ASYA TS : THE BREAKDOWN OF MR. ASAD AHMED KHAN - 27TH JUNE ' 14. - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

Res 😃

Unres 😊

Okaayy .. so this was a nice part. I liked it. Especially their touchy touchy moments. Like when he kissed her palms and she touched his cheeks. Haaye ❤️ Haina, cuttays they are !! 

No matter how much I love sad endings, I WANT A HAPPY ENDING FOR ASYA IN THIS FICTION!. please 😳
They deserve a happy ending. 😃 Leme tink about that.. Mostly a happy one, since most of you want a happy ending ! 😃

OMG! You made Zayn Mallik Zoee's friend!? 🤣
HAHAH! 😆  Hahahha 😎

' She said excusing herself to the guest room.

"Hey? Our room , please." Asad didn't like the idea of her using the guest room. '

This was an Awww moment for me. 😊  --- 😳

Update soon 😳



Thankyou Emms, so much !! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awsum..!! Superb.. lovd it..
ty for bringing back dose days.. ;)



Thanks so much cutie ! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

Unreserved post on page 1. 😃


Seekho! Kuch seekho mujhse mona darling. 😛
Kitni jaldi unres kiya maine or tum toh res ker ke bhool hi jati ho. 😒




 mona darling.😳

hahaha.. seekh rahi hoon , tujhse ee sab ! Babyjaan ! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ak020203

Lovely TS..

Asad needs that outburst from Zoya.. Zayd timing is perfect..

Good one.. Thanks 



Thanks ak ! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

awesome one...
it was too good..
it was nt only asads but zoyas breakdown too...
abt the ending... do u evn need to ask... ofcourse happy wala end


 

Thankyou so much Aarzoo ! 😃

Yes, yes happy ! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Az07

It's very touching story
Zoya was so right fake sagai fake nikkah were is her emotions in all this? Her emotions have been played
I know Asad is scared to commit he think he can only hurt her if he loves her & he want to push her away not knowing that he is again hurting her he is correct he is a fool
Zoya's out burst was needed for bringing sense in Asad
Zayn is so cute Asad should taste his own medicine
I am glad that zoya didn't run in to Asad's arms when he apologise
Trust is very needed in all relationship
Want a happy story


Thankyou so much , for the lovely feedback. Glad you liked it ! 😃

Yes, Zoya will make him taste is vile medicine ! 

Thanks Az! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ican

Even I was confused why tameez and tehzeeb loving aak clinged to tannu
Yes, agreed it was asads insecurity but still I don't think v all the abuses, accusations and comments asad passed on Zoya should be forgiven so easily
I mean it has hurt Zoya to a extent that she left her chirpy nature
She even went to the extent of believing that the marriage was a nightmare
Please don't make her forgive asad easily
PLEASE ZOYA KAY ASOO KI   KASAM

BUT YA HAPPY ENDING TOH BANTI HAIhow much has asad cried compared to zoya very less na please


HHahhaha.. Yes, Zoya ke aasoo ki kasam , I won't make her forgive him easily ! 😳😆

Thankyou so much Ican . Glad you liked it !😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Kinda cute story...def happy ending!


Thanks rajsmi! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: potternerd

Mona darling superb update 

For the first time someone has written about asad zoya not being happy after their marriage

Beautifully written !!!!

The pain both of them going through

Asad's jealously...his confession. ..

Superb 👏



Thankyou so much , Kinjal !! Glad you liked it ! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

Awesome
Fabulous
Brilliant
Continue it ASAP
Can't wait to read more
Thanks for pm


Thankyou shehzadi ! 😃