*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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This part is dedicated to my sister Rasgulla_sp because she complains I never dedicate anything to her 😆

Edited by lazyleaves - 10 years ago

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Nalayak!

Tujhe bola tha na maine... How many times did I tell you to NOT start any story till you finish Late? You know how much I adore Late. And now this! This one is dripping in chashni. Now I will have to hound you to update TWO stories. You get some sadistic pleasure in troubling me, don't you?

If I were one of those sisters I would have been jealous of you. But I am not, so I am happy that you are writing this. Still, I can't help but wish that I were writing this.

I liked that Arnav instinctively feels Khushi's proximity to him. Though he has not seen her the house feels lively to him.

I liked how Dhruv's character was introduced. Quite a shocker! Those who have read the update will know what I mean.

I liked how every one loves Khushi.

I liked how Arnav and Khushi love each other (I know, I know Dilli abhi door hain but I can feel it).

Btw, who in his/her right frame of mind didn't answer Arnav Singh Raizada's phone call?

Now update soon!

PS: Dedicate kiya ke mujh par ahsan (Sami you know what this refers to 😉) kiya. Rakh apna dedication apne pass 😊
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

I thought this was the first part and I wouldn't have any questions to look answers for...But again you have to leave me wondering right? Who was it that didn't pick up his call ?
Calling at 4.00 and expecting to pick up is cruel...But still...

Lazy, I can't tell you how much I loved this part...

Loved Arnav and Khushi's banter like always :D They're so cute even though they fight all the time...

And there's Dhruv for the jealousy quota...
Arnav is already gettin irritated by Dhruv's attention to Khushi :D

A Jalebi-fied tale 😃 I know its gonna be sweet...

Can't wait to read more of this SS :)
Edited by asrcraze - 11 years ago

Hey Lazy :)

Looks like you started with the 1st one! :D

First of all i love the name of the SS!

Loved it! <3

This is gonna be Epic! :D

A jealous Arnav , a flirty Dhruv..and both want Khushi!
And Anjali as usual is upto her match-making tricks!

Loved the fun filled environment at the breakfast table!

I just love a jealous Arnav!
This is gonna be fun!


Edited by ipkkndfanforeva - 11 years ago

Zehra!!!!!Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 11 years ago

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Yay!! The story I wanted.. a jealous arnav and a crazy khushi both at it with their knok joks
And rivalry with a Passion in between.. and the person to ignite that fire will hopefully be dhruv.. LOL..
I love how dhruv is smitten of khushi and arnav can sense that and khushi being absolutely clueless.. aha, I thought twas arnav staring at khushi but when he asked di who that girl was, I.was think o'oh arnav doesn't know khushi' but thank goodness it was dhruv that didn't know who she was.. pheww..
Brilliant..!!!Edited by .._sonii_.. - 11 years ago

Woah made it to the first page!

Im liking this SS already, I like Arnavs jealousy, Khushis bubbliness and a flirting Dhruv. Im so glad you picked option one the summary of it looked really good and so far this story seems to be a happy one, and the bond between all the characters is something nice to see😊

Edited by mayabegum - 11 years ago

aweee...a new and a cute story...😃😃

Awww this going to be epic huge I love love love a jealous Arnav... Superb... Waiting for the next update :)