Changes of heart chapter 7 on page 7 - Page 2

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Awesome one 

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His sisters are leaving no chance to annoy him

Even made him their driver

yeah they are sis after all 😆

He bumped into Violet's niece at the coffee shop

but...it doesn't look like she's telling the truth

anyway, 

well you will know later 😉

cont soon

 I will for sure😳 

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Chapter 3 

(soon, i heard Ayla sarcastic remark at my word, making me smiled as well).

"very funny and old line of century"!. 

"I know but "old is gold","now will you both do the honor", To be out of my room , "or shall I help you both to find the exist"?...

(They shook their head and walked out of room. While I Resume my way at bathroom, to get done with my morning routine. After one hour I head back downstairs, all clad in black grey jeans, with Dark blue tee and Black Light jacket on. I was wearing my Watch, then I looked up at my mum, I throw a flying kiss at her way. Which she caught blushing heavily. And wink at my Dad who as expected glare at me. Jealous much over your son huh. Smirking inwardly I move out of home. Grabbing apple from fruit basket which was on table).

"so ready for ride on my car"?

(I boosted at my both sis with smirk on. while they shook their head and get in the car. but my twin sis can't keep quit for long so she chirped). 

"not your's but dad's, "as he brought it"!

"yeah yeah," but it's mine as he gifted me"!

"It's brought by his money, "so it's his logically"!

( I didn't say further and continue driving. As an argument with my twin, never lead me to conclusion. As it's go on and on and on, till someone come and stop our banter. But today I am in good mood, didn't wish to spoil it. After three hours   I walked in Starbucks and went into line. Not many people were there, to make me wait for long. A couple was ordering, and one lady was behind them, Raising my hand and pulling my jacket Sleeve a bit . I looked at my watch, but my gaze fell on a little girl before me. She was jumping up and down , I didn't noticed her back but now I did. Getting my hands back, in the warmth of my Pant pocket. I watched her while she sung softly). 

"I am in dove with the lape of you"!. 

"we push and lull like a mag-i-tude"!. 

(smile made it's way on my lips, listening her mispronunciation of words "Shape, pull , love And Magnitude"!. Assuming she is the daughter of the women before me, who got done with her order, I expected her to walk away with her. But I frown in confusion when she went opposite way, I looked back at the counter, but before  I could step bit forward, I heard a sound of chair being dragged. I looked at left and saw the same little girl, pushing a chair with the look of determination, towards the counter, I was Amazed by her gut, soon she reach the counter and hopped on chair, then spoke softly to barrister). 

"Hi can I get Ma-Nilla Latte", "with no ice please",

"Alright sweetheart that will be $4.12"!. 

(She pulled few dollars out from her pocket. And forwarding a bit spoke softly).

"Okay Here"!.  

(And Barista after taking the money from little girl. Walked to get the drink while the little girl, Hopped of from the chair. And pushed it back over to the table, then walked back to counter and grabbed her drink).

"Thank you"!.

(And with this she walked out of the cafe. Leaving me amazed by her very little actions. I never saw something like this before. So it was kinda surprising for me. And Unknowingly,  I started following her You might think it as creepy , but I care a damn. As I have no bad intention, I just wish to check, she is safe and to be honest to get end up with my curiosity. As why the little kid come, to order things ,  all alone by herself. Even being a kid she was way to fast, in her pace of walking. But I caught up with her soon).

"Excuse me", "Dear"!. 

(And spoke to her, she turn and stopped walking, then look at me with awe, reason I don't know. but then spoke back softly.

"um hello sir"!. 

(I bent down to her level , And looked carefully at her she had blue eyes which were vibrant and bright , she had her golden Curly hair open which reach till her shoulder only, clad in baby pink color frock).  

 "Hello Dear, "May I know your name"!.

"Emily"! 

(she spoke softly, lowering her head a bit shyly. getting bit amused, small smile made its way on my lips again. I clear my Throat and spoke firmly in gentle tone).

"Alright My self Alex, "now tell me that drink is for you Emily"?

"No it's for Violet", "wanna meet her"?

(Alright Violet this name make me frown. As  I think I know her but then I chided my mind. For getting to much into ,mere name which is way to common).

"I will love to, "how old are you Emily "? 

(She look at me in confusion ,then lowering her head she stayed silent. For few second then answer me with proud smile looking up at me again.

"Six"!

"Do Miss Violet know , "you are here all by yourself"?

"No she don't"!.. 

"so it mean she must be worried about you"?... "don't you think you did wrong"?...

(Alright I am no one to lecture her , when as a kid I myself trouble my mom dad. And I  still do, more ever it's none of my business , to what this girl is doing and how she will be back, at the protective Arms of her elders comfort. But I can't help as responsible citizen, I wish to make sure she stay safe. As i can't help but worried for her well being. we continue walking till we reached, a grand large library which I  expected to consumed by silence as always but to my surprised it was filled with a girl sobbing and yelling). 

Em..Emily co...come out my dear no more hiding...where are you Emily...

 (We both together step towards the Girl. Who was sobbing I couldn't see her face, as her back was facing me. And before I could say or step forward, my cell ring which I take out from pocket to check. And seeing it's from my friend Eric, small smile made it's way on my lips. I was about to received it when, I heard a thunderous angry voice, filled with accusation towards me. I look up and for second I prayed I didn't come here. As one pair of teary rage filled eyes, were looking at me which made me stunned. As they were known to me. I to got annoy seeing those pair of eyes Violet no wonder the name seems so known to me).

"You here unbelievable"!

"Hello to you to", "And yeah me in-fact me being here, is more believable then "Chris Hames Worth"!.

"I can't believe it you are still full of Attitude"!

"Neither I"! 

"Just get lost"! 

"with pleasure"! "but before that I wish to know", "who is Emily to you"?

"none of your Business"!

"It is when I will visit Child care officer, to complain how careless nanny you are".   "Letting this Doll out all by herself with money"!."Then it will be my sole business"!.

"You you just go to hell"!

"I can't go there as people like you, already reserved it for themselves"!.

"Alexxx I hate you"!  

"No need to yell I am not dumb like you"! "Violet," "more ever Feeling are mutual"!.   

"She is my Sister's Daughter", "now got your answer leave now"!.

"Well this doll is way to smart, to be your daughter", "anyway take care of her"!.

(Who care's about the banter, I had with her anyway. I just wanted to, make sure she is fine. And get rid of the distress she had, And our argument helped her forgetting , how that doll made her worried. By leaving all by herself and she got back to her usual self. At least now she wouldn't be scolding, that cute thing. In anger and i know she can't do either . She love kids way to much to scold them anyway. I recalled the day I met her she is author. And friend of my Twin sis. But I didn't knew this before, neither she knew me).

"Uughhh"! "why I am unable to write it"?

(I was in sitting on bench in park, being bit tired after jogging. and relaxing myself , by listening soothing songs in my cell. When i heard a, Frustration filled Girly voice. I glance at the source. And saw a girl sitting on bench, She had Piled of papers with her. And with one fine glance at them I knew she is writing something. But getting distracted by something, she is unable to write rightly. And then throw them away in frustration. No wonder she being, a  creative mess of place right now. By polluting the area ,with ball of papers.  But then I turn my attention, at my cell again. Knowing well I can't be all by myself right now).

"Um"! "would you mind", "If I sit here"?

(After few minutes, I again heard a Similar voice. But this time by close. I looked up and saw the, same girl who disturb me. Seek my permission, to sit besides me. I nodded my head in yes, Even though i wish to declined her. But I didn't so she made herself, comfortable on the bench besides me. And i again got busy ,checking my cell).

"what are you doing here", "at this odd hour of morning"?

"Nothing"!

"How mean"! "I just ask generally', "you could answered nicely"! 

(I didn't reply back anything just stayed silent and continue checking my Call log and massage which I got from my friends but seems like she is in mood to spoil my own time so she spoke again she is way quite bold though knowing she can get embarrassed by ignorance still she isn't stopping herself  speaking to me).

"By the way myself" "Violet Jones"! And you"?

(As much I tried not to snap at her way I keep mu anger aside I know it can spoil her entire day if  I scold her or something so  I answered her by introducing myself).

"Alex Harris"!. "But aren't you Author, of Obsessive love Story"?

"err Yeah"! you had read it "? did you like it "? you know "! Um"! "I am here to write a story," "but I have no idea about it"!. 

(I stayed silent and got pissed at her. Now knowing who she is. But by being silent, I hoped she may know. I am not interested to chat, But seems like she is really in need of ideas. To write something, that's why she is even ready to check, Opinion from stranger to . I looked at her for second, then turn my gaze to my cell. Cad in Dark red color v cut top. And dark Brown Color leather jacket on. With open hair black Color jeans , brown color Boot's having Dusky skin , blue hazel brown shade, Almond Shaped eye. She look cool though, I shook my mind, And continue checking my cell. To be honest i lost interest in cell, long back after taking a glance at her. Not liking my distracted views, I spoke absent mind).

"But I think everything can resolves", "by sharing our own story"! 

"How"?

"Look at these trees at the front", "they look lifeless and dull if one sees them", "they will blame winter for their condition". "Still if we think deeper, And try to understand". "Then we will find ulterior motive". We will know that Winter is only trying", to showcase it's love for the tree". It's helping it to blossom", making it more lively and vivid"!.

"Well that's not a story", "that's Philosophy"!. "And I am trying to write a story", of a boy and girl their journey of love"!.

"Journey of love"? "They fell in love", "while traveling or what"?

(I exclaimed curiously yet confusingly she gasped for second then  laugh at my words but control it when she thought it can offend me she spoke calmly again).

"I know it's sound Cliche And funny". That's why I am not sure About it". "But your line fell in love", "while traveling sound Intriguing"!

(I nodded my head in understanding. But to be honest i didn't, understood a single thing. But she needn't to know that , what i understand and what i didn't. and to be honest by the look at her i can bet all the story wrote by her might be based on Love story only  She paused for a few minutes, the silence between us was comfortable though. We let the  morning Cool  breeze  freeze  us.  And sunrise to let us shower in it's spreading soft light she spoke again).

"Wait let me tell you the Story". "And then you can tell me". "Your opinion about how is it okay"! 

(I didn't said anything and she took my silence in positive way and continue speaking she do know right that boys aren't kinda into love shit but again these girls and i don't get why she seek to know my opinion about it anyway  I stayed silent even though she start speaking already).

"It was perfect rainy day". "The sky was Overcast with the thick Clouds". "The Drizzling rain was creating", an Amazing Atmosphere"!. And a boy was Leaning towards his car with entirely Soaked in Rain"!

(To be honest i was bit impressed by her style of giving detail of scene I don't have much knowledge about stories and all  but i knew it's kinda nice one she was busy narrating the story and i was staring at her).

"Uncle"! "has the car repaired"? "he asked from his driver".

"No dear"! "But why you are out"? "go in the car It will get fix in few minutes"!.

"I know uncle you just wish", "to enjoy this Rain alone". But you know what"? I won't let you fool me"! 

he chuckled lightly at his own words which made even his driver smiled as well but soon a melodious voice heard by him
Just close your eyes and Enjoy every drop of this water it..."

(I didn't let her finish and spoke I myself without letting her complete her story to be honest even I myself wasn't aware what i am saying it's like i had no control on myself). 

"It purifies our soul and make us feel alive"! 

"Their view were similar ,so he looked at the source of voice". "when he finally saw her , everything stopped around him". "At very first sight of her , "his heart started beating at wild speed". He couldn't look elsewhere, to lost in the beauty of angel. "whom he thought  come down from heaven"!.

"And their unaware of ,the pair of eyes on herself . "She was lost in the weather, nothing matter to her"."clad in Dark blue color sleeveless top, black pant, with flat heels, open hair. "she was dancing on the Road". Completely soaked in rain, "it was the moment the boy realized". He found the thing missing from his life". "he felt sudden urge to go near her". And he Act on the desire of his heart" "And advance towards her with slow paced, her back faced him ,when he reach to her. "Inhaling the same air as her ". he whisper unknowingly with absent mind

"Mira Miraculum"!

"And extremely startled by the voice". "Then realizing the person is just behind her". She turn around in petrified way".

(with this I stooped by the ring of my cell Violet become disappointed by that but didn't voice out I got up and received the call and got up from bench to leave the park when after few step taken  I got stopped by her holding my hand).

"Sorry but what this "Mira Miraculum"! means"?

"I can tell you the rest of story". "If you got to listen "a story of kid from me"?

(That's what my view are , no matter what you are. Gender color or anything, can't be the only source of way. To certify the real character, of person and their abilities. Alas not everyone think , 

in this way though.  After reaching the home of my buddy. I was kinda nervous for sure, as no 

Edited by James12 - 5 years ago

Nice updt 

James, you did not tell us that you had written a fan fiction!😲

Factual events  mixed with fiction make this fan fiction a joy to read.👏

Humorous yet dealing with serious issues--a nice package.👍🏼

Our hero , Alex Harris, is not smitten easily by a fair maiden.😆

Would be very interesting to see in which continent he will lose his heart.😉

Enjoyed it tremendously, James.👏

 

Edited by roseraja1915 - 5 years ago

Awesome update

Awesome update

James...😲