FF : Mr & Mrs Akshat Jindal revenge love lust Part 13 Jan 27 pg 12

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Guddan could not believe what she has done

She got married to UNCLE

Just to save her chutki's life., but no one understood her not even dadi

Every one was angry with her , she had no idea about what to do or now to proceed further in this situation

She entered her room, which was hers and uncle's room right now

Cried her heart out and slept..

Outside in hall
All 3 bahus were adding fuel to the growing fire

Durga : dekha AJ iss ladki ki chal paiso ke liye isne apse chori chupe shaadi ki hain

Lakshmi : Haan AJ Durga di sahi bol rahi hain usne apko paiso ke liye phasaya hain

Deka nahi aapne kaise usne apse 100 crore mange the talaak ke liye

Durga di Hume usse abhi is ghar se nikal denge

Saru : sahi hai di AJ main abhi jaati hu aur us Maharani ko niche le aati hu

Uski himmat kaise hui hame dhoka Dene ki

AJ was a silent observer of their conversation

All three bahus thought that since AJ is silent he also feels the Same

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Good start and update soon 😛
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Nice start 
Please do continue soon😊
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PART : 2 

Guddan was sleeping or atleast trying to sleep when saru and lakshmi barged into the room and dragged her down stairs

Saru durga and lakshmi were dragging her out of the house

AJ was silent, dadi was unable to see all this and was about to leave when 

AJ called out  ruko durga bahu

Durga : lekin kyu AJ jitna jaldi ho sake utni jaldi Hume iss ladki ko aapne ghar se Bahar nikal Lena chaiye

AJ IN MIND

Main nahi janta ki tume takleef main dekne se ya phir tume takleef dete hue muje itna takleef ku hota hain

Lekin main ye Jaana chata Hu ki tumne jo bhi Kiya woh kyu Kiya aur kis liye Kiya

Is ke Liye tume iss ghar me mere saath rehna hi hoga

And looks at guddan 

MIND VOICE OVER END

Durga : kya hua AJ, aap kis soch main pad gaye , main isse ghar se nikal rahi Hu Abhi is waqt and drags her out

Guddan looks at AJ and thinks , uncle mujpe Barosa Karo Maine jo bhi Kiya kisi karan se Kiya hain jo main kisi ko bol nahi sakti and holds the hem of his shirt

And when durga drags her AJ calls out

AJ : durga bahu ruko koi kahi nahi ja raha hain

Durga : yeh aap kya bol rahe hain AJ, main iss ladki ko apne ghar main rahne nahi dungi

AJ : bale aap iss ghar ki Badi bahu hain lekin apko kisi ne bi yeh haq nahi diya hain aap kisi ko bi iss Tarah se Bahar nikal de . Jisko bhi iss ghar se Jana hain woh apni marzi se jayega

Durga, saru and lakshmi

Apke kehne ka Matlab hai ki bale hi hum chale jayen lekin aap guddan ko ghar se nahi nikalege???

AJ : HAAN GUDDAN KAHIN MAHI JAYEGI

and turns to look at guddan

Aur guddan tum, Kon ho tum Haan??

Guddan thinks yeh uncle ko kya hua pagal hain kya ?

Guddan se hi sawal Kar rahe hain ki guddan tum Kon ho

AJ shakes her guddan tumse much pucha hai Humne jawab do

Guddan : hum guddan hi toh hain

AJ nahi tum ab sir guddan nahi rahi

Guddan : toh Kon hain hum

AJ :  itna akkal toh hain tum me socho aur Hume baato ki Kon ho tum

Guddan thinks

AJ bolo guddan Kaun ho tum

Guddan : Guddan Akshat Jindal

AJ Haan sahil kaha tumne ki tum ab Guddan Akshat Jindal ho aur iss ghar ki malkin

Dadi is happy hearing this from AJ

While durga saru and lakshmi are shocked 

Edited by Sudha1603 - 5 years ago
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Beautiful update dear
So AJ neh guddan ko Woh kon hai ab Yaad dilaya
Plzzz do continue soon
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Part 3
Dadi said to everyone, sahi kaha hai Lalla ne , guddan iss ghar ki malkin hai. 

Aap 3 bahu jitna jaldi ho sake uthna jaldi iss baati ko maan lijiye 

bale hi guddan aap sabse Umar main choti kyu na ho woh ab tumare sasur ki biwi hain aur tumari Saas 

AJ : Aur Haan aaj ke bad koi bhi iss ghar main guddan se is Tarah se bartav nahi karega

Iss ghar main sabko ek Tarah ke Samaan milte Aya hain aur aage bhi wahi hoga 

AJ calls out guddan 

Guddan still in trance  

AJ calls her again , guddan kis Duniya main ho  ???
Chalo mere saath mujhe tumse baat karna hai

Guddan leaves with him holding his hand 

Dadi also leaves the place , all the 3 bahus are shocked at the turn of events 

IN THEIR ROOM 

AJ : guddan tumhe ho kya gaya hain durga bahu ne tumse itni batsaluki ki aur tum chup rahi kyu?, 

Guddan : Issi ke layak hain hum uncle 

AJ : tume aisa kyu lagta Hain? Guddan main nahi janta ki tumne jo kuch bhi kiya hain woh kyu kiya hain 

Lekin tum agar mujse kuch bhi share karna chahti ho toh tum Kar sakti ho 

Maine tumse iss liye shaadi ki kyunki main janta Hu ki hum dono main zameen aasmaan ka fark hain aur humara kabi  bhi mel nahi ho sakta 

mujhe sirf antara ki last wish ko pura karna tha ki mein dusri shaadi karke aapne zindagi mein aage jaoon

Jo main kisi bhi ladki ke saath karne k liye ready tha 

Tum meri Maa aur bahu ki choice thi, mujhe meri Maa pair barosa tha so I said yes for the marriage, tumne bhi agree kiya tha shaadi k liye

Lekin phir tumne mana Kar diya, mujhe laga ki shayaad humare age difference ke karan tumne shaadi se mana kiya hoga 

phir achanak se tumne dulhan ki jagah chupke se lekar mujse shaadi kyu kiya guddan ?? 

Koi toh wajah hogi? Joh bhi baat hain tum mujse share Kar sakti ho

Kyunki ab hum Pati patni hain, Haan yeh saach hain ki main time aantara ki jagah nahi de sakta apni zindagi main

Par main tume akela nahi chodunga agar tum chaho toh hum iss rishte ki start dosti se Kar sakte hain

Bolo guddan kya tum iss rishte ko ek mauka dena chahti ho? 

Guddan was shocked hearing all the emotional talk from kadoos uncle 

She did not know what to do 

So she just hugged AJ and cried her heart out


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Hey all 3 part are nice..its beautiful😳
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Hi Sudha 
read all the 3 parts, it's very beautiful, I love this Akshat n he is thinking coolly with his head, I cannot wait to see how their friendship develops. 
Please write soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sudha1603

PART : 2 

Guddan was sleeping or atleast trying to sleep when saru and lakshmi barged into the room and dragged her down stairs

Saru durga and lakshmi were dragging her out of the house

AJ was silent, dadi was unable to see all this and was about to leave when 

AJ called out  ruko durga bahu

Durga : lekin kyu AJ jitna jaldi ho sake utni jaldi Hume iss ladki ko aapne ghar se Bahar nikal Lena chaiye

AJ IN MIND

Main nahi janta ki tume takleef main dekne se ya phir tume takleef dete hue muje itna takleef ku hota hain       

Lekin main ye Jaana chata Hu ki tumne jo bhi Kiya woh kyu Kiya aur kis liye Kiya

Is ke Liye tume iss ghar me mere saath rehna hi hoga

And looks at guddan 

MIND VOICE OVER END

Durga : kya hua AJ, aap kis soch main pad gaye , main isse ghar se nikal rahi Hu Abhi is waqt and drags her out

Guddan looks at AJ and thinks , uncle mujpe Barosa Karo Maine jo bhi Kiya kisi karan se Kiya hain jo main kisi ko bol nahi sakti and holds the hem of his shirt

And when durga drags her AJ calls out

AJ : durga bahu ruko koi kahi nahi ja raha hain

Durga : yeh aap kya bol rahe hain AJ, main iss ladki ko apne ghar main rahne nahi dungi

AJ : bale aap iss ghar ki Badi bahu hain lekin apko kisi ne bi yeh haq nahi diya hain aap kisi ko bi iss Tarah se Bahar nikal de . Jisko bhi iss ghar se Jana hain woh apni marzi se jayega

Durga, saru and lakshmi

Apke kehne ka Matlab hai ki bale hi hum chale jayen lekin aap guddan ko ghar se nahi nikalege???

AJ : HAAN GUDDAN KAHIN MAHI JAYEGI

and turns to look at guddan

Aur guddan tum, Kon ho tum Haan??

Guddan thinks yeh uncle ko kya hua pagal hain kya ?

Guddan se hi sawal Kar rahe hain ki guddan tum Kon ho

AJ shakes her guddan tumse much pucha hai Humne jawab do

Guddan : hum guddan hi toh hain

AJ nahi tum ab sir guddan nahi rahi

Guddan : toh Kon hain hum

AJ :  itna akkal toh hain tum me socho aur Hume baato ki Kon ho tum

Guddan thinks

AJ bolo guddan Kaun ho tum

Guddan : Guddan Akshat Jindal

AJ Haan sahil kaha tumne ki tum ab Guddan Akshat Jindal ho aur iss ghar ki malkin

Dadi is happy hearing this from AJ

While durga saru and lakshmi are shocked 

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Originally posted by: Sudha1603

Part 3

Dadi said to everyone, sahi kaha hai Lalla ne , guddan iss ghar ki malkin hai. 

Aap 3 bahu jitna jaldi ho sake uthna jaldi iss baati ko maan lijiye 

bale hi guddan aap sabse Umar main choti kyu na ho woh ab tumare sasur ki biwi hain aur tumari Saas 

AJ : Aur Haan aaj ke bad koi bhi iss ghar main guddan se is Tarah se bartav nahi karega

Iss ghar main sabko ek Tarah ke Samaan milte Aya hain aur aage bhi wahi hoga 

AJ calls out guddan 

Guddan still in trance  

AJ calls her again , guddan kis Duniya main ho  ???
Chalo mere saath mujhe tumse baat karna hai

Guddan leaves with him holding his hand 

Dadi also leaves the place , all the 3 bahus are shocked at the turn of events 

IN THEIR ROOM 

AJ : guddan tumhe ho kya gaya hain durga bahu ne tumse itni batsaluki ki aur tum chup rahi kyu?, 

Guddan : Issi ke layak hain hum uncle 

AJ : tume aisa kyu lagta Hain? Guddan main nahi janta ki tumne jo kuch bhi kiya hain woh kyu kiya hain 

Lekin tum agar mujse kuch bhi share karna chahti ho toh tum Kar sakti ho 

Maine tumse iss liye shaadi ki kyunki main janta Hu ki hum dono main zameen aasmaan ka fark hain aur humara kabi  bhi mel nahi ho sakta 

mujhe sirf antara ki last wish ko pura karna tha ki mein dusri shaadi karke aapne zindagi mein aage jaoon

Jo main kisi bhi ladki ke saath karne k liye ready tha 

Tum meri Maa aur bahu ki choice thi, mujhe meri Maa pair barosa tha so I said yes for the marriage, tumne bhi agree kiya tha shaadi k liye

Lekin phir tumne mana Kar diya, mujhe laga ki shayaad humare age difference ke karan tumne shaadi se mana kiya hoga 

phir achanak se tumne dulhan ki jagah chupke se lekar mujse shaadi kyu kiya guddan ?? 

Koi toh wajah hogi? Joh bhi baat hain tum mujse share Kar sakti ho

Kyunki ab hum Pati patni hain, Haan yeh saach hain ki main time aantara ki jagah nahi de sakta apni zindagi main

Par main tume akela nahi chodunga agar tum chaho toh hum iss rishte ki start dosti se Kar sakte hain

Bolo guddan kya tum iss rishte ko ek mauka dena chahti ho? 

Guddan was shocked hearing all the emotional talk from kadoos uncle 

She did not know what to do 

So she just hugged AJ and cried her heart out


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