Fan Creations
Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
itne updates dene ke baad i was too tired... but i will! 😳 Tonight! 😉
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Originally posted by: --Mahima--
I am so glad nobody else had reserved cause I wanted 2
"Kashaf office se nikal bhi gayi aur mujhe call tak nahi kiya! Koi problem to nahi!", he thought to himself.
He called her cellphone and the service provider said, "The number you're trying to reach is currently switched off. Please try after some time."
Zaroon packed all his belongings and paced out of his workplace and drove back home. He stepped on the breaks making a screeching sound and ran to the main door. The house seemed empty so he ran upstairs to the bedroom and found Kashaf sleeping.
Loved Zaroon's concern to the core
"Kashaf!", he called out in an utmost whisper.
Kashaf wriggled a little and rubbed her eyes. She slightly opened them to look at her over protective husband.
"Zaroon! Tum ghar aa gaye itni jaldi?", she asked.
"Tumhari tabiyat kharaab hai kya?", he asked worriedly.
This scene was mindblowing... the way Zaroon checked Kashaf's fever was beautiful
"Jaan! Come on! Please!", he requested.
She made a face but agreed for his happiness. They drove to the nearby clinic. The doctor took Kashaf inside for a check up as Zaroon sat in the doctor's cabin anxiously.
The doctor came out and spoke, "Mr. Zaroon! You really need to take extra special care of your wife from now! Please let her not go to work and eat well."
"Is she okay?", he asked confused and worried at the same time.
"She is expecting!", the doctor informed.
"Oh she is.. SHE IS WHAT?", he squealed in surprise.
"Expecting!", Kashaf said.
"Baby! You're expecting! REALLY?", Zaroon squealed again in enthusiasm.
"Zaroon! Sit down!", she whispered clutching on to his wrist and pulling him back onto his chair to sit.
Zaroon ka reaction was something that touched my heart... I remember in the show the scene where Kashaf tells Zaroon that she is pregnant... It was one of my favs... you recreated the whole track beautifully
"Thank you Doctor! I will surely be strict with her from now!", replied Zaroon with a gently smile.
Kashaf looked over at him and murmured, "Pehle se hi over protective tha! Pata nahi ab kya hoga!", she sighed.
I am imagine aab kya hoga 😉
"No way Kashaf! Over protective and me?", he confirmed.
"YES! Don't you remember the day I went to Ammi's house for the wqeekend and you were left home alone? You called me like 24 times a day checking on me every hour!", she chuckled.
I agree with Zashaf but I know Kashaf loves this attention 😃
"Mujhe nahi malum tha ke tum Maa banke itni haseen lagogi!", he complemented.
"Nazar ka dhoka bhi to ho sakta hai!", she stated.
"Hmmm ho sakta hai dhokha.", he replied and looked into her eyes with a smirk.
She scrunched her eyebrows and he continued, "Lekin agar dhoka itna haseen ho to khair hai!"
These dialogues were so perfect and flawless
"Crazy woman!", he muttered.
"PSYCHO MAN!", she replied.
"I love you!", he said.
"I know!", she replied and turned to look outside the window as Zaroon chuckled and continued driving home feeling content.
The ending couldn't have been better than this
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Originally posted by: --Mahima--
How do I begin to say Goodbye!!It is the hardest thing to do!!It's the first piece of work I have read on ZashafInfact the only one except your OSThe end is here unfortunatelyI will remember the story till the end.. foreverNow I think I should sign off
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