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Z: I don't know at what moment you came into my story, I only know that since the day I came here, you were my story. All my days were only reactions to you. I came here all frozen and immobile, but from the moment I walked in here all my days had only one focus, you. You pushed me so hard, you were so demanding, you broke through the ice in which I had stuck myself for 8 years. All my living moments were about you, first winning your approval and then trying to be the best version of myself for you. Before everything else you were my teacher, my mentor.
Very well done indeed. This can't have been easy. Zubia in the second half of this show has held back all her emotions making it very difficult to predict what is going on in her mind and how she would react..
I really like the bit about Zubia wanting to stay at Dr. Asfia's place as they did not burden her with emotions...also the bit about people from work slowly but surely being introduced back into her life...her conversation with Dr.Haroon was also on point...
One observation I had (and maybe that is the frame of mind in which I read it) is that the spark between Zubia and Asfand was less than what I have come to expect...but I also accept that it is very very difficult to showcase that in a conversation about their past...
Really enjoyed reading all the parts..excellent piece of writing..
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