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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 3

Shlok and Gauri's wedding took place in a romantic way. Shlok seeing Gauri in a nightgown and questioning her was shocking. Shlok telling Gauri that her comfort is more important means that Shlok is understanding. Omkara gifted a saree to Asha. Ashkara's intimacy scenes are bold. Asha telling Omkara that she loves Shlok is shocking. Shlok is already married to Gauri. Waiting to know what will happen in the next chapter.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank u very much friends


Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 4

I dedicate this chapter to Vatika who gave jodi names to Asha-Omkara as AshKara and Shlok-Gauri as RiLok.



Omkara rings up Asha:Asha..
Asha:Omkara....You forgave me?




OMKARA:I want to meet you.We will talk later.


He cuts the phone.

Omkara and Asha meet each other.
Asha:Omkara!

 Unexpectedly with anger he pulls her towards him.
OMKARA:You want to know whether I have forgiven you.Right?

Listen..I can't forgive you.I am going to reveal the truth to others.


Asha is shocked:What?
OMKARA:I am going to reveal it to Shlok and Gauri.I will tell them that you rejected me as you love Shlok.You will also come with me to tell them the truth.
Asha:No..
OMKARA:Why not?
Asha:Please Omkara..don't do that.Gauri should never know this.If Shlok comes to know this,their married life itself will be in danger.Why don't you understand that?Do you want to put your own brother's marriage life in risk?

 

Omkara:No need of any emotional blackmailing to hide your true feelings from others Asha.Shlok and Gauri’s married life will not be affected by your truth as their love is very strong.Gauri’s love for Shlok is  not fake like the love you faked to me before Shlok and Gauri’s marriage.Others should know your true colour.
Asha:Omkara please..i told you.I did'nt do this intentionally.Love happens unknowingly.It's not an emotion which can be controlled.
OMKARA:Yes.Love is not an emotion which can be controlled.So I still love you.
She is shocked:Omkara!
He pulls her towards him rudely:But at the same time I hate you.Because you cheated on me.
He grabs her hand and walks to his house.
Asha:Omkara..please..
Her words fall on his deaf ears.
They reach Omkara's house.Shlok and Gauri come.They smile at them.
SHLOK:Omkara and Asha..good thing that our parents are not here.Mom thinks that her daughter in law should not enter this house before grahpravesh.
OMKARA:Daughter in law?Asha?How do you know that Asha will be her daughter in law?
Shlok and Gauri are confused.
SHLOK:What are you saying Omkara?
OMKARA:What if Asha rejects me before marriage?
Asha sweats due to tension.Shlok and Gauri are petrified.
GAURI:What is the matter?




OMKARA:There is a big problem between us.
Gauri is tense:What is the problem?
Asha is so nervous that she can't even look at others.Omkara stares at her.

Slowly Omkara smiles and his smile turns to laughter.
OMKARA:I was just kidding.Just to scare you both.Today is fool's day.
Shlok and Gauri also laugh.
SHLOK:Fool's day..you really made us fools.Very funny.But stupid terrible joke.

Gauri:You really scared us.But we take it as a joke now.


Asha is relieved.
Omkara stares at Asha.She is scared.

Gauri and Asha are in Gauri's room.
GAURI:Is everything alright between you and Omkara?


Asha:Don't worry.Everything is fine between us.


GAURI:Are you sure?
Asha:Yes.
GAURI:I really got scared when Omkara talked like that.When he said he was fooling us only i got relieved.Still i fear.
Asha:Nothing to worry about.
Gauri smiles:I want you to be happy with Omkara.I am sure that Omkara will make you happy.

Asha smiles:Omkara loves me like crazy.

Gauri smiles.



Omkara is sitting outside.Asha goes near him.
Asha:Thanks.for not telling them the truth.
Omkara stands up.
OMKARA:Do you know why I did'nt tell them the truth?
She is silent.



Omkara cups her face in his hands.

OMKARA:Because I love you.So I don't want to spoil your image.

Asha moves away tearfully.

Asha:Please Omkara….no…I told you..I don’t like this.I don’t love you.
Suddenly he bursts into tears.
OMKARA:Why don’t you love me Asha?Am I that bad?
Asha feels sad.


Tears roll down her cheeks:No Omkara.You are really good.Your love is too much for me.I don’t deserve your love.Because though you love me a lot,I love some one else.But I will try to be a good wife.But I can’t forget  Shlok. I am sorry Omkara.

Asha goes away leaving Omkara in tears.

 Shlok,Gauri,Omkara and Asha go for a party.

Shlok and Gauri dance.





Dil ne chuna hai
Raahon mein nazaron mein tumhe tumhe
Main chahta hoon
Sau dafa hazaron mein tumhe tumhe

Tujhko khuda ne aise tarasha
Jaise gulon se hai shaakhe
Tu hans pade toh chalti hawayein
Teri nami se barsatein

Main chaand se teri haan teri
Tareefein karta hoon bas teri
Jiski badolat hai duniya meri
Tum ho na tum ho na
Tum ho na woh…

Ab tere haathon se
Lipti hai takdeerein yeh meri haan meri
Dil mera woh ghar hai
Jispe hai tasveerin ab teri haan teri
Bas mohabbat se
Ik baar haq se kehdo toh hum marjaye
Tum zaroorat se bhi ho zaroori
Kaise juda reh paaye


Tum ho na tum ho na
Tum ho na woh tum ho na

Darr kaisa jab main hoon
Kyun rehte ho khoye se kaho haan kaho
Yeh sach hai jo bhi hain
Khud haathon se chhun kar dekh lo dekh lo
Mujhpe bharosa karlo zara sa

Aur kuchh nahi hum chahe



Gauri sees Asha and Omkara simply standing there.Gauri goes near Omkara:Hey..why you both are not dancing?Usually Asha loves dancing at parties.Today what happened?
Asha just smiles.
GAURI:Omkara..dance with my sister.
Omkara smiles..Asha looks at Omkara with discomfort.
He keeps his hands on her shoulders to dance.She is nervous.
He holds her hands tightly

and dances.

Tere liye jo lamha ruka hai
Aa saath mein le jaye
Do hi kadam pe hai manzile
Phir aur humko kya chahiye
Tere liye main hoon mere liye
Tum ho na tum ho na
Tum ho na woh tum ho na

I see you standing watching over me
Tum ho na tum ho na

Watching over me
Watching over me

I see you standing
Watching over me
Tum ho na tum ho na woh
I see you standing
Watching over me
Tum ho na tum ho na woh


So lets just find a way
Please don’t walk away
I just cant wait no more

So lets just find a way
Please don’t walk away
I am still holding on
I see you standing
Watching over me
I see you standing
Watching over me(OppoF5 Song).



Gauri smiles seeing them dance.
GAURI:Shlok..I feel very happy seeing Asha with Omkara.
Shlok smiles:They are perfect for each other.
Gauri smiles:Yes,like we are perfect for each other.


Asha is uncomfortable while dancing with Omkara.Omkara understands that and he feels sad about that.

He removes his hand from her understanding her discomfort.

Asha was relieved.

Omkara goes to the washroom and cried.

OMKARA:What a fate God!

Asha goes there.Seeing her Omkara gets angry.

OMKARA:You don't even want to dance with me.Right?Why are you so rude to me Asha?

She was upset and helpless.

OMKARA:Is it because you love Shlok?Then understand...you are only mine.

She is shocked:Omkara!

OMKARA:Yes Asha.It’s Gauri wo is meant for Shlok,not you.You better understand that.You are made for me.So don’t think that you can move away from me.

Asha:Omkara!

Omkara:Even if you try to go away from me,I will not let that happen.Because I'm madly in love with you.In other words I'm obsessed with you.

Asha is stunned:Omkara!

Her eyes are full of tears.He walks away.She is upset.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Correction

Her words fall in his ***deaf*** ears

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Omkara not telling anyone the truth in order to protect Asha's image was striking

But why have you kept her name Asha? It was Aastha in ipkknd2

Dance was nice

RiLok thinks AshKara are perfect for each other not being aware of the truth

Omkara crying over his fate was sad

continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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thanks for the pm.

nice update.... 

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Sorry for late response 



I almost felt as if Omkara was not ready to hear the truth

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Shocking that Omkara got obsessed with Asha's love after getting rejected. Rilok dance scenes are romantic. When Omkara dragged Asha, I thought he would reveal the truth but he didn't do that. Omkara telling Asha that she is only made for him is shocking. Waiting to know how ashlok and rikara will unite.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Part 2 



Was simply Amazing 

Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 2 



Was simply Amazing 


amen!

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Yes i know its its deaf ears.By mistake I typed D instead of F.But it should on deaf ears,not in deaf ears


Originally posted by: salley145

Correction

Her words fall in his ***deaf*** ears