Rusty? If this is what you come up with when you're rusty, I can't even imagine what you'll write when you get back into your groove ๐ฒ
C, you have really proved that brevity is the soul of wit. Your fics are short yet beautiful enough to bring a smile to our faces. Really commendable!
The main attraction of your fun fics is, of course, that they're based on THEM. But what gives them that extra bit of charm is that you turn some teeny tiny off screen moments and weave your imagination around them to create magical scenes. If it was the Gujarati Saree line in the previous one, it was the 'sachi' nahi 'pukka' bit that did it for me in this one. How do you come up with these? Brilliant stuff ๐
I especially loved that we got one from her POV. While HE is quite vocal about his emotions, SHE is always composed and careful, hesitant to express.
Here too, she's affected and is aware of it, but she doesn't let him know.
But that doesn't matter. Because the glow on her face says it all ๐ณ
Loved it, C! ๐ค
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