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Shlok, Gauri, and Omkara met Kabir. Gauri apologizing to Kabir was sensational. Glad that Kabir happily forgave her. Asha picked up Arush from school. I guess Asha was guilty that's why she could not face Shlok. Glad that Kabir dispelled Shlok's doubt & reunited him with Asha & Arush. The bonding between Gauri and Arush was sweet. Loved the family reunion.

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awesome update.. well written 

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Part 21


Fascinating Update


Kabir is such a wonderful person 

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Thank u so much 4 supporting me in this long journey.Please write a detailed comment on the last part.plz write your favourite scene,favourite jodi,favourite character n why you liked that character.

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Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 22

Holi....

Gauri and Asha dress up alike.

Asha:Earlier our similar look created a lot of confusions.Let us see them getting confused again.

They both giggle.

Shlok-Omkara came.They were stunned seeing their similar dressing.

Omkara:What the hell!

Asha:Can you recognize us?

Omkara:Sure.

Gauri:This time you can't guess who your woman is.Because we both are completely alike.

Omkara:I am not the same Omkara now.Now I know my Gauri very well and I can't make a mistake n recognizing her.

Gauri smiles.

Asha challenges him:Really?Then identify us.

Omkara stands between Gauri and Asha.

Slowly he turns his face closer to Gauri's.He looks at her eyes deeply.

Omkara:I can recognize you my baby doll.

Jo na keh sake tum
Jo na keh sake hum (x2)

Asha-Gauri are surprised.

He colours her passionately.

Kehne lagi dono se woh
Khamoshiyaan.. O saathiya

Omkara pulls her closer and embraces her from behind:Because when I stand near you itself I can feel your breath.

Looking at him she takes a long breath.Kehne lagi dono se woh
Khamoshiyaan.. O saathiya

He colours her face more and more with passionate love.Saathiya saathiya
Saathiya saathiya (x2)

Omkara cups her face in his hands:I told you yesterday that I was waiting to colour you.I fulfilled my own wish.

She looks at his eyes.

Gauri:You fulfilled my wish too Omkara.

Baadlon mein
Ghul na jaayein
Hain jo naghme thehre thehre
Do dilon mein jazb karle
Saare jazbe gehre gehre

She rubs her face on his face.

Kal kya pata milna miley
Nazdeekiyaan o saathiya
Kal kya pata milna miley
Nazdeekiyaan o saathiya

They get lost in each other.

Saathiya saathiya
Saathiya saathiya.. (x2)(IB)

Asha gets ready in a saree and goes  near Shlok.

Shlok can't take his eyes off her.

sajna ve.... sajna ve.....

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon

They share a beautiful eye lock.

Chupke se ahista
ho raha hoon lapata

She takes colour powder and puts all over his face with a giggle.

Asha:Shlok...hope you are not irritated as you don't like such craziness.

Without saying anything he holds her closer.

They share a passionate eye lock.

uljha sawaalo mein ab teri
hai khayalon mein

 

Slowly he puts  colour on her face with burning passion.

kaisi yeh chahat hai
roke yeh na ruke ek pal nah raahat hai,
dhadkan gawaa chuke

Shlok-Asha look at each other passionately.

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Khoye hai kuch alfaaz kyun

Shlok:I am not irritated even a bit Asha.Because you only coloured me and only you can colour my life.

They keep looking at each other sweetly.

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
kya naam doon kya naam doon(IPKKND EBF).

Arush smiles seeing it.

Arush:Hey...mumma papa playing holi.

Shlok-Asha smile at him.

Shlok Asha smear  colour on Arush's cheeks and wish him:Happy Holi Arush.

Arush:Happy Holi mumma papa.Asha:Ok Shlok....have a drink.

Shlok:No Asha.I don't want bhaang.You know that I don't drink.

Asha:Don't over react.Relax.This is not bhaang.It is a sweet holi special drink prepared by me.Suman aunty taught me to make it.

Asha takes the drink

gives it to Shlok.

He starts sipping it.

Shlok:It is nice.

He drinks half.Asha grabs it from him.

Asha:The 2nd half is for me.

He smiles.She drinks it.

Kabir and Suman come for the Holi party as they are invited.

Gauri and Asha:Suman aunty ...Hi Kabir.

They touched Suman's feet.Asha hugs Suman.

Asha:I'm so happy that you both received our invitation.

Suman:How can we not come for your party Asha?

Asha smiles.

Gauri gets busy with Omkara.

Kabir:Happy Holi Asha..

Asha:Happy Holi Kabir.

Asha joins Shlok.

Kabir smiles seeing Omkara-Gauri and Shlok-Asha together.Suman feels sad for Kabir.

While walking Kabir and a girl bump into each other.

Kabir:Sorry.

She:Sorry.

Gauri:Kabir...this is Avni.Our neighbour.

Kabir:Hello...

Avni smiles:Hi...

All are playing with colours.

Suddenly they hear a  song on the back ground.

They look at others dancing. 

Asha:Shlok,today I won't leave you without dancing.

He smiles nodding his head.

She holds his hand and dances along with others.

Omkara-Gauri,Shlok-Asha,Arush-Kavya,Tej-Jhanvi,Harshwardan-Surbhi dance together.

Balam pichkari jo
Tune mujhe maari
Toh bole re zamana
Kharabi ho gayi
Mere ang raja
Jo tera rang laga
Toh seedhi saadi
Chhori sharabi ho gayi


Itna maza kyun aa raha hai
Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya
Itna maza kyun aa raha hai
Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya
Dugna nasha kyun ho raha hai
Aankhon se meetha tune khilaya


Ho teri malmal ki
Kurti gulabi ho gayi
Manchali chaal kaise
Nawaabi ho gayi toh


Balam pichkari jo
Tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi
Chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa jeans pahen ke
Jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan
Ki bhabhi ho gayi


Balam pichkari jo
Tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi
Chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa jeans pahen ke
Jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan
Ki bhabhi ho gayi


Teri kalaai hai
Haathon mein aayi hai
Maine maroda toh
Lagti malaai hai


Mehenga padega
Ye chaska malaai ka
Upvaas karne mein
Teri bhalaai hai


Ho bindiya teri
Mehtaabi ho gayi
Dil ke armaanon mein
Behisaabi ho gayi


Balam pichkari jo
Tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi chhori
Sharaabi ho gayi
Haa jeans pahen ke
Jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan
Ki bhabhi ho gayi

Balam pichkari jo
Tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi
Chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa jeans pahen ke
Jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan
Ki bhabhi ho gayi


Kyun no vacancy ki
Hothon pe gaali hai
Jabki tere dil ka
Kamra toh khaali hai
Kamra toh khaali hai


Mujhko pata hai re
Kya chahata hai tu
Boli bhajan teri
Neeyat qawwali hai


Zulmi ye haazir
Jawaabi ho gayi
Tu toh har taale ki
Aaj chaabi ho gayi toh


Balam pichkari jo
Tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi
Chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa jeans pahen ke jo
Tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan
Ki bhabhi ho gayi


Balam pichkari jo
Tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadi
Chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haa jeans pahen ke
Jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattoo padosan
Ki bhabhi ho gayi
Haan bole re zamana
Kharabi ho gayi
Haan bole re zamana
Kharabi ho gayi.
 : Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani

Avni goes near Kabir:Shall we dance?It's holi.

Kabir:Why not?

Suman sees Kabir dancing with Avni.A smile appeared on her face.

Avni  puts colour on her cheeks.

Kabir stares at her.

Avni:You didn't like it?Sorry.

He smiles slightly.

Suddenly he put colour on his face.

Avni is surprised.

 Suddenly they both burst into laughter.

Suman giggles seeing it.

She says in her mind:This is the beginning of a new friendship.Guess a girl who adores Kabir beta has entered his life.

 

After a few days….

Tej:I think ..since Shlok-Asha united after a long time they should get remarried.

Jhanvi:I also agree with this.Earlier Shlok married Asha as Gauri.This time he should marry her as Asha.

Surbhi:I also feel that they should get married again.

Harshwardhan:But why not we get Omkara and Gauri married along with them like we wanted years back?

Tej:That’s a good idea.I think we should start making arrangements for that.

They smiled.

Kavya:Wow mumma papa are getting married again?

Surbhi:Yes beta.

Arush:My mumma papa too?

Harshwardhan:Yes your mumma papa too.

Jhanvi:We will enjoy a lot.

Kavya-Arush jumped with joy:Yay....

Omkara is lost in Gauri’s beauty seeing her as a bride.

O saathiya saathiya
saathiya saathiya.. 

Omkara:You look just the same as you were years back.

Gauri blushes:You too.

O saathiya saathiya
saathiya saathiya.. 

They smile.

O saathiya saathiya
saathiya saathiya.. (IB).

Asha’s eyes are wet.Shlok becomes dull.

Shlok:What happened Asha?Why are you looking upset?

Asha:I was reminded of our first wedding which was a sin.I married you through cheating with my sister’s identity.

Shlok:If it was a sin,then it was a beautiful sin.Because of the so called sinful marriage only I got you.

Saiyaan ve ab rasta dikha de tu
Tujkho hai vaasta dua de tu

Asha-Shlok look at each other emotionally.

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon,
kya naam doon ko kya naam doon

Shlok-Asha 

and Omkara-Gauri 

get married again.Arush and Kavya are really excited.Suman and Kabir attend the function and cheer up the couples.

Tej-Jhanvi:Let these 2 beautiful couples live happily.

Surbhi:Let God save them from all evil eyes.

Shlok enters the bedroom.He smiles seeing Asha decked up.Asha looks at him emotionally.

Man ke munder pe baithaa hai gher ke
mujhko ghoore hai yeh ehsaas
Khwahishon ke lehron Mein
Roshan hui sehron mein

Shlok holds her closer:I told you that I will not allow your beautiful eyes to be wet.

dikhne laga hai ab tu khaas
kaise hai yeh kadi jo tute hi nahin
Tumse hai jaa judi eshaaron mein kahin

He pecks her forehead.She embraces him.

Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon khoye hai
kuch alfaaz kyun
Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon,
kya naam doon ko kya naam doon(IPKND EBF).

Omkara holds Gauri closer.She is blushing.

Omkara:I have a small wedding gift for you.

She smiles.

Milke tumse khush hoon lekin
Dil hai phir bhi, uljha uljha
Door kar de, paas aa kar
Kal humein na koi lamha

He gives her a gift.She unwraps the gift.She is surprised to see their cute framed photograph.

Gauri:This is so sweet Omkara.

He smiles.

Pad jaaye na, dil pe kahin
Gham ka nishaan o sathiya
Pad jaaye na, dil pe kahin
Gham ka nishaan o sathiya

They hang it on the wall together.

O saathiya saathiya
saathiya saathiya.. 

 They smile seeing the photograph on the wall.

O saathiya saathiya
saathiya saathiya.. 

They share a sweet eye lock.

O saathiya saathiya
saathiya saathiya..
 (IB).

The End

Edited by jasminerahul - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

The guys were able to recognize their ladies now.

Good to see Kabir found a girl.

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Part 17


Sad that Shlok feels that he and Asha are not destined to live together

Omkara promising Shlok to find Asha was nice

Sad that Gauri is upset

Surprised to see Saransh

Loved his and Asha's bonding

Good that Kavya saw them and called her mumma but she didn't even notice her, how will she notice

Its very nice that RiKara reached Asha through Kavya

Shlok's imagination scene was cute

Now Kabir is going to propose Asha


(I think I already commented on this part but in case I haven't, I wrote again, and even if I did, then also doesn't matters 😊)

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Good that Gauri and Om got to know about Asha through Ragini

They are so shocked

Sad that Kabir thinks that Asha loves him

Fb scene where Asha was walking like a mad lady was so sad, so nice of Kabir to be with her in her difficulty

Asha's decision of not breaking Kabir's heart was justified

Surprised that she baked the cake for him

Now RiKara saw JaBir dancing together...

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Gauri couldn't control herself and shouted at Asha and even slapped her

Suman and Kabir are right on their place

Asha is so sad

RiKara chocolate scene was nice

Now Shlok also wants to see Asha and she also wants to see him

FB scene was cute

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Good that Kabir revealed everything

Now Asha and Shlok's misunderstandings also got solved

Kabir's dialogue "love is true only when you make your beloved happy." Was very nice

Arush and Kavya scene was nice

(I miss old Saransh in YHC)

Shlok and Asha's pic with Kavya was cute

The last scene of Asha and Shlok feeding each other was nice

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Omkara identifying Gauri was a nice scene

Holi scene was nice

Romance was passionate

Shlok's dialogue "you only coloured me and only you can colour my life" was romantic

Asha and Shlok sharing the drink was cute

Nisha who?

All the jodis dancing was very nice scene

AvNeil holi scene was funny

Remarriage idea was fantastic

Marriage scenes were nice

Gift was cute

Favorite scene was Asha and Shlok reunion

Favorite character is Kabir because he supported Asha

Favorite jodi is JaBir