ASYA TS : THE BREAKDOWN OF MR. ASAD AHMED KHAN - 27TH JUNE ' 14. - Page 4

It was an amazing Ts

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

Res 😃

Unres 😊

Okaayy .. so this was a nice part. I liked it. Especially their touchy touchy moments. Like when he kissed her palms and she touched his cheeks. Haaye ❤️

No matter how much I love sad endings, I WANT A HAPPY ENDING FOR ASYA IN THIS FICTION!. please 😳

They deserve a happy ending. 😃

OMG! You made Zayn Mallik Zoee's friend!? 🤣

HAHAH! 😆

' She said excusing herself to the guest room.

"Hey? Our room , please." Asad didn't like the idea of her using the guest room. '

This was an Awww moment for me. 😊

Update soon 😳

Thankyou , all of you, for the lovely comments ! ❤️

This is awesome. Love zoya's outburst. Please dont make it sad one. I want happy ending but dont want zoya forgive him easily. He needs a hard lesson. Waiting for next part. And please try to update your other stories also.
                                                                    ❤️ Raj

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

That was a beautiful update..

Though I was angry that Asad treated Zoya so.. I know if only something as drastic as Zoya did, will he get bearings set right.. 

Loved how you introduced Zayn Malik.. 😉😆

Asad Ahmed Khan + Jealous = Confession... 😆

Well he is out with th truth of avoiding he and treating her like that.. 😃

Loved how they show their love and concern to each other.. 😳

So she has one day to decide and the next is Date Day?? 😲

I want Asya back together.. 😳

Hahaha, yes Asad waits for the punch in the gut 😡😆

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

YES YES YES! THIS WAS WHAT SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED IN THE SHOW TOO! 😡

This is was so beautifully written Chans! 👏 Really awesome! 😳 I loved the way Asad confessed his love due the fear of Zoya leaving him and probably going to another man. 😃 It almost killed him when he saw Zoya and Zain together! 😆

I WANT HAPPY ENDING! BAS! 😳

Ummm.. chal ab bohot taareef kar di tere kaam ki.. *shuts my laptop*

- Mrina <3

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

Lovely

Originally posted by: imcooldude

nice concept Mona
continue this
and thanQ for PM

Originally posted by: princess101

This is amazing 

Please do write more

thanx for the pm

really want another part

Originally posted by: grad2011

awesome!!

plz do write another part :)

Thanks grad ! 😊