Yaariyaan#5 .Spin Off / page-61 - Page 48

Originally posted by: Tanvi4

Thank u for the pw n loved the spin off the best part was maan agreeing for marraige n then the bidai part just loved it

Thanks for writing this

Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely. By the end I was in tears. But Maan really scared Aakash. But then when it mattered the most Aakash showed spine and asked Maan for Tanvi's hand.

Originally posted by: preetidhawan

Lovely Spin Off

Maan and his possessiveness for Tanvi 😆 always in cribbing mode bcoz of Aakash 😆 and only Tanvi can handle him, Aakash faced Maan with so much confidence and Maan knew it Aakash was the best choice for Tanvi , bidaai part was very emotional, loved it

Hats off to you for writing such a masterpiece on Maanvi, loved it and loved it

Originally posted by: Twenty1st

last chap

Sorry Rashmi doesn't like once again😡 btw i am expecting great things form this chap lol, i.e. a i love you lol

Geets impatience is fully suggestified nad Maan teasing, did i tell you i love this Maan. Finally a possessive tanvi for her mommy lol like is maan jealous for like even a second lol

Ok Tanvi, is like the cutest thing ever lol, finally forced Maan to kiss Geet though im sure he himself was over the moon with the order and geet, poor girl lol

way to go, finally geet decided to express her feelings, like great or else i was thinking shes going to go forever and Maan, in his subborness of her first will continue to live like this. He is so stupid and shes a fool lol. SERIOULSY NOOO i'm so so so disappointed geet woman man up and voice it loud and clear, now hes going off on an official meet and she's still not said I love you. Rashmi is update is living up to my expectation lol

wow a new business adventure for Maan and i'm glad geet encouraged him, if only she was as vocal about her feelings well i rekon hoping on maan would be futile. this guys such a dream but a pain at the same time lol

gosh geet whhats the need of such a long essay, poor guy got scared. in the fear he should have declared his feelings lol

finally, shall i dance they declared their feelings. im so proud of my maan and geet for finally taking the enxt step and voicing their feelings

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

hahahaha.. Till when they could resist themselves.. so it was the time.. geet realised her feelings very clearly for Maan so she was redy to say those three magical words but you know Geet took her sweet revenge from him unknowingly.. Till now Maan was troubling her a lot..but this time It was geet's turn to make hin hell scared😆

@ bold and red I don't disappoint any one😉🤣

Originally posted by: Twenty1st

lol glad to know your aim in writing, so zero disappoint warranty is applicable right? 😆