ARIYA SS: Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi..note pg 95 updt

hello people...yeah you guessed it right I am back with another story...this time on Ariya...

I wont waste much time of yours...and i am ready with a guard to protect myself so any amount of anything is fine to throw at me...

I am giving the prologue...please read and tell me whether i should continue...

this work specially dedicated to Goldie...my best inspiration on AF..here you go dear...

thanks
rimi

PROLOGUE         :   PAGE 1
CHAR SKETCH :   PAGE 7
CHAPTER 1         :    PAGE 8
CHAPTER 2        :   PAGE 15
CHAPTER 3       :    PAGE 20
CHAPTER 4         :  PAGE 25
CHAPTER 5         :  PAGE 33
CHAPTER 6         :  PAGE 39
CHAPTER 7         :  PAGE 44
CHAPTER 8         :  PAGE 50
CHAPTER 9         :  PAGE 55
CHAPTER 10       :  PAGE 63
CHAPTER 11       :  PAGE 71
CHAPTER 12       :  PAGE 78
CHAPTER 13       :  PAGE 86
CHAPTER 14       :  PAGE 90
CHAPTER 15       :  PAGE 95(NOTE PM UPDATE)
CHAPTER 16       :  PAGE 102(NOTE)

THREAD TWO

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Edited by rimi_invisible - 10 years ago

Here comes the prologue...

PROLOGUE

Arjun walked into his cabin banging the door behind.He was angry,very angry.He knew he made a mistake.No,not a mistake but a crime it was.It would not only break her heart but her trust.She trusted and loved him with everything she had and he hated her,tortured her and now he betrayed her.

Arjun threw away all the things from his table in one slide movement of his hand.Things fell on the ground,some broke instantly,some dismantled,some spread across the room.His eyes were emitting fire.He was shaking with rage,he sat down on his chair and opened the drawer at the side.He took out a ring from there,a simple diamond ring,with a single diamond on the platinum built.He took that to the lips and kissed it,holding the ring tightly in his hand he kept it close to his heart,tears started flowing from his eyes and down his cheek.Today at last he killed her.

Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna
Besabar ye bewkoof bada
Chahta hai kitna tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan sakaa

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah


please read and give your reviews...
Edited by rimi_invisible - 10 years ago

Nice prologue
Cont soon

fav prologue plz continue

great update
love it
cont soon

Really nice..

I am really flattered dear rimi 

Great Prologue!! 

Amazing prologue dr...!!!!!

like button not working di..
lovely teaser..
well waiting for mine too..
don't worry i stop stalking lolz..
one of my fav songs!
no pm.. ?