Ranveer's unsaid feelings #1 (Episode 108 updated page149) - Page 51

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

So, a separation...Okay, so firstly it shouldn't be dragged.

Secondly if you are confident enough to write a consummation episode/chapter you can go ahead with it :)

As to suggestions, I'll pm you...But you need suggestions like?

hi aarushi thanks for the response yaar ya ya i won't drag so much if it is long time but the track will be bit separation with a comedy scenes

ya let me aarushi the consummation will be made ya pm for sure aarushi because i have a wondered how great writer lol .. the suggestion i actually need is need consummation or not or should i made it before separation or after the separation 😊😊

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

And it would be even more hotter if it's gonna be after the separation. :P

ya even i thought that but seriously i am confused whether to make it after or before 😊😊😊

Originally posted by: malsa

if u r comfortable with writing consummation scene plz go ahead.😉 it will b hot. i want love making b4 n after da separation😆

hi malsa thanks for the response i am comfortable with it but it is before and after will you guys won't be bored or can i surely make it after separation

I'm not a great writer and all! xD

Well, give me a  days' time.I'll pm you. :)

After kar dey yaar...Karnal...cold...hut...wind...spice...hot...con <3

Originally posted by: naush2015

Sakshi you can write con scenes very well you must go for it before also.even you have written it before both the chapters were really very nice.we are waiting for that.

hi naush ya thanks for liking both the chapter that i did before ya let me do it.ya the great confusion is before or after that is what bit confusing for me fine let me try my best to keep you all hooked 😊😊😊

Originally posted by: priyanka98

Hey sakshi no separation plz.. In show we already see this. If u r thinking about con scene then go for it.

no priyanka it won't be that pathetic like the show and all i don't know to write that sorrow stories yaar their separation will be full of emotions trust and comedy too so i will try my level best to make it interesting😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

I'm not a great writer and all! xD

Well, give me a  days' time.I'll pm you. :)

you are aarushi you way of writing impresses me often they are really lovely

ya pm me the only confusion here is whether to make ti before or after separation many tell they want it before so that idea is needed for me according to that i will shape the story😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

After kar dey yaar...Karnal...cold...hut...wind...spice...hot...con <3

tk aarushi let me make it after itself make it a different consummation to my best 😊😊😊

Can't v hv at both tyms 😉
I knw I m being greedy BT dis tym v want a superhot romantic night thts it nd v also knw tht u cn do it vry well 😆
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