesome os on ruddhita is really creative dude.... And I felt awesome to read these 😃...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blackrose92

It's really innovative ... The addition of the lyrics of amazing songs to the awesome os on ruddhita is really creative dude.... And I felt awesome to read these 😃...

Thank you so much dear❤️Stay tuned, next OS is on the way😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Dekha hazaro dafa aapko 


Amazing work jyoti 👏 Bon's birthday surprise idea was very cute  And how Ani was hiding it initially and Bon was gussa 🤪 loved it 🤪

The birthday scenes and song was penned beautifully  You express the emotions really well in details 👍🏼 

Good job 🤗



Kuchh Iss tarah 


This is one of my most favorite songs  It's lyrics are so emotional and heart touching  I always imagined Anirudh singing this whenever Bon was sad 😭 And your penned that song down in an OS 🤗❤️


Poor Bon got molested  It's really a terrible feeling and loved how you expressed her disgust👏

Ani ka jawaab nahi in taking care of her Loved how he helped her to understand everything 👏 


While reading i already I thought he should touch her and ask if his touch bothers her as well.. aur tune likha bhi  very nice 


I loved how he hugged and kissed her on the hair a little  awwwww❤️


Loved it Jyoti 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Lol😆 

Btw did you read Dekha Hazaro dafa?🤪