MAANEET IF--IS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DU

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Posted: 12 years ago


 Prologue


"PYAAR"-khne ko adhura sabd,
Pyaar ka phla akshar adhura hota hai,
Fir bi apne me kitna sampurn(pura) hota hai
Zindagi me aa jaye , to khushiyo se bar de,
Aur dur ho jaye to dard de jaye,

Isi tarah pyaar ki kashmaksh me fasse hai maan aur geet,
Jo chahake bi apne pyaar ko naam nhi de paye,
Aur jb diya
To halato ne un palo ko jine nhi diya,

Asi hi kahani hai maan aur geet ki,
Jinhe takdeer ne milaya,
Pyaar ki khubsurat dhor me banda
Pr fir,
Halato ne unhe ek dusre se juda kr diya,
Kya vishwaas ki dor itni kamjor thi,
Ki vo tufan ko sh na saki,
Jisne unki pyar ki neev ko bi hila diya,
Kya maan geet ki ankho mein apne liye pyaar ko bi na dekh saka,
Uske dard ko bi nhi smjh saka,
Kya koi sach,
Ya phir koi jhoot,
Jo halato ki wajah se kbhi kaha gya,
Jo ek sach sa bn gya

Ek rishte ko ase mod pe lake khada kr sakta hai,
Jha bs judai hai,
Ek dusre tk wapas puchne ka koi rasta na ho,
Kya taqdeer unhe fir se mila payengi,
Kya maan geet ke us sach ko samajh payenga,
Jis adhure sach ne unhe juda kr diya,
Kya wo pura sach jahir hone pe,
Unhe fir se mila payenga.
Aaj wo sath hai,
Pr wo judaai ka dard,
Un haseen bare palo ko kho dene ka dard,
Khi na kahi
Aaj bi zinda hai,
Un yaado me,
Jinme wo ek bi huye,
Khuda ne unke is rishte ko tohfe ye nwaja bi,
Pr taqdeer ne,
Ya kahe naseeb ne,
Us tohfe ko unse chin liya,
Kya wahi khushi,
Wo fir se apni zindagi me la payenge,
Is pyaar ko naam de payenge?
 

part 1 on page 2

 part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43954009�


part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=4

 part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=6�

part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=7�

part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44218570�

part 7

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1712902&TPN=9�

part 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=11�

part 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=12

part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=16�

part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=18

part 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=20

part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45298200�

part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45466978�

part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=31�

part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=34�

part 18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45858855�

part 19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=39�

promo aur precap for part 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46252187�

part 20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1712902?pn=45

part 21

part 22

precap for part 23

part 23

part 24

part 25

part 26

part 27 a and part 27 b

part 28(A)

part 28(B)

part 29

part 30

thread 2

kaisa ye pyaar hai--maaneet if

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow u actually named it as the new serial of 4 lion
nice concept continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww.. its soo nice..πŸ‘
 plz continue it soon..
n plz PM mee.. or post the link on my FB wall wenevr u update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice concept.pls pm me and add me in ur buddy list
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was confused reading the title, please write FF in the title, as the topic kind of misleading, I thought u posted the topic in wrong forum when I saw the title of it...
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
wounderful concept...pls comtinue...show mein kiss miss or concept mein bhi...anyway nice ...really lovely ...i will wait for ur next post ...i mean contination of this concept...loved it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
but for me IPKND seems same as Geet with slight changes in characters
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Posted: 12 years ago

Is pyaar ko kya naam du

One point I would to clear since people were getting confused, I actually wanted the story itself 

 

Dev is not maan 's  brother, he is  just another guy. Ok

 

Part 1

 

Khurana mension

 

Today khurana mension  are decorated very beautiful  with white orchards

Jaise koi dulhan sajti hai, apne sajan ke liye

Waise hi jgmga rha tha kuch shama

Charo taraf khusiyan hi khusiyan

 

 

Daadi: bte aap tyaar bhi ho gye

Maan: ha daadimaa

Daadi: aur geet kaha hai

Maan: daadimaa, wo abhi tk so rhi hai

Daadi: bte usse abhi sone dijiye

Maan: hmmm

 

Daadimaa ye sb kisliye

Daadi: bte aap nhi jante

Maan: janta hu daadimaa, pr itna sb kuch krne ki kya jaroort thi

Daadi: ab aap hme bataiynge kya krna hai aur kya nhi

Maan: nhi daadimaa, asa nhi hai mere khne ka mtlb won hi tha

Daadi: ya fir aajke liye koi special plan to nhi tha

Maan: kya daadimaa

Daadi: bte wo hume kaise pta hoga

Some thing romantic

Hmmm, jaise

Maan: nhi daadimaa, bilkul bhi nhi

Daadi: to jaiye , dekhiye geet uthi ya nhi

Maan left the place

 

Daadi mummers bte  aap bhi na

 

In maaneet room

 

Maan come near to the geet and put his curly hair which was fall on her face, adjust behind the ears and kiss on her forehead

 Geet tum sote huye  pyaari lagti ho

 

Maan bs dekhe hi jar ha tha

Mahi mein mahi ve''''''''''''''''''.

'''''''''..

 

Geet take his hand and put under her face

 

Geet: mtlb jagte huye nhi lagti

Maan: iska mtlb tum jaagh rhi ho

Geet: nhi mein to so rhi hu

Maan: acha abhi btata hu

Geet: maan chodiye na

Maan:  nhi

Geet: plz maan

Acha sorry

Ab to jane dijiye

Maan: nhi ase nhi, jana hai to

Sajaa complete krne ke baad jana

 

Geet : sajaa

Maan: tyaar ho mrs khurana sajaa ke liye

Geet: acha, thik hai

       Phle chodiye mujhe

Maan: chod diya to tum chli jayungi

Geet: maan nhi jayungi

Maan: mein nhi janta kya tumhe

Geet: acha, sja to bataiye

 

 

Maan want to kiss on his lips

 



Geet: maan abhi

Maan: hmmm

Geet: nhi, abhi nhi

         Mujhe tyaar hona hai, chodfiye

Maan: nhi

Geet again refuses it

 

Maan: geet khi tum ase hi meri baahon mein to rhna nhi chahti

 

Geet: maan plz

Aap meri itni se baat nhi maan skte

Geet make baby face

Maan: no plz,

         Aur acting bnd karo

Geet I am waiting

 Geet mummers aajto tu acha fassi

 

Maan: sochna bnd karo

Koi fayda nhi hai

Mein tbtk tumhe jane nhi dunga

Geet: ok , pr meri bhi ek shart hai

Maan: shart

Geet: ha

Maan: ase thode hota hai

Geet: achaji, aap rkh skto ho, pr mein nhi

That's nt fair

Maan: acha bolo

Geet: aap apni aankhen bnd kijiye mujhe sharam aati hai

Maan: bs itni se baat

Geet put her hand around his neck

 

Geet: hmmm

Maan daadimaa

Maan: geet mjak bnd karo

Daadimaa yha kaise aa skti hai

Geet: maan mudke to dekhiye

Maan turn'kha hai geet'

Geet: sorry maan abhi mood nhi hai

Maan: abhi thik krta hu tumhare mood ko

Maan isse phle pakad pata

Geet enter in washroom

 

 

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

HEY ALL OF U


KOI MUJHE YE BATAYE
SBKO EK SATH PM KAISE KR SKTE HAI


I hav sent u a PM abt that..
Do see n PM mee.. πŸ˜ƒ
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Awesome n plzzz add me 2 ur pm