MG OS - Heartless - Page 3 | Geet

KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

beautiful emotional os

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Avani

@avani_9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

maddy u r really HEARTLESS...always give us sad OS...
but i have to admit that its heart touching and i loved it to core...
the way u describe geets feeling toward her daughter and also for maan...m totally speech less...
u made me cry...
i think u love this song..."i dont know why but i love to see you cry"
dont u ???
but i love to cry after reading ur update 😉
u r totally mind blowing...n ur writing skill is fabulous...
come up with new and SAD OS soon...
thnx 4 d pm...

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

you heartless,

why you have to be so good in writing tradegy and pain

dont u know its effect on our poor heart

seems i am in love of writings of a heartless writer, who to my surprise love its readers

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592342

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awesome os. love the way u write the feelings of a mother who want to save life of her daughter.

thanks for pm

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shreeyazz

@shreeyazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

heyy maandy...😃

had been waiting for soo long... u hadn't pm'd anything n ol...! so when i saw ure msg i waz exited..!😉 and definitely it was worth the effort..! once again...

awesumly written...!😉

but this one is the saddest...

amongst all your works...!😭

but again it waz awesum as usual...

i loved it..!

so now after making all of us cry...u now definitely need to make up for it ...!😉

so next "os" shud b a bit on the happier side n ol..! like "SOLITARY"...! it waz such a peice of art..! n also had a happy ending..!😉

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Classy_Gal

@Classy_Gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

it sounds like zindagi rocks to me...sushmita sen n shiney ahuja one..!!!

but must say very very well written

amazing maddy

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Angel

@amita5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

sad story...please dont write such sad stories..it hurts to read them

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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

awsome manddy

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr
AMAZING <3

Time nathi etle moti comment nathi aapti pan bau saras hatu, saache <3 :)

xoxo
Aanya

Bas te kidhu etle final ! 😉 Me Mani lidu, saras j hase ne ? To to j tame LIKE karo ! 😳

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Maddy

@iMadz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: bansipatel
Beautifully written maddy...loved it to the core...!!
she was a heartless woman 4 maan n her daughter Kriya...still they loved her irrevocably...geet never expressed her love openly but before going she did...she did say she loves him...n that made maan smile thru his tears...
she was a fighter n she had to win the battle of saving her baby...wich she did beautifully...she sacrificed her own life for hers...she was a MOTHER...n mothers can go to ny extent to save their baby whether be it taking their own lives too...n that is the same thing geet did...maan supported her in all ways that he could..n they won the battle...maan had a reason now to stay alive as he had to look after Kriya...wich he did immensely...they both enjoyed their life together n he was always smiling coz geet accepted her feelings...😊...
Amazingly written maddy...👏 👏 👏
beautiful..
loved the OS a lot...!!!

Aww...Thank you so much ! 🤗🤗🤗 For this I will get new name, 'Heartless' for sure ! 😆

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