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Part 50

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Maan: geet kha ho tum

Samne aayo


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Geet: maan thoda intzaar kro

Intzaar ka fal mitha hota hai'..

Maan: mujhe fruit khane ka is waqt mann nhi hai

Geet: soch lo maan

Maan: soch liya

Mein jaane se phle tumhare sath waqt bitana chahta hu

Aur tum hide n sick play kr rhi ho'


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Part

Maan : geet bahar aayo

She opened the door and came outside from the room'

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(2nd , 3rd and 6th dress get high votes... but 2nd dress win......)

Maan : geet

He wants to say '. But paused due to her presence'. She looks gorgeous''


The Beauty Of A Woman

Is Not In The Clothes She May Wear,

Nor The Way She Combs Her Hair.

The Lovely Figure That She Carries,

Or Any Innocence Before She Marries

The Beauty Of A Woman

Is Seen In The Depth Of Her Eyes

The Place Where Her Love Resides.

Where The Doorway To Her Heart Is Seen

(credit goes to unknown writer)

Maan(whisper) : marne ka irada hai kya

Geet: maan kuch kh rhe the aap

Khiye na

Maan: Mein wo

Wo mein

Geet: isse aage bhi kuch khehna hai'. Ya bs

She came close to him and slides her hand on his neck'

Geet: khiye na maan'.. mein sun rhi hu

She caressed his cheek with one palm and another hand rest on his neck'

Geet: kuch nhi khehna aapko..

Thik hai

To fir mein chalti hu''

Maan(whisper) : chalti hu

She removed the hand and lightly goes back' but he pulled her by waist' due to sudden jerk she falls on his chest'

Maan : kha jaa rhi ho tum

Geet : date pe

Maan : what?

Geet: hmm

Maan: geet tumhe mjak suj rha hai

Geet: maine to kaha hi nhi ye mjak hai

Aapko asa kyun lag rha hai''.

She is looking straight in his eyes'..

Geet : maan maine apko ye to btaya hi nhi'

Mein kiske sath jaa rhi hu''

His hands move towards face' his hot breath fanning on her face'.

Maan: geet tum kuch kh rhi thi'

Kho na'

Geet : maan wo ''

Mein yash ke sath'.

Without any delay he captured her soft supple lips in his rough one'.

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her hands automatically moved to his shoulder and clutched his neck tightly'.

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He started nibbling her lips with his full mouth and she also responds him' he pulled her more by waist and then he entered his tongue in her mouth'their tongue entangled with each other'.

He was chewing her soft lips' and she was nibbling his lower lip'.due to lack of air he release her lips'.and move towards her neck'

His lips kissing her collarbone'.while his hand roaming on her back and waist'..

She was pulling him more close to her body by neck'' she was moaning in pleasure'..

Geet : maan''.

Both lost into each other but jolted due to sudden ring of mobile'.

He backed off and she straightens herself''

and do vote... for which ff u want next update...

link

previous part on page 102

Teaser...


next part 51 on page 137

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lehr

lovely teaser

3rd pic


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Posted: 11 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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