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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khisher

plzzz update soon๐Ÿฅบ

Awww yeah dear I may update today. Sry for being late. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -desiresoul-

Finally u updated the story ๐Ÿ˜†anyways awesome update loved it poor Khirad is having hard time trusting him and OMG!!! I so hate his mom she is a witch๐Ÿ˜ก and poor Asher is really guilty but u know what he actually kind of deserves it after what he did with Khirad but hope he proves himself again and precap looks nice update soon

Yup ๐Ÿ˜† Indeed, she is.
Thanks a lot for the appreciation and chota sa analysis sis. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaneWhispers

another fantastic update... you are going so good... updating after a long time hun? next time recap mil sakta hai?

Thanks a lot dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ Hehe sry was busy in studies.
Hmm recap next time pakka. ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Brilliant beyond brilliant FF! โค๏ธ


Read it in a go! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Continue soon! ๐Ÿ˜Š

Plz PM me! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

OMG!! That's so over whelming thanks a tonne dear ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ณ
Surely ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Savi_S

wonderful ff...
eagerly waiting to read more...

Thank u so much ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Guys. ๐Ÿค—How are you all? I hope all good๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Finally back with an update. Phew!!
First of all thanking you all for the feedback. It motivates me to write even better. Thanks a ton. You all are my support system. Love you all. โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Really sry for being so late. I cannot promise but surely try to update soon before my exams otherwise to wait is the call.๐Ÿ˜†
Hoping to get an amazing feedback for this one as well.


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A figure in a black and grey attire was standing at the door leaning on the door with hands folded staring at the divine beauty in front. Who else it could be other than Mr.Asher Hussian staring shamelessly at his beautiful wife. Ah how beautiful can she get?' He thought smiling lovingly at her. Simplicity best describes this woman who in her simplicity lost everything that she had. Asher shook his head. He was the reason for all the catastrophic situation that they went through and it was time to mend things. He went towards her and getting close to her whispered, "I love you".

Khirad got goose bumps and her eyes widened so strong was the effect of Asher on her. She still feels for him and how she cannot, of course she would. The part of him was inside her and she could feel him all over. Love is a feeling that can't be forgotten no matter how hard you try. She loved him with all her soul. She turned back to look at him and ended up staring him. His eyes conveyed what is called "Pure Love".She was indeed happy to find what she found in those black orbs. Yes it was indeed love.

The sad part is tha only love cannot build trust in relationships.It cannot restructure lost trust so easily. It needs time. The trust hao be earned. Asher has to certainly earn it. He had to make her believe that she will not be left alone desolated to fight he will be there for her. He had to take her into confidence and make sure that he supports her throughout life. Asher s mistake was not so easy to forget and certainly there's no other way to rectify it. He had to make an extra effort to make her trust him again fully with an assurance of never breaking it again.

"Chalo tayaar ho jao". Asher finally spoke breaking the awkward silence.

"Mujhe kahin nahi jana Asher please." She knew very well of his intensions so denied the offer.

"Chalna tou parega." Asher was adamant.

"Nahi mujhe nahi jana kahin bhi." Khirad was no less even.

He grabbed her wrist making her stop in her place.

"Aik naye safar ke liye chalo. Zindagai ko aik aur moka dene ke liye aur us mohabbat ke liye jo abhi bhi mehkti hai in dilon mein. Zindagi ki tehreer mukamaal karne ke liye. Please Chalo."

"Moka diya tou hai par pata nahi kab tak nibha paungi yeh wada. Zindagi ka yeh safar likhna tou chahati hoon par samajah nahi pa rahi ke shuru kahan se karun. Mohabbat mehkani tou hai phirse magar kaise?" Khirad had endless questions which were not so easy to tackle with.

"Yahin se agaaz karo is naye safar ka jiska faisla kia hai. Aietbaar kar ke dekho is dafa." Asher just needed that bit of trust from her.

"Main janti hoon ke ke aap dil se chahate hain ke sab theek ho jaye par waqt bhi tou sabse bara marham hota hai na." She had made her own calculations.

"Hota hai lekin koshish aur waqt ka saath dono mil jayein tou zakam jaldi bhi tou bhar sakte hain na." He was trying hard to convience her.

"Apki mohabbat par shak nahi hai dukh hai tou is baat ka ke main itne arse mein bhi apka aitemaad na jeet saki." Hurt evident is her tone.

"Aur ab mujhe jeetna hai."

"Aap do minute rukein." He just needed to say that and she was ready.

This is the girl whom he he dared to doubt on. This girl who without much ado gave him a second chance. This chance he should avail with both hands leaving no stone unturned. She was hoping for something better, something that would make her believe that things are going to change and this time for the better. She took her bag and stood in front of him with her head covered and eyes looking down showing her humility. She was just the same.

He needs to change now. Simple yet beautiful. Her traits are surely unmatchable. It seemed difficult to match her but at least he can try to prove that he deserves her at least now.

"Chalein?". Asher came back to reality by her voice and nodded in positive.

On the way he stole glances at her while Khirad just looked out of the window to avoid him. It was so strange for her. Everything seemed indifferent. His behaviour...his presence...his staring and even his talks. It will certainly take time for her to sink in. Fate played all games at her. She sighed and shifted her gaze to her lap looking deeply at it trying to find a reason to be happy. To feel content.

Asher was driving peacefully but leaving no chances of glancing at her. To his dismay she looked upset. Not upset maybe but a bit hesitant. He wanted to hug her straight away. By holding her in his strong arms he could assure her that he's with him and there's nothing to worry. He wanted her to hug it all out but it was not the right time surely. He should give her time. Things should move gradually rather than in a huffed way which could make the situation much more bitter.

"Tou madam apke favourite restaurant a gayein hain chalein?" A smile was playing on his lips as he inquired while she just slightly noded. They went in and looked simply "perfect". Perfect? Well, in the prevailing circumstances it was difficult to say that. But Asher was determined to win her this time around and that too forever. They settled at a far away table. Away from people just the two of them sitting at the furthest corner of the hall.

After a few minutes the waiter came to take the order and surprisingly Asher ordered all her farvourite food. She looked at him rather amused. He smiled at her and she being who she is shyed away. He was aware of her likes by now so this was the first shot from him. The Pakistani food. Of course, it would be. She just loves Pakistani food and the taste it has. Her choice is just like her so simple yet so fulfilling.

"Janta hoon ke mafi magane se kuch nahi hoga isliye nahi magunga."Asher started off the conversation. She looked at him immediately after he spoke. "Tum yahan comfortable nahi ho, ajeeb lag lag raha hai par kuch kehna nahi chahati kyun ke tumhein shayed abhi bhi thoda yakeen hai mujpe ya shayad hamare rishte ki takat par. Sab bolne ke liye jitna waqt chahaiye lo magar please doobara kabhi mujhe chod ke mat jana. Zindagi mein sab kuch bardasht kar sakta hoon par yeh nahi. Insaan hoon na tou glatiyon ka thoda sa margin de dena bas itna ke main doobara unhein dhorane ka na sochun. Bas aitebar karna mujh par hamesha aur bharosa rakhna ke kabhi nahi tootega yeh aitemad jo tumne aj kiya hai."

He pressed her hands tightly to assure her with an appealing smile on his lips. She smiled genuinely seeing his will to get her fully back in his life. In the midist of all this Asher completely won her smile by a simple, "I love you." Khirad was obviously not expecting this and she blushed really hard shying away. Asher smiled widely at her and was yet again mesmerized by her innocence. It might not to be so difficult to make her trust him back but to keep that trust she will bestow on him could be very difficult. She was a such a sensitive soul who would thought of hurting her? Their staring and smiling session was broken by the waiter who had such a perfect wrong timing. Asher cursed him while he smiled at both of them. Asher gave him a deadly glare but instead earned a smile from him again and this time indeed a bigger one.

Asher felt like breaking his whitish teeth when he signaled at their hands which were perfectly placed on each other. It left Mr and Mrs. Asher stunned. They quickly left each other's hands with an embarrassing laugh. While eating the lunch Asher was more lost in her rather than eating. He was admiring her beauty...her personality...her simplicity...her innocence. Ah! She was made perfectly in every inch of it.

Feeling his gaze on her she was quick to look at him, "Kya hua?"

"Hamesha asey hi rahogi na?" Asher's sudden question took her by surprise.

"Huh?"

"Batao na?"

"Asey matlab?"

"Matlab jesi tum ho wesi hi?"

"Apko acha lagta hai?". It pleased her.

"Haan kyun ke yeh tum ho. Apni identity kabhi mat chodna."

"Kabhi nahi. Mujhe nahi badalna kyun ke yakeen hai apni tarbiyat par aur..." She trailed off.

"Aur?"

"Nahi kuch nahi."

"Chalo jaldi khao phir sweetdish". He lightened the moment.

After a delicious lunch it was time for the dessert. It was her favourite "Gulab jamun". She looked lovingly at him and relished her favourites while he enjoyed her company more than anything. After finishing with the food they went to see the direction of the sea waves. Sea view,it was. They stood on the shore with closed eyes enjoying the wind that was blowing rather calmly. They were experiencing the pleasure of being together once again. Trying to absorb the silence. They stood like this for quite a while to sooth their nerves. The silence conveyed so many unsaid words...their hesitation,their pleads, their promises,their vows everything was witnessed by the sea and the wind. The silence beautifully conveyed all the unspoken feelings.

Asher was working on the laptop while Khirad was applying a moisturizer on her hands. They were peaceful. This quietness didn't had a tinge of awkwardness rather it was serene. After another half an hour or so Asher was found yawing while trying to concentrate on his work. Khirad laughed at him. He will always remain a workaholic. He smiled at her and putting all the things on the table went back to the bed. It was time for having a good night's sleep.

An unknown smile crept on Asher's face as he saw Khirad lying down beside him. Ah! How amazing it felt to have your companion by your side. His smile grew bigger as he saw Khirad much peaceful. She was content. He heaved a sigh of relief seeing her peaceful. She looked like an innocent baby that needs to be protected from the evils of the world. Khirad felt his eyes on her she looked at him just to find him staring at her and she jerked him a bit to which he laughed. The lights were off and Asher and Khirad lay on the same bed after what felt like ages that too without any hesitation. But still much had to be done.

Things were in progress. But Asher needs to bit a watchful as well, making sure of committing no mistake this time around. That was a clam ending to rather enjoyable day but God knows what might follow.

Edited by HSFA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
YAYYY!!! finally u updated..thank u soo muchโค๏ธ
it was tooo good...amazing...reading this while hearing ek boond ishq song...AHHH MAZA A GYA YAAR๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Thank u sooo much for writing this...love u for thisโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Last line did made me suspicious..wonder they still have to face more
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG...
Fati...
Ur last update was on 31st August,
Uff...u r a sloth ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

But..
Der aayed darust aeyed๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Khisher scenes were so cute..
Asher ordering Khirad's favourite cuisine..
Pakistani food ๐Ÿ˜Š
Sweet dish is Gulab jamun ๐Ÿ˜›
Our khirad is so simple n bholi bhali โค๏ธ

I wanna see them like this..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Update! โค๏ธ
Finally they are spending quality time together! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Asher has a lot of work to do before he gains her trust again!
Continue soon!
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