Love, Actually- Asfi-Zubi - Page 4

Originally posted by: bookworm123

This is the Asfandyar we want to see...may have been spurned in love but continues to be concerned for her welfare...

It is a big mystery for all of us isn't it..how will Zubia's past be revealed to Asfand and how will he react??

So many of us are trying our hand at it...😆

Really like how they continue to be "in character" in your story

Now I cannot resist asking...phir kya hua??

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

Aww so sweet of you Jaren. Please read #4 on page 5. I wont write anything intense after this. Mujhe toh aise bhi tumhari story line jyada sahi lagi thi. And I have full bharosa on our police so Bahadur and gang are only post-scripts in Love, actually universe :)

Waise you know what my grand plan is? I want Zubiya to woo Asfi. Am so sick with her being everybody's favorite girl next door, she better show some love to our bouy Asfi. He too needs to stop taking initiative and bossing everyone. Needs to be shocked into silence :)

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

I think Jaren93's story line is the most probable. I think that is what will be on TV next Wednesday. I loved your interpretation with Khala telling the story as the most elegant and the real-life solution to the problem. Mine is the most contrived and Hindi film types with eavesdropping heroes.

Tell me kaisi lagi #4?

Originally posted by: bookworm123

So so beautiful my friend. So well written! You have a way with your words and the best part about your write ups is the way you convey their thoughts...

I only have one question...how productive are you being in the world outside YKS? One has to be pretty into the emotions of the show to come up with something so heartfelt.

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

Productive? I wish. Thankfully I have a work schedule which is flexible and some great partners. I am up nights to make sure I am not missing some discussion. And since the time I started hammering out OS-- uff. But I have to say, typing out these intense type pieces does let it get out of the system. I am no longer watching Episode 18-26. But that might be because I know the dialogues by heart :)

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

sahi mein @fanraya? I was feeling it is too melodramatic, too filmy. But I had already seen @jaren93 beautiful chapter of same event so tried to make it "different" .

Nextcoming up is the grand scene between Asfi and Zubiya which I suppose will have to be intense. Bas after that I will go to the epilogue. These two crazy characters have already caused too many coronary events and need to be happy and let us be happy. Bahut ho gaya!!!

Originally posted by: Alizba63

SanFrangirl all the 4 parts were absolutely beautiful. Out of all the OS regarding the confession/talk about the past this one definitely stands out along with the one Aims wrote (that was perfect too!) It's so real. I love how Asfi for once doesn't know what to say or do...I love how empathic they both are...both of them thought about the others pain even when they themselves were hurting like hell. This is one of their many shared qualities which makes me believe they deserve each other more than anyone else in this world ❤️

Keep writing. You write wonferfully. Its not easy to write from a persons POV.