OMG this is beyond beautiful, I am totally speechless , part 4 and now part 5, I. can not describe how I feel, wow just wow. You are and amazing writer. Absolutely wonderful, you made my day,, A big hug to you🤗 brilliant writing.
Originally posted by: SanFrangirl
I wrote as you commanded! But very few words because words are weapons in the hands of Zubiya just now. Hope you enjoy the wordlessness!
Originally posted by: octaverider
Girl the way you write them is so perfect. I feel bad for dishing out crap after I read this story.
You so beautifully captured their awkwardness. The finesse with which you write... too much!
Loved the update. Will there be more coming?
Originally posted by: SanFrangirl
Oh no, dont stop writing. I got inspired by your trailor. After I read it I realized we were kind of infantalizing their romance. These are two adults. It would be a crappy base for a relationship if they didn't have smoldering hot chemistry. Do write. You have a real screenplay quality. I look forward to itI would like to write more...any ideas --- what to write on? I dont want to write about Bahador gang.
Originally posted by: SanFrangirl
Oh no, dont stop writing. I got inspired by your trailor. After I read it I realized we were kind of infantalizing their romance. These are two adults. It would be a crappy base for a relationship if they didn't have smoldering hot chemistry. Do write. You have a real screenplay quality. I look forward to itI would like to write more...any ideas --- what to write on? I dont want to write about Bahador gang.
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