Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 13

Now now... Radhika... Here I just thought we were getting somewhere with New onites confessing their crushes , Arnav accepting openly to finding Khushi interesting, and then at the end .. Why had you have to includ this proposal twist and that too without the name of prospective groom. How am I supposed to sleep peacefully tonight?
Big shock.. Akash, Payal and Aman triangle. But Akash spoke to Renu bhabhi, about what ?
Will this Shekbawath and Anand Ram let Khushi be peacefully? May be its someone with intention to marry beautiful Khushi and also get her sign her shop off to the Rams ?

Hum aap se kuch poochna chahte hain Arnavji.. aisa kyun hota hai.. jab bhi main bhaang peeti hoti hoon, I feel like throwing up in your car.



Edited by asmanichatri - 9 years ago

Lovely update Radhika!! Lengthy one but each word was worth it's own weight.. You covered a lot and on the awkwardness quotient Arnav went back a notch in the beginning but he became the knight in shining armor for Khushi multiple times, so I guess they progressed a little?!

Thank you for a long update :) Truly hide and seek! I was so relieved Khushi could dodge Poonam, AnandRam Shekhawat et al. Only Arjoon could corner her to unsuccessfully draw into a union. Mihir Gupta was a surprise. What does Akash want to tell about Renu Bhabhi? And drunk Khushi was cute :) It must be an epic traffic for them to reach her place so late. Khushi ke liye rishta?? Aur wheelchair ka kya raaj hai?

Wow what an update..
Edited by meera06 - 9 years ago

When I finished👏 reading the update, I realised how immensely engrossed in the update I was.. and that is the beauty of the story.. there is a hint of romance and the promise of something to come that keeps one hooked! 






Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 9 years ago

As always I can't pinpoint which part I liked best, just loved reading the entire chappy but finally their crushes are out in the open, which can help move things forward. Also I love the length of your chapters but ab jaldi jaldi likho, itna wait na karao, we're addicted to this story.

Thank you for an amazing and really looong chapter.. Totally worth the wait 😊
And oh, please give us more nonsensical updates, if that's what you call it. 😉

I just love your NK. You give him the best lines ever.

Aman was the reason behind Payal inviting Khushi to the party? But why? Aman still remains a mystery.

That Shekhawat guy turned out to be shady too.

Good that Khushi managed to get out of the party without getting herself into any trouble, even if it's in an unconscious state and in a wheelchair. 😆
Why does Arnav have a wheelchair, pillow and a blanket in his car anyway?

With bhaang and without bhaang, Khushi told Arnav a few things about what she thinks about him.
And Arnav admitted to everyone that he finds Khushi interesting.
He did grow up from the boy who never takes a stand to the guy who holds her hand to protect her from his mother.

"If he were half as a resourceful as Hari Prakash, he would have been more useful." - No more Hari Prakashs please! 😉

Arnav's Holi wishes to Payal 😆

"There are some people here who like you, but I don't think they know you." - Who is he talking about?

What's the story behind Bunty Baba? 😆

High on bhaang Khushi is cute!
Honestly speaking, I expected a little more from the bhaang episode. But I now realize that anything more than what you've shown would be out of their characters and out of place. So once again, kudos for keeping it real.

And now Khushi has a rishtha! This will be interesting.

Worth the long wait update!! 👏

That was quiet an interesting re union of school mates.  I wish there was a face off between Poonam and Khushi , I mean why should she hide from Poonam, it is not like Khushi did some mistake .
Your Payal is the typical example of so called upper class girl, insensitive , but happy that she is changing.
So Khushi's parents came with a proposal ? Curious to know the details.
On second thought ,Does poonam have any connection with marriage proposal for Khushi ? Me and my weird thoughts 😳
Edited by ramyarn - 9 years ago