Blast from the Past Thread #25 ** Abducted Dreams ** p 129, ep 257 - Page 113

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

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Arshi's Index

EPISODE 256-257

Chimera...

[Chimera : a monster from Greek mythology that breathes fire and has a lion's head, a goat's body, and a snake's tail...something that exists only in the imagination and is not possible in reality meaning a hope or dream that is extremely unlikely ever to come true]

Khushi who was going through phantasmagoria state of mind where her real and imaginary world is making her to meet the facts about Arnav and Shyam, two men who over shadowed her life since from the beginning."kya sach hai kya sapna hai..kuch samjh nahin aa raha hai...: She has a clear state of mind about Arnav that her Shaitan and Rajkumar is one and both sides love her just one is angry because of her mistrusting him...but in Shyam's case she still needs some home work to do.On the other hand Shyam's state of mind is like running after a mirage.He wants honey and money and even thinks of himself one step ahead...but as "behind every smile ,there is a cunning face"...He can't even see his own steps while flying in the air that he is losing his own ground.He is just like a Chimera...a person without a personality..."hoshiyar hi moon keh bal girte hain.."

These two epis also hinting that Arnav is going to realize soon that he was running after Mirage for not believing in Khushi and how she is an asset of his life who he always mistreated and misunderstood by not paying attention to the purity and righteousness of her actions rather than believing what he saw and hear.It will be sheer in pain when he will realize it in the captivity. "jab woh tumse dur chali jayengi toh tumhaare saansein ruk jayangi".and that is where he will be reaching soon.

PONDERING CONNECTED DOTS:In Episode 156, new year eve...When Anjali tells Akash "Shyam used to come from window by using pipes to meet her..." and Shyam said"laws r meant to be broken..."...It ignited me then why this unnecessary piece of info was given...and today I found the answer...Sham said "Rani Saheba, shower main kuch kharabi hai kya???, paani dhang se nahin aa raha hai... Pata nahin lagta hai shyaid shower pipe main kuch problem ho gayi hai ".

I loved this ..Shower pipe meaning a source of flow,either water, oil, gas anything...but he is telling water...meaning flow of money...

In episode 219, when first time this will papers got Shyam's attention..he was in Arnav's room looking for it and Anjali comes in...he said "those papers from which your all property will be mine..."and he added "Aap aur humari honewali rajkumari hi tou humari puri jaaydad hain"..he confirms that Anjali is his property ...and he will use this child for getting that...and this money and property is keeping him close to Anjali and Arnav also made that will for the same purpose as he knew that Shyam is only after money...and he will leave Anjali when he will get that and here comes ...""Shower main kharaabi and paani nahin aa raha"...yes, it is.

He got the pipe, will papers which were on Anjali's name..meaning he doesn't need her any more...he got what he aspired for since from the beginning...money and Anjali was his source and now pipe is not working for him as he doesn't need her for that ...at least he thinks he got it..and now he is after honey...meaning Khushi...and what he says to her"Rani sahiba gave this suggestion to take shower in here...

Today Naani and Anjali have witnessed a different angle of Khushi. The have seen this Khushi who is zest of life in RM and in Arnav's life with her smile and antics but today there is nothing in her... This is why Anjali witnessed when Khushi said in the beginning - "wohi toh di, hum hasna bhi nahin chahte". Khushi is not even been able to be true to her name, she forgot smiling and living life cheerfully about everything.But Anjali opened the door of her room while she was erasing the memories by cleaning Arnav's table..."aaap Chote se bohat pyar karti hain.."meaning don't erase that as this feeling is way precious to keep...here comes her own words"ek mauqa to do"

Now when she entered in her own world which is the only source of her lifeline is ,Arnavji's room , her room, their room and faced the devil there.'He tells her.."waise kami bhi kaise Khushiji??? Woh ho ya naa ho, naa aap ko farak padhta hain aur naa hi aap ki shaadi shuda zindagi main koi gehra badlao aa sakta hain".Biggest fool he is as he has no clue of Arnav and Khushi's equation...that is why he is "Chimera"...He thinks he is the Lion of this den just by entering Arnav's room ,coward like goat as he thinks relationships only formed by physical means,and venomous like serpent because he did poison Arnav's brain and now thinks can do the same with Khushi... He shamelessly chases another man's wife and just when she reminds him tat he has crossed the limits, he switches tacks and reminds her about the papers, keeping her confused, her brain addled and preventing her from thinking straight or correct, wants her to chase the mirage...!!

Night time, Khushi is fast asleep when something awakens her, She jerks up with Her racing and frenzy heart when she sees the silhouette of Arnav on the recliner, "aap aa gaye" in the dark and he turned his face with eyes having a rim of tears in em , a remorse in his eyes which she couldn't see yet as she doesn't know he's been abducted ...his heart is calling her out constantly with full of remorse...which is realizing now being away from her.. delighted she switches on the light and the image of Arnav disappears leaving her alone, distressed .. The growing feelings of Khushi is beginning to shape itself and has begun to feel the pulse of this burgeoning feeling. She has understood that these sensations are caused due to Arnav but she still is unable to withstand the light of truth because Khushi is under the impression that her instincts , her feelings are not reciprocated .When she will embrace the whole truth only then she will comes out of this delusional mistrust.

Symbolism and coonection: 11o'clock and 4o'clock time as 11 represent prisoner ,4 represents Lust and realization

Arnav's call comes to Khushi at 9:27 as in Hebrews 9:27 means God's "judgment." Man does not return to die a second time." Meaning Arnav will never misjudge Khushi again , God is showing the pearl of wisdoms to Khushi to find the path to him..also Upright Iron which Mamji did...meaning rational truth is rising up and yes who holds the rational truth...it is Arnav and he has to get up against Shyam...as his hands were tied off because of Anjali but Shyam will provide him enough to rise against him to save Anjali...and Khushi

Akash's "batain chupana" is intriguing the point that when He will find out about how Payal has hidden Shyam's truth from him , he will burst out as this was the promise he took near the poolside...after reconciliation ,during Havan..."They will never hide anything"..and that exactly happened alter after Shyam's revelation because this is one value Akash holds the most in their relationship.

Everyone bids bye to Bubbli and turnd around towards home when Khushi as usual thinking about something trips and about to fall when the hand of Shyam tries to prevent that , Khushi balances herself before he can come closer ...nice move , she has to be alert to regain her balance in time and yes she was one step ahead of Shyam ...he was behind her...excellent CVs...She was saved by Arnav from fire [meaning Shyam] in GH and today Anjali is sending Khushi away from Shyam... Both pillars try to bring a smile on Khushi's face .Anjali and Nani lead Khushi to the couch while Shyam begins to go to his room when the bomb shell is dropped , Khushi has got a ticket to London ..to see Arnav ..A twitching Shyam tries to stop the process but in vain.

Pause here"Anjali gave London Ticket to Arnav and now to Khushi

My grabber is Anjali's words... "This is the path which will lead you directly to Arnav , To your happiness ...Yes, the goal is not London ..but the London ticket will open the path to the truth that had remained undetected, obscured .. and that truth is enveloped in happiness.Other grabber Shyam is climbing up on the stairs and his progress was stopped by some obstacles ..He is moving confident that his ambition has been accomplished but one hurdle comes out of nowhere and shortens his stride of victory as He turns and immediately climbs down ..and that hurdle is "Yeh seedhe aapko chotte tak le jaayega" .. Arnav...Yes Shyam will be not only be stopped by Arnav but also will be brought to knees by Arnav and his other obsession of getting Khushi by hook or crook will be shattered by Anjali who is sending Khushi near to Arnav...Yes Shyam's mirage is getting closer to be ended...again three women who are head of this house...yes Naniji, Anjali and Khushi...Always three..#of success

Anjali has got the tickets and hands it over to Khushi, Shyam makes a phone call while Anjali hands over the ticket.., forcefully instructing something to the caller,...Hmmm[nothing happened after that]

Pause here:Mrs.Arnav Singh Raizada & Formality ...These were the two words that resonated that Khushi will always be Mrs.ASR and this time the relationship will be solemnized a.. So we see Khushi who is being sent before bring brought back as the wife of ASR with the full approval, acceptance of the family and above all from Arnav himself...

Mami s advice "Khushi not to SLEEP !! meaning remain alert... we see the words of Payal which acts as a talisman which will protect her "think of parents and ur fear will vanish !! " yes.. Khushi will come back to Devi Maiya... and she will become the power of her through which she will shred the shroud of deception !!

Khushi returns back, offering the excuse that her parents did not want her to leave the shores and to wait out for seven days , Anjali buys the story even though Nani remains suspicious of Khushi's statement.. Nani and Anjali resolve to send Khushi next week

Yes The battle between the heart and mind - the battle between love and hate - the battle between right and wrong - The battle between good and evil- The battle between the shaitaan and the rajkumar and the final - and the battle between the "nafrat" and the "mohabbat"- is what Khushi's heart and mind is going through now but her search for her happiness is not running after mirage but to face the reality and that's where she is heading now...a battle of her life...

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

EPISODE Part 254-255

~ Realizations & Revelations ~

nice edit.

"Aur jo chot tum ne mujhe pohnchai hai uska kia..."..[ What about the wound you've given me] ..Arnav spilled the half truth of his pain that day after finding his life and bringing her back home, realizing that without her he is nothing...and she asked, "Kya.." aap yahan se aise nahin ja sakte jab tak aap humain yeh nahin batate keh hum ne aapko kaisi chot pohnchai hai.." ...[What? You can't go anywhere without telling me what kind of wound I've given you...?]...

Khushi had no idea the depth of his love and the wound he's been scratching in his frustration of being mad at himself loving her the way he does.But after his departure Khushi is recollecting the gems of his deep love which he scattered all around her since the day one. Just like Buaji explained the virtues of Khushi to him by taking examples of chillies, Naniji disclosed Arnav's motives to Khushi by the story of his childhood."Jab wo kissi ke waste kuch nahin kar sakat hain to khud ko hi saza daine lagat hain...aise hi hain humare Chote..." ...[When He can't do anything for anyone then he punished himself...] This is the key element which is awakening her conscious about all the encounters where she misjudged him since guesthouse incident till now.Now she knows the reason of his wound and the depth of his love for him and the reason of his hatred towards his loving her.

New morning has risen a new wave of tremor in RM without any movement or trail but Khushi is following that trail unintentionally.She is missing Arnav so much and his name and khiyal[thoughts] are making her more and more restless.Food and Khushi's worries are friends like forever...She makes breakfast for Anjali and takes it to her room and gets a glimpse of first trail...Will Papers...

I must say"kanwa chala hans ki chaal aur khud ki chall bhool baitha..." you know what I'm saying...In Arnav's absence Shyam is thinking he is the one who will rule all...time will tell Mr Slither...

Symbolism and connection:Laxmi's help makes her reaching one step , may be tiny but yes one step towards the goal...Will's paper...remember I told you these papers have no meaning without Arnav's life...and these are going to be under the crib...and that unborn is going to pay the ultimate price...Will is Shyam' s greed and his virtues...which will be exposed...during this time...

Laxmi has 4 elephants...and those represent directions with wisdom and faithfulness to the master...Khushi is going to be exposed to Shyam's true picture to save Arnav's life.

Here also connects Payal's cut pics pieces...which Mamiji is figuring out ...yes puzzle pieces where Mamiji will also help her to join together to get the puzzle pieces of Shyam and later Nk will join and Payal will open her mouth too.Meaning whole family will complete this puzzle of Shyam which only Khushi and Arnav has seen yet.

Lovely touch of outdoor and Naniji & Anjali's attempt to bring Shyam into light ...with them in Mandir...Khushi takes the opportunity to find about the papers , a trail towards her suspicious...but her restlessness about Arnav has not gone unnoticed by them either.But her disappointment grabs her not finding papers as Slither is one step ahead of her.His sardonic and vicious smile just disgusts me...

Emergence of a woman through every word and action is shaping up a new storm behind this temporarily calmness of the surroundings .The brewing up anger in her is settling into deep concerns, concerns are raving up into realizations and that turns hopes up with rebellious desires "to be with him" no matter what , "to claim him as hers" no matter what ...indeed "ek din nafrat bhi sharma jati hai ...agar ek mauqa diya jaye..."..[Hate gets defeated in front of love eventually]...

She is entering the temple where he broke her fast on Teej .Her each step is closer to that eternal touch of his by sipping the "Abe Hayat" which he gave her couple of months ago but she scolds at him for that "Why did you give me that ... you broke my fast", yes broken fast "mujhe nahi pata tha keh tumhara...tum behosh ho rahi theen.."[ u were getting fainted..I didn't know you are fastening]...He never knew about Her getting trapped into Shyam's games but he still saved her from all the dizziness of this whole game under DeviMaiya's supervision...He offered her eternal life with him and that's what he's been offering her all along either in hate or love and today she understood that by embracing each step towards it.She got the real meaning of his each action and her each step is getting forward with redemption f her misunderstanding him...Sad Rabba Ve joins her distraught condition...

She is standing in front of Lord Shiv not Devi Maiya and praying for her Arnavji's welfare as his wife... aap bas unka khyal rakhein aur haan unn se kahiyega jaldi wapas aa jayain"...[ Just take care of him and please tell him to come back soon]

Shiv,The Lord of "mercy and repentance" ...as She is repenting for all of her actions today .Lord Shiv also has the power vanquishing evil and she is gathering that from Lord Shiv to vanquish Shyam's evil plot as their positions [Khushi is in between Shyam and Anjali]...while standing in front of Shiv is ringing those bells. "aap hamein chodiye...hum apni mushkile khud suljha lenge...aur haan "humne apni dil ki baat aapke saamne rakhi,yeh baat aap Devi Maiyya se mat kahiyega". [ I can take care of myself..Don't tell DeviMaiya that I opened up in front of you]...Last time she declared to Devimaiya that she won't speak to her and doesn't have any intension to stay here but today she is here for her husband...her Arnavji...She has done every ritual under Devi Maiya's supervision and today she is completing the circle with Lord Shiv with her pure , innocent and eternal acceptance of her Love for Arnavji..."Apne pati keh liye..jinse hum bohat pyar karte hain.." and She will declare these words to the Evil later.

Khushi is asking strength for him , so he can fight with all the demons within and around him. Here comes Anjali's words with Arnav in front of the mirror..."tum khud bhi nahi jante keh tumhain Khushiji ka kitna Khiyal hai..."and that made him realize to say "I love you.." because he just does and doesn't want any reason to do so...For Khushi here comes Naniji's words..."hamre chotey hai na agar woh kisi se pyaar karte hain aur unke liye kuch nahi kar sakte to khudhi ko sazaa dene lag jate hain"

She was upset that day after his accusation and she ended up making Jalaibis thinking why did he accuse of that? Today she ended up making Jalaibis too.My grabber is Shyam's reaction when Anjali teases Khushi...he closes his eyes...He knows She loves Arnav but his lust and revenge to make her his has not ended yet.Khushi is like a fish out of water ,runs in her room and cries her heart out along with Rabba Ve."Why did I make Jalaibis when he is not even here"...

He loves to eat her Jalaibis and she used to make for him in his Lunch box besides his anger because she saw her man licking his fingers enjoying what she makes.He never asks for it but she knew it and today she is doing it unintentionally remembering all those moments...She remembers how her jalaibis revived him from his low sugar attack...

Symbolism and Connection: inma meetha kuch alag hai... Naniji the wise one is indicating the sugar free Jalaibi...and who is sugar free in this RM...who seems different among all...yes Shyam...and Naniji is just like Arnav , very sharp but she has what Arnav doesn't ...she has experience of life and she will see the the clear picture of Shyam when Arnav will explain her and will never doubt Khushi's pure nature.

Pondering connected dots:She was making Jalaibis finding the reason of his chot and how she is the reason for it and today again she is making Jalaibis to find the reason of him messaging her only not di or anyone else...getting frustrated and hurt thinking that he might be in danger but he never did it .He left me Airport like that and all...kuch bura...he is in trouble...her heart is listening his "Chot" ...

Today the soothing sound of spreading pearls make her understand the true meaning of Arnav's pearled oceanic Love which is way deeper than anything...Which was always around her to sooth her from every storm and today she is feeling alone walking , facing the heat of it but his Love is her strength and that will light her path to find all the treasures of their moments to go through this darkness till she finds him..."hum ne aapko dhoond hi liya" ...till then he will be his guardian angel of strength..."aap hi hamari taqat thai..." [u were my strength] ...Yes she has unlocked the real meaning of Love of the man who is everything for her since from the beginning and today she wants to claim him...to embrace him..the way he is ..

Kuch rishtey ajeeb hi Dor mein bandhey hotey hain

Takraar se shuru hote hain...Nafrat ke saaye mein panapte hain

Girte hain...padte hain...par Kaayam rahte hain

Nafrat badhti jaati hai...aur Rishtey ki gaanth aur gehri hoti jaati hai

Itni ki ek din Nafrat bhi aur badhne se sharma jaati hai

Aur woh rishta sirf ek bandhan bankar reh jaata hai,lekin sirf Nafrat waala

Kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai...Nafrat ke us maahaul mein kuch to hai

Jo humse kehta hai -

is unsuni,anjaane se,ankahe se rishtey ko ek mauka to do

Some relations are tied in an odd knot,They start with a conflict,They grow in the shadows of hatred

They fall ,they declined but remained intact,the hatred continues to grow

And the bond of relationship keeps getting tighter

So much that one day hate even shies away advancing any further...

And that relationship becomes a BOND But a bond of hatred only

But there is something says in this hatred environment that

give a chance to this unknown, unheard and unsaid feeling

Par jis rishtey ki neev hi Nafrat pe rakhi gayi ho -

Uss sey kuch bhi ummeed lagaana naadani nahi to aur kya hoga

Aur shaayad yeh naadani hum kar baithe hain

warna kyun itni nafrat ke baawjood hamein aapki yaad aa rahi hai

Kyun hum aapse ladte hain,jhagarte hain...laikin aapke jaane ke baad

Aapki hi ki raah dekhte hain, hawaon se aapki baatein karte hain...

But it is foolish to have a hope for any hatred relationship

But may be I did that foolishness already

Otherwise why I can't forget you even in the state of extreme hate

I fought with you but seeing your way in your absence

Talking about you with the wind

she remembers how he reached to save her in guest house , how he was there holding her in his arms while saving her from a car, he was there all along besides his hate to save her , to save his di...He was hurt by her actions for not trusting him enough telling him the truth but he was there as always...

She remembers him pulling her in mandir , dropping the dash of sindoor making her his...and that makes her comes down on her knees near the poolside in that transparent shallow water where everything seems clear to her...His "chot" which she couldn't see before and now wants winds to take her message to him "Hum Jante hain keh aap hum se kitna pyar karte hain..." [ I know how much you love me...] from "Hamesha" ..She will say these words to her man later but winds might carry these now to sooth him...because he is in pain because of her

Khushi's each line is enveloped in layers and layers of pain, yearning, forlorn and discontent but right from her Heart dipped in pure Love... which is bleeding for him only..Yes This is a merger phase from "Hate to Love"..."Main tum se nafrat kar hi nahi paya...hum ne kitni koshish ki aapse pyar na karne ke liye.."...Today she cried her heart out to clear all the dust of dust...yes she loves him , she just does ,the way he does... Fadak padta hai from both sides... ❤️

Tu hi Bata Mere Maula ...sings their agony...

like the first one when Khushi landed in his office,in his life, in his world with contract of life and his di tells him a girl will come and his sansain ruk jayengi...second when he dropped sindoor in collision on Bhersarai...teej...third after their first hug...he lands his hand on her to be her protector forever, then arousing a woman in her on Diwali but with heartbreak and then bandaging her wounded heart wrapping his name on her in mandir before anyone could even claim her...and then finally today completely arousing her feelings, making her realize his TRUE love...it wil come last time on I love u dammit...when her search for him will stop forever...

I must say they both have crossed Millenium to reach at this point.

awesome collage .. so many moments..all memorable these two have together..

Anjali brings her food while Slither takes it to Khushi , a new way of his getting closer to his prey...but she has to see his extreme side before coming out of her good cloak and that is why she has to see the mirror image of a guy eating Daal full of chillies...

BUT KHUSHI HAS TO GET THE "CHOT" TO SEE HIS REAL FACE...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FIdOYSlD-C0[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: Horizon

Indi, I realize I missed reading your two most important pieces.. this is one of them.. I couldn't be glad to come back to this. Your brilliantly interpretive writing of that soliloquy doing as many things if not more as the original writers..👏

All those edits superlative..

We were dying to hear/ see Khushi's emotions for him by that time. We have seen asr thoroughly smitten, inundated, angered.. I don't think I ever saw as much range and intensity of emotions as asr exuded for khushi anywhere else.. but her feelings were mostly confined to being confused till that time .. which wasn't justice enough..as you said I am glad writers found a clean zone to portray them.. to show us the rarely surfacing woman underneath this jhalli girl..

yes, they didn't even use the word love...but "nadani" was even beautiful I thought.. something that happens without even one's accord... loved that little dark lighting effect there.. how well that French door was made use of many a times.. I miss that door as much as these two..

One thing about Sanaya's voice, I don't know it doesn't sound as effectively for me in low/ serene pitches like here as it does in those instances of high pitch, the resignation or guest house ones. Her crystal quality worked wonderfully well for those. Where as for barun's "Shayad mera dil tumhe pukartha hai".. I can simply die at the feet of his modulation there..such feel, emotion.. he doesn't even need to pukar.. I hear all that ...

Great piece indi..late read is all my miss..

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

Translation:

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place

The reason for which a search was on since a long time

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments

When they realized that their hearts beat together

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episodes 247 - 248

Takraar

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episodes 247 - 248

Takraar

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

Translation:

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place

The reason for which a search was on since a long time

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments

When they realized that their hearts beat together

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing

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Originally posted by: DurgaS

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Episodes 247 - 248

Takraar

Rooh se nikalti hai aah, ye takraar dekhkar

Tadapte dilon ki dastaan se donon hai bekhabar

Khulasa hogaya hai ek gehri baat ka

Talash thi, ek muddat se, jis vajah ka

Kyun rachayi thi byaah dhamki dekar

Baandhli thi zabardasti bewafa jaankar

Khamosh hogayi zubaan, safaai na kuch diya

Yun chubh gaye ilzaam, jaise khanjar se cheer diya

Itni gir chuki nazaron mein unke, tooti ye jaankar

Jab kahi asli baat, toh suna jhooth samajhkar

Nafrat itni thi badh chuki uss kali raat se

Chap gayi wo tasveer jab thi wo uski baahon mein

Galti samjha uss maasoom se chehre ko chaahkar

Uski har baat ko taal diya ek kahani bataakar

Takraar ke mahaul mein donon bhool gaye wo pal

Jab jaana ke saath dhadakte hain unke do dil

Ek ne chaha, jo suna jo dekha sab jhooth hojaye

Dooje ne chaha, uski baaton par unko yakeen hojaye

Magar aur gehri ho gayi nafrat ki deewar

Mahaul hua sangeen, badhta gaya takraar

Translation:

From the soul comes out a sigh on viewing this fight

Both are unknown to the tale of the distressed hearts

Revelation of a deep matter has taken place

The reason for which a search was on since a long time

Why he had threatened and married

Had tied forcibly thinking she was a fraudster

She went silent, did not say anything in defence

The accusations hurt so much, as if ripped off with a dagger

Broken down she was, when she realized how much she fell in his eyes

When she told the truth, he heard it as a lie

So much hatred had grown in him since that black night

The sight of her in his arms got printed on his mind

He thought it was a mistake loving this innocent like face

He put off her every word saying that it was just a story

In this air of dipute they forgot those moments

When they realized that their hearts beat together

One felt, that whatever he had heard and seen would all become a lie

Another felt, that he would believe whatever she told him

But the wall of hate grew deeper

The mood became tense, the clash kept growing

DurgaS's Index

Originally posted by: Horizon

Durga, Ghazal like takraar.. interesting indeed. Lovely use of words.. muddat, one of most favs. Loved your mention of the Holi confession between the takraar.. a deliberate refusal to accept. The language has a flow, music in it that is greatly enhanced by your style.

Khanjar, I didn't know that word.

Thank you durga. Beautiful piece.