ASYA TS : THE BREAKDOWN OF MR. ASAD AHMED KHAN - 27TH JUNE ' 14. - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nilusoni

superb loved it

i want a happy ending
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon




Thanks nilu! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: p_s05

This was beautiful.   ❤️

I love angst confessions, if I may call it that.   😳


After all the heartache, of course a HAPPY ending.


"He went and sat next to her. And held her pulling her to him to hug her. She pushed him away. And hit him on his chest. Asad didn't budge but it hurt him."


"And held Zoya close to him wrapping his arms around her, kissing her hair. Asking her to calm down."


"O-okay... but I'm taking your bag with me. No more arguments.
Please."


Apart from his confession, Asad was particularly charming.   ☺️


Aww, Thanks PS ❤️

Angst confessions, most certainly it is ! 

Thankyou, glad you liked it !😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Amazing
No matter how many times we read their initial romance its always as fresh as new...
Awesome explaination of their helplessness... Continue soon


Aww, thankyou so much ! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome storyline...
Beautifully written 👏
I loved the small moments b/w asya...
Asad kissed zoya palm and zoya touches his cheek 😳
Asad confessed his feeling to zoya in fear of loosing her...
Asad felt really bad after seeing zoya and zain together...
Loved it..
Update soon..




Aww, thankyou so much Yashika ! 😳😃

Glad you liked it ! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: TaiLung

wow loved it

i want only happy ending 😃


Thankyou Tailungg ! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: jas91


Ok so another Ts😲
Allah jaane tune kitni stories chupa rakhi hain😡
but it was awesome😃
i enjoyed reading it😛
feel Sorry 4 Asya 😭
& hate that Billi wish Asad slap her & insult her 4 being touchy wid him😡😈
specially now when he knows how hurt Zoya is cuz of that💔
Superbly penned Mona meri darling❤️
u must b thinking why i call u mona when i know ur name is chandni😆
cuz  I like Mona name cuz Ayaan used 2 call Zoya d same 
So Mona is cool get that😉
some awesome dialogues that i loved in this updt⭐️
Asad, who is supposedly an epitome of tehzeeb , didn't seem to have any problem with this behuda aurat clinging to him.🤣

They were miserable than ever before.😲 They died a little everyday. 😲😲Their lovey - dovey mitwa stares had been replaced by awkward ones and angry glares. Their nok-jhok was replaced by fights and serious arguments🥺 on who destroyed who's life and how neither of them are happy with this alliance.😭
 
This room won't show any sign of me anymore. I'll make sure. Bravo Zoya👏
"What Zayns come ? Why didn't you tell me ? She quickly ran to the washroom. Washed her face and ran out of the room. Hearing Zayn's name uska sara gussa phur ho gaya 🤣

Who the hell was this man? His wife ran to meet him 😈

Leave her you ba*sta*rd.🤣 

 Khushi ke tears hain. Zoya my baby🤣

"Woh umm.. He's Mr Asad Ahmed Khan. He's the man I'm stayin..." Zoya said introducing Asad.
That was like a tight slap on Asad's face😆😈

Wow part d confession🥳
Asad was pleading like Zoya is his momma & he want some candy he can't resist🤣
He was not ready 2 let her stay in guest room & also reduced Zoya's dedline from few days 2 1 day only.😆 Apne aap hi🤣.Smart Businessman he is😎

aur ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai ofcaourse i want happy😃 & hot Asya ending.☺️ Get what i mean afterall unki Sr bhi delayed hai.😉😆 Aur yes i want Asad 2 insult Tanveer once😡 & asks 2 stay in her limits as he's married now & only his wife can touch him.

Maine itna bada comnt kiya hai tune chota sa reply kiya na tu tujhe chodungi nahi main😡Samajh gayi na😉😈



Thanks Jas !! 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: jas91


Ok so another Ts😲
Allah jaane tune kitni stories chupa rakhi hain😡
but it was awesome😃
i enjoyed reading it😛
feel Sorry 4 Asya 😭
& hate that Billi wish Asad slap her & insult her 4 being touchy wid him😡😈
specially now when he knows how hurt Zoya is cuz of that💔
Superbly penned Mona meri darling❤️
u must b thinking why i call u mona when i know ur name is chandni😆
cuz  I like Mona name cuz Ayaan used 2 call Zoya d same 
So Mona is cool get that😉
some awesome dialogues that i loved in this updt⭐️
Asad, who is supposedly an epitome of tehzeeb , didn't seem to have any problem with this behuda aurat clinging to him.🤣

They were miserable than ever before.😲 They died a little everyday. 😲😲Their lovey - dovey mitwa stares had been replaced by awkward ones and angry glares. Their nok-jhok was replaced by fights and serious arguments🥺 on who destroyed who's life and how neither of them are happy with this alliance.😭
 
This room won't show any sign of me anymore. I'll make sure. Bravo Zoya👏
"What Zayns come ? Why didn't you tell me ? She quickly ran to the washroom. Washed her face and ran out of the room. Hearing Zayn's name uska sara gussa phur ho gaya 🤣

Who the hell was this man? His wife ran to meet him 😈

Leave her you ba*sta*rd.🤣 

 Khushi ke tears hain. Zoya my baby🤣

"Woh umm.. He's Mr Asad Ahmed Khan. He's the man I'm stayin..." Zoya said introducing Asad.
That was like a tight slap on Asad's face😆😈

Wow part d confession🥳
Asad was pleading like Zoya is his momma & he want some candy he can't resist🤣
He was not ready 2 let her stay in guest room & also reduced Zoya's dedline from few days 2 1 day only.😆 Apne aap hi🤣.Smart Businessman he is😎

aur ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai ofcaourse i want happy😃 & hot Asya ending.☺️ Get what i mean afterall unki Sr bhi delayed hai.😉😆 Aur yes i want Asad 2 insult Tanveer once😡 & asks 2 stay in her limits as he's married now & only his wife can touch him.

Maine itna bada comnt kiya hai tune chota sa reply kiya na tu tujhe chodungi nahi main😡Samajh gayi na😉😈



hahahaha.. Jk !! 
Ok so another Ts😲  ---😃😃
Allah jaane tune kitni stories chupa rakhi hain😡  Arrey sirf yehi ! Be happy instead! 😆

but it was awesome😃
i enjoyed reading it😛
feel Sorry 4 Asya 😭
& hate that Billi wish Asad slap her & insult her 4 being touchy wid him😡😈
specially now when he knows how hurt Zoya is cuz of that💔
Superbly penned Mona meri darling❤️  -- Thankyou so much Jassyy !! ❤️❤️😳

u must b thinking why i call u mona when i know ur name is chandni😆
cuz  I like Mona name cuz Ayaan used 2 call Zoya d same 
So Mona is cool get that😉 --- Hahaha... Acha, since it's so COOL, why don't you change your name to Mona darling ?😆 Jk. Call me what you want to !! 🤗 Jass Darling !!😳

some awesome dialogues that i loved in this updt⭐️
Asad, who is supposedly an epitome of tehzeeb , didn't seem to have any problem with this behuda aurat clinging to him.🤣 ----👎🏼

They were miserable than ever before.😲 They died a little everyday. 😲😲Their lovey - dovey mitwa stares had been replaced by awkward ones and angry glares. Their nok-jhok was replaced by fights and serious arguments🥺 on who destroyed who's life and how neither of them are happy with this alliance.😭
 
This room won't show any sign of me anymore. I'll make sure. Bravo Zoya👏
"What Zayns come ? Why didn't you tell me ? She quickly ran to the washroom. Washed her face and ran out of the room. Hearing Zayn's name uska sara gussa phur ho gaya 🤣  BURN Asad, Burn !!! 😡😆

Who the hell was this man? His wife ran to meet him 😈

Leave her you ba*sta*rd.🤣 

 Khushi ke tears hain. Zoya my baby🤣

"Woh umm.. He's Mr Asad Ahmed Khan. He's the man I'm stayin..." Zoya said introducing Asad.
That was like a tight slap on Asad's face😆😈  -- Haina , he desreves it ! 😆

Wow part d confession🥳
Asad was pleading like Zoya is his momma & he want some candy he can't resist🤣
He was not ready 2 let her stay in guest room & also reduced Zoya's dedline from few days 2 1 day only.😆 Apne aap hi🤣.Smart Businessman he is😎  ---- Hahahahahahah.. Smart to he is !! Very rightly guaged Jas !! 👏 Aap bhi smart ho ! 😉😆

aur ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai ofcaourse i want happy😃 & hot Asya ending.☺️ Get what i mean afterall unki Sr bhi delayed hai.😉😆 Aur yes i want Asad 2 insult Tanveer once😡 & asks 2 stay in her limits as he's married now & only his wife can touch him. --- Tanveer ko maar pitwayege ! 😈😆  Tu aur teri SR !! 🤔 Ek do moments shayad mil jaye ! 😳

Maine itna bada comnt kiya hai tune chota sa reply kiya na tu tujhe chodungi nahi main😡Samajh gayi na😉😈 --- Hahhahahaha... Kya zabardasti hai !!😆😆🤣

THANKYOU SO MUCH JAS, FOR SUCH A WONDERFUL COMMENT !! A GENEROUS ONE AT THAT !! I LOVED YOUR COMMENT. READ IT 2-3 TIMES 😆😳

LOVE YAWW!! ❤️❤️
❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww, thanks ! 😳
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#59


Thanks Jas !! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Awesome!!
Loved it!!
.It was breakdown of
Mr & Mrs .Asad Ahmed Khan!! 😭...
Asad's jealousy & Zoya's outburst
led to his confession!!.
Asad miyan when dat clings to u is dat descent huh??😡...
I want an happy ending ...
Our lives are not dat lovely !
!but atleast the stories we read to escape the realities of life for some time
Shud atleast hav an have an happy ending!!!


Aww, Thanks afraa !! Glad you liked it !! 😳😃

Asad miyan when dat clings to u is dat descent huh??😡... --- Agreed !! And so shall Zoya ! 

Happy ending ! 😊