FF : Mr & Mrs Akshat Jindal revenge love lust Part 13 Jan 27 pg 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
#11
Wow beautiful update dear
Loved it very much
AJ thinks so cooly he just understand guddu does this for a reason
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#12
very nice loved it pls continue
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Posted: 5 years ago
#13
Nice story
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#14
hi nice story dear ⭐️⭐️⭐️
waiting to see development of a nice friendship 😳

continue soon 😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#15
PART 4
Akshat was surprised at the sudden act of guddan , but soon composed himself and let guddan cry, he hugged her and consoled her

AJ : Guddan rona band Karo yahaan koi tumse kuch bhi nahin bolega

Guddan : nahi uncle sab sahi bolthe hain guddan tumse na ho payega humne sabko doka diya hain sabka dil dukaya hain

AJ : Guddan aisa kuch bhi nahi hain , tum bol rahi ho ki tumse kuch nahi ho payega, ho na ho ab tum ban gayi na INDIA KI YOUNGEST SAAS., 

Guddan : humse to ek patha bhi nahi sambalta, hum kaise Kar payenge yeh sab

AJ : tum se zaroor ho payega, tume sirf sahi guidence ki zarurat hain, tumare iss uncle Pati ne tumse zayada duniya deki hain, main tumare saath rahunga

Aur itna guilty feel karna band Karo, jo ho gaya usse badla nahi ja sakta, isliye tumse bol raha Hu aapne dil mein jo bhi baat hain usse share Karo agar tum chaho toh

Guddan : aap humse nafrat karenge agar humne apko woh baat bola toh

AJ : Nahi karenge nafrat tumse ab bolo kya baat hain, aur yeh rona band karo

Guddan : humne yeh sab apni chutki ko bachane k liye kiya

AJ : chutki ?? 

Guddan : humari behen

AJ : iss sab mein uska kya Lena Dena hain

Guddan : lena dena hain kyunki kisi ne hume blackmail kiya tha, humari chutki ko kidnap karke ki agar hume apni behen ko bachana hain toh hume aapse shaadi karna hoga

AJ : aur tum nahi jaanti ki tumari behen ko kidnap kisne Kiya hain 

Guddan : nahi lekin ab woh safe hain jaise h humari shaadi hui usse un logon ne chod diya 

AJ : tume kaise pata chala k tumari behen safe hain aur tume yakeen kaise hua ki tumari behen ki kidnapping hui hain

Guddan : aapne sahi kaha tha, humari Maa ne shaadi k liye Haan kaha tha, lekin jab papa ko pata chala ki humari shaadi aap se ho raha h toh papa ne mana Kar diya kyunki 

AJ : hum tumare papa k Umar k jitne bade hain 

Guddan : Haan, lekin hume age se koi problem nahi tha 

AJ : aisa kyu 

Guddan : aapko pata nahi kya itna age difference k saath agar shaadi ho toh most marriages successful hotel hain 

AJ : huh.?? 

Guddan : Shahid kapoor, sanjay dutt yahaan tak American president ki shaadi unse kahi zyaada choti Umar ki ladkiyon se hua hain 

Aap na general knowledge main bahut week ho

AJ : Haan kyu ki tumare Pati ki umar zyaada hai na toh dimaag ki baati todi Kam jalta hain

Guddan laughed at AJ ' s sense of humor 


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Posted: 5 years ago
#16
Sudha beautiful update
I love how Guddan told the truth to AJ n she told him that she has no qualms with his AJ, n there is no misunderstanding. I hope both AJ n Guddan both solve n find kidnapper

I love how you used Bollywood reference sach Mein there are lots of Bollywood couple with age difference Dilip Kumar Saria Banu, Dharmendra & Hema Malni, Ritesh Deshmukh n Geneila  etc

please write soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#17
Such a beautiful update dear
AJ is so cool here kaiseh asaani Seh sambala guddan ko
Really loved it 
Just wanna see growing bond between them
Aur wanna see how they fall for each other 
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
#18
Hey ur ff is damn interesting. I like how AJ is a sweetheart and more understanding here unlike in the show where he always scolds guddan. Guddan's reply to why she said yes was hilarious. 🤣 Haha AJ Aap na general knowledge main bohot weak ho 🤣 🤣 🤣
Btw I am new year 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
#19
PART 5
Guddan laughed at AJ 

AJ : ab bolo ki tume kaise Pata chalao ki tumari behen ki kidnapping hui hain

Guddan : Hume kisi ne phone Kiya tha aapke shaadi k rasmo ke waqt yeh bol kar ki agar humne apse shaadi nahi ki toh woh log Humare behan ko kidnap kar lenge

Hume laga ki woh koi prank call Hoga 
 
Lekin shaadi ke teek ek din pehele Sach main humari behen ki kidnapping ho gayi

Un kidnappers ne humare behen ki photos aur videos send kiye the Hume jahan in logon ne use lock karke raka tha

Humare behan ko bachane ke liye humare paas aur koi raasta nahi tha, humne puri kosish ki thi un logon ke bare main Pata lagne ke liye, lekin Hume unke baare main koi suraag nahi Mila

Issi liye humne apse dhoke set shaadi ki, Hume maaf Kar dijiye uncle and she started to cry profusely 

AJ simply hugged and consoled her she too hugged him back 

AJ then said , guddan deko jaisa humne pehele kaha tha jo hogaya use hum badal nahi sakte

Hume yeh bataao ki kya tume Pata hai ki tume kis number se woh threatening calls aur videos aaya tha

Guddan : Hume nahi maloom woh koi private number tha

AJ continued to hug her and asked her aur un kidnappers ne tumse sirf yeh maang raka thi tume mujse shaadi karni hogi 

Guddan : Haan, humse un logon sirf yeh Bola ki agar Hume humari behen ko chudana ho toh Hume apse shaadi karni hogi


AJ : yeh baat ajeb hain sirf humari shaadi ki maang raki thi un kidnappers ne matlab humare shaadi hone se kisi ka kya faida Hoga

Guddan : hum kuch bhi nahi jaante yakeen maniye humara, agar aap chate hain toh Hum abhi iss ghar ko chod kar chale jayenge

AJ : tum kahin nahi ja rahi ho na iss ghar ko chod kar aur na hi apne iss uncle pati ko chod kar

Raat bahut ho gaya hain yeh rona dhona band karo aur sone ki tayaari karo 

Aur Haan iss rani Padmavati ki look se thoda normal look pe ajao

Guddan : hum aapko rani Padmavati ki tarah kis angle se dikh rahe hain Haan??

AJ : 360 Degrees Har angle se lag rahi ho

Guddan : acha ab dekho ki yeh rani Padmavati kya karti hain and throws a pillow at him

AJ catches the same and they both have a cute pillow fight their laughter echoing each and every corner of the room 

Outside AJ Room

Durga lakshmi and saru were shocked listening to the laughter and their pillow fight they went away from there fuming in anger 

AJ caught guddan while running and chasing around the room and they had an eye lock 

The eye lock was broken by guddan who went to wash room to change

Inside washroom guddan removed all her jewelry and hair accessories but then she remembered she did not have any change of clothes with her

She called AJ, uncle

AJ : Haan kya hua

Guddan : humare paas change karne k liye koi kapde nahi hain ab hum Bahar kaise nikle

AJ : teek hai ruko hum durga bahu ko bol denge woh tumare liye night clothes leke ayegi

Guddan : nahi aap kahin maat jao humain dar lagra hain, hum aise hi so jayenge hum bahar aa rahen hain

Saying so she came out of the wash room 

AJ : Guddan tum uss dress main comfortable rahogi sote waqt woh bahut heavy hain

Kam se Kam woh dupatta nikal do main tume apna koi shirt deta hun aaj ke liye adjust karlo Kal apna luggage lakar kamre mein set karlo OK 

Guddan : teek hain and she removed her dupatta akshat passed one of his shirts to her and went to change

Once he came back guddan started to walk towards the balcony 

AJ : ab wahan kahan ja rahi ho guddan

Guddan : sone ja rahe hain hum balcony main

AJ : tum pagal ho kya itni sardi mein balcony main sone ja rahi ho hum bed share kar sakte hain

Lekin agar tum uncomfortable ho toh mein balcony main sone jata hoon

Guddan : nahi aisi baat nahi hain agar aapko koi problem nahi hain toh hum bed share kar sakte hain

Both of them walked hesitantly towards the bed and slept facing each other 

But then while sleeping both of them moved from their respective places came closer than intented and hugged each other

AJ had peaceful sleep after ages while guddan slept thinking atleast one person trusts her in all this problems and mishaps
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Posted: 5 years ago
#20
Note :
This story is purely fictional and the story I write here has the same characters but their characteristics would be little different 

Like AJ would not be khaados all the time he would be understanding and friendly and story will proceed accordingly