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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Part 3

Shlok and Gauri's wedding took place in a romantic way. Shlok seeing Gauri in a nightgown and questioning her was shocking. Shlok telling Gauri that her comfort is more important means that Shlok is understanding. Omkara gifted a saree to Asha. Ashkara's intimacy scenes are bold. Asha telling Omkara that she loves Shlok is shocking. Shlok is already married to Gauri. Waiting to know what will happen in the next chapter.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#22

Thank u very much friends


Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 4

I dedicate this chapter to Vatika who gave jodi names to Asha-Omkara as AshKara and Shlok-Gauri as RiLok.



Omkara rings up Asha:Asha..
Asha:Omkara....You forgave me?




OMKARA:I want to meet you.We will talk later.


He cuts the phone.

Omkara and Asha meet each other.
Asha:Omkara!

Unexpectedly with anger he pulls her towards him.
OMKARA:You want to know whether I have forgiven you.Right?

Listen..I can't forgive you.I am going to reveal the truth to others.


Asha is shocked:What?
OMKARA:I am going to reveal it to Shlok and Gauri.I will tell them that you rejected me as you love Shlok.You will also come with me to tell them the truth.
Asha:No..
OMKARA:Why not?
Asha:Please Omkara..don't do that.Gauri should never know this.If Shlok comes to know this,their married life itself will be in danger.Why don't you understand that?Do you want to put your own brother's marriage life in risk?

Omkara:No need of any emotional blackmailing to hide your true feelings from others Asha.Shlok and Gauri’s married life will not be affected by your truth as their love is very strong.Gauri’s love for Shlok is not fake like the love you faked to me before Shlok and Gauri’s marriage.Others should know your true colour.
Asha:Omkara please..i told you.I did'nt do this intentionally.Love happens unknowingly.It's not an emotion which can be controlled.
OMKARA:Yes.Love is not an emotion which can be controlled.So I still love you.
She is shocked:Omkara!
He pulls her towards him rudely:But at the same time I hate you.Because you cheated on me.
He grabs her hand and walks to his house.
Asha:Omkara..please..
Her words fall on his deaf ears.
They reach Omkara's house.Shlok and Gauri come.They smile at them.
SHLOK:Omkara and Asha..good thing that our parents are not here.Mom thinks that her daughter in law should not enter this house before grahpravesh.
OMKARA:Daughter in law?Asha?How do you know that Asha will be her daughter in law?
Shlok and Gauri are confused.
SHLOK:What are you saying Omkara?
OMKARA:What if Asha rejects me before marriage?
Asha sweats due to tension.Shlok and Gauri are petrified.
GAURI:What is the matter?




OMKARA:There is a big problem between us.
Gauri is tense:What is the problem?
Asha is so nervous that she can't even look at others.Omkara stares at her.

Slowly Omkara smiles and his smile turns to laughter.
OMKARA:I was just kidding.Just to scare you both.Today is fool's day.
Shlok and Gauri also laugh.
SHLOK:Fool's day..you really made us fools.Very funny.But stupid terrible joke.

Gauri:You really scared us.But we take it as a joke now.


Asha is relieved.
Omkara stares at Asha.She is scared.

Gauri and Asha are in Gauri's room.
GAURI:Is everything alright between you and Omkara?


Asha:Don't worry.Everything is fine between us.


GAURI:Are you sure?
Asha:Yes.
GAURI:I really got scared when Omkara talked like that.When he said he was fooling us only i got relieved.Still i fear.
Asha:Nothing to worry about.
Gauri smiles:I want you to be happy with Omkara.I am sure that Omkara will make you happy.

Asha smiles:Omkara loves me like crazy.

Gauri smiles.



Omkara is sitting outside.Asha goes near him.
Asha:Thanks.for not telling them the truth.
Omkara stands up.
OMKARA:Do you know why I did'nt tell them the truth?
She is silent.



Omkara cups her face in his hands.

OMKARA:Because I love you.So I don't want to spoil your image.

Asha moves away tearfully.

Asha:Please Omkara….no…I told you..I don’t like this.I don’t love you.
Suddenly he bursts into tears.
OMKARA:Why don’t you love me Asha?Am I that bad?
Asha feels sad.


Tears roll down her cheeks:No Omkara.You are really good.Your love is too much for me.I don’t deserve your love.Because though you love me a lot,I love some one else.But I will try to be a good wife.But I can’t forget Shlok. I am sorry Omkara.

Asha goes away leaving Omkara in tears.

Shlok,Gauri,Omkara and Asha go for a party.

Shlok and Gauri dance.





Dil ne chuna hai
Raahon mein nazaron mein tumhe tumhe
Main chahta hoon
Sau dafa hazaron mein tumhe tumhe

Tujhko khuda ne aise tarasha
Jaise gulon se hai shaakhe
Tu hans pade toh chalti hawayein
Teri nami se barsatein

Main chaand se teri haan teri
Tareefein karta hoon bas teri
Jiski badolat hai duniya meri
Tum ho na tum ho na
Tum ho na woh…

Ab tere haathon se
Lipti hai takdeerein yeh meri haan meri
Dil mera woh ghar hai
Jispe hai tasveerin ab teri haan teri
Bas mohabbat se
Ik baar haq se kehdo toh hum marjaye
Tum zaroorat se bhi ho zaroori
Kaise juda reh paaye


Tum ho na tum ho na
Tum ho na woh tum ho na

Darr kaisa jab main hoon
Kyun rehte ho khoye se kaho haan kaho
Yeh sach hai jo bhi hain
Khud haathon se chhun kar dekh lo dekh lo
Mujhpe bharosa karlo zara sa

Aur kuchh nahi hum chahe



Gauri sees Asha and Omkara simply standing there.Gauri goes near Omkara:Hey..why you both are not dancing?Usually Asha loves dancing at parties.Today what happened?
Asha just smiles.
GAURI:Omkara..dance with my sister.
Omkara smiles..Asha looks at Omkara with discomfort.
He keeps his hands on her shoulders to dance.She is nervous.
He holds her hands tightly

and dances.

Tere liye jo lamha ruka hai
Aa saath mein le jaye
Do hi kadam pe hai manzile
Phir aur humko kya chahiye
Tere liye main hoon mere liye
Tum ho na tum ho na
Tum ho na woh tum ho na

I see you standing watching over me
Tum ho na tum ho na

Watching over me
Watching over me

I see you standing
Watching over me
Tum ho na tum ho na woh
I see you standing
Watching over me
Tum ho na tum ho na woh


So lets just find a way
Please don’t walk away
I just cant wait no more

So lets just find a way
Please don’t walk away
I am still holding on
I see you standing
Watching over me
I see you standing
Watching over me(OppoF5 Song).



Gauri smiles seeing them dance.
GAURI:Shlok..I feel very happy seeing Asha with Omkara.
Shlok smiles:They are perfect for each other.
Gauri smiles:Yes,like we are perfect for each other.


Asha is uncomfortable while dancing with Omkara.Omkara understands that and he feels sad about that.

He removes his hand from her understanding her discomfort.

Asha was relieved.

Omkara goes to the washroom and cried.

OMKARA:What a fate God!

Asha goes there.Seeing her Omkara gets angry.

OMKARA:You don't even want to dance with me.Right?Why are you so rude to me Asha?

She was upset and helpless.

OMKARA:Is it because you love Shlok?Then understand...you are only mine.

She is shocked:Omkara!

OMKARA:Yes Asha.It’s Gauri wo is meant for Shlok,not you.You better understand that.You are made for me.So don’t think that you can move away from me.

Asha:Omkara!

Omkara:Even if you try to go away from me,I will not let that happen.Because I'm madly in love with you.In other words I'm obsessed with you.

Asha is stunned:Omkara!

Her eyes are full of tears.He walks away.She is upset.

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#23

Correction

Her words fall in his ***deaf*** ears

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Omkara not telling anyone the truth in order to protect Asha's image was striking

But why have you kept her name Asha? It was Aastha in ipkknd2

Dance was nice

RiLok thinks AshKara are perfect for each other not being aware of the truth

Omkara crying over his fate was sad

continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

thanks for the pm.

nice update....

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Posted: 5 years ago
#26

Sorry for late response



I almost felt as if Omkara was not ready to hear the truth

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Shocking that Omkara got obsessed with Asha's love after getting rejected. Rilok dance scenes are romantic. When Omkara dragged Asha, I thought he would reveal the truth but he didn't do that. Omkara telling Asha that she is only made for him is shocking. Waiting to know how ashlok and rikara will unite.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

Part 2



Was simply Amazing

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Posted: 5 years ago
#29

Yes i know its its deaf ears.By mistake I typed D instead of F.But it should on deaf ears,not in deaf ears


Originally posted by: salley145

Correction

Her words fall in his ***deaf*** ears

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

Thank u friends


Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 5

Asha is sitting at a park looking at a photograph.Omkara comes there.
He thinks:Asha was very uncomfortable with me at the party.Still i did'nt care for it.I have to apologize.
He goes near her.He is shocked to see her looking at Shlok's photograph.His eyes become red due to anger.He trembles and screams:Asha!
Asha is shocked:Omkara!
OMKARA:Are you not ashamed to keep loving your sister's husband?I have not seen a shameless girl like you.

She bursts into tears:I am sorry.I tried my best to forget Shlok.But I just can't help it.

OMKARA:You can't help it?But one thing you should understand.Shlok does'nt love you.He loves only Gauri.Gauri is born for Shlok.
Asha's mind tells:You are wrong Omkara.Gauri is not born for Shlok.

OMKARA:This can't be tolerated.I was willing to forget everything and start a new life with you.But you are a girl who still loves your own brother in law.It is a sin Asha.I can’t tolerate this.I can’t marry a shameless girl who is after her own sister’s brother.How can you cheat your own sister?How can you stoop so low?It’s better to end this relationship.
Asha weeps.

ASHA:What?

OMKARA:Yes,I mean it.

She got scared:That will break many hearts Omkara.If Shlok, Gauri and our parents come to know this,they will be shattered.

OMKARA:Why did’nt you think about this before falling in love with Shlok?

ASHA:I told you Omkara.I did’nt fall in love with him purposefully.It just happened.

OMKARA:Ok.But why did’nt you try to forget him at least after his marriage with your own sister?

ASHA:I tried…but….

OMKARA:Then why do you still keep Shlok’s photograph with you?

Asha feels upset.She herself does’nt know why.She tears the photograph.

ASHA:I have torn his photograph.

OMKARA:Just because you tore Shlok’s photograph you can’t be considered pure.Because you destroyed only the photograph,not your feelings for him.

ASHA:Omkara…please try to understand…

OMKARA:If you have destroyed your dirty feelings for him along with this photograph.tell me do you love me?

Asha was pricked by his question.

ASHA:Omkara….it’s not easy to love a person so fast.

OMKARA:Ok.But will you love me after our marriage?Any hope for that?

Asha became weak.She is not able to give an answer.

OMKARA:No.Right?Because you yourself had admitted that you can’t forget Shlok even though you can try to be a good wife.

Asha cries silently.Omkara feels her pain.He ignores it.

Omkara:But you understand one thing.You better try to replace Shlok by me in your heart.Means only Omkara Singh Oberoi should have place in your heart.

Asha is stunned.

Asha:What kind of attitide is this?

Omkara:This is Omkara Singh Oberoi's attitude.I told you..I need you at any cost.

Asha can't tolerate it anymore.

Asha:But it's not easy Omkara.You can't order me to love you.



He gets irritated:Is it?Then you are going to pay for it.You will face the consequences of hurting me.

She gets scared.

Omkara leaves.



Omkara meets Shlok and Gauri.
Omkara's face is dull.
SHLOK:What happened Omkara?
OMKARA:I..I broke up with Asha.
Shlok and Gauri laugh.
OMKARA:This time I am serious.
Shlok and Gauri become dull.
GAURI:Why?Why did you break up with her?


OMKARA:She is not like you think.She is not a good girl.
Gauri becomes angry:Stop it Omkara.I know my sister very well.She is a nice girl.
OMKARA:No,you don't know her.You don't know what is going on in her mind.She does'nt love me.
They are shocked.
SHLOK:What?
OMKARA:He loves you bro.
They are shocked again.
SHLOK:What?You are misunderstanding her for sure.
Omkara:No bro.She herself admitted that she does'nt love me.She said that she can't forget you.
Gauri can't believe it.
Asha enters the house thinking "If Omkara tells them the truth..no,i have to stop him".
Everyone stares at her.
Shlok stares at her.

SHLOK:Asha...Don't you love Omkara?Tell you silly girl.
Asha does'nt say anything.She is very upset.

SHLOK:I understand what your answer is from your face expression.Ok,do you love me?
All are shocked as they did'nt expect Shlok to ask this question to Asha.
She weeps.Gauri is shocked.
SHLOK gets irritated:I understand your answer.But you understand one thing.You have ditched my sweet brother for a person who does'nt love you.I don't love you Asha.Understand?
It wounds Asha's heart.



SHLOK:I love only Gauri.
Gauri is relieved.She looks at Shlok with a painful smile.Her eyes are wet.

Asha runs out crying.
Shlok:Omkara..don't worry.Asha is living in a dream world.She is a foolish teenager.She is just having infatuation towards me.When she understands how much you love her,she will start loving you.
Omkara does'nt become happy.
He thinks:That's impossible.I have lost all my hopes today.
Omkara goes.


Shlok gets ready to go for a meeting.He doesn't see Gauri around him. Shlok looks for Gauri.He finds her gloomy in the room.
SHLOK:Why are you looking upset?
GAURI:I got scared whether I will lose you.

SHLOK:What are you saying?Why did you even think like that?
GAURI:Asha loves you.If you also love her...
Shlok is shocked:How could you even think like that?I love only you.

Do you think I can love anyone other than you Gauri?

Gauri embraces him emotionally all of a sudden :I am sorry.



He caresses her softly:Never think like that and hurt yourself.I am only yours.

Gauri smiles tearfully.

Gauri meets Asha outside.
GAURI:What did I hear?Still you love Shlok?
Asha is silent.She can't face Gauri.
GAURI:Come on tell me.
Asha bursts into tears.
Gauri becomes upset.
GAURI:I knew that you love Shlok deeply.Still I got married to Shlok.Did I do a mistake by doing that?

She wipes her tears.
ASHA:No..never.It was not a mistake.Shlok loves you very much.Be happy with him.
GAURI:I thought you have started loving Omkara.
ASHA:It's not easy to remove one's face from our mind.


GAURI:I know..but still..anyways..please don't make Omkara upset.He will take care of you.He is a very loving chap.
ASHA:Yes,i will try my best to make him happy.I don't want you guys to be upset because of me.
Gauri smiles emotionally.

Asha enters Omkara's office room.
Omkara is angry:Asha!

He pins her to the wall angrily:Now why have you com here?You already made me sleepless.Now what do you want?


Asha:I came here to tell you that I will not hurt anyone. I can't promise you that within a few seconds i will start loving you.

But I promise..I will not keep unnecessary thoughts in my minds.


Omkara is stunned.

Omkara:What?Did you really mean it Asha?

Asha smiles:Yes Omkara.I really mean it.
Omkara smiles.

They are smiling at each other.

Shlok enters Omkara's room.He is surprised to see Omkara Asha together like this.He becomes happy.

Suddenly Omkara and Asha see Shlok.

Asha:Hi Shlok.

Shlok:Hi Asha.

Asha looks at Omkara:I am leaving.Bye.

Omkara smiles nodding his head.

Asha bids bye to Shlok also and leaves.

SHLOK:Omkara bhai….that means she has started feeling differently for you. I told you..Asha will understand your love.She is changing and I am sure that she will start loving you.
You are going to get your Asha.

Omkara's eyes glitter due to the new born hopes about his love life.


SHLOK:Make her happy.She will realize that with you only she will be happy.
Omkara smiles.


Shlok reaches home.

Gauri:Shlok..I will bring tea for you.

Shlok:Not now.First you here what I have to tell you.You will be happy.

Gauri: What's that?



Shlok tells her what happened in the office.
Gauri is very happy.

Gauri:Really Shlok?

Shlok:Yes Gauri.Now everything will be fine between Omkara and Asha.

Gauri:That’s a very happy news.


Shlok:Ya.

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