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Part 7

 

Maaneet ff ' is pyaar ko kya naam du

 

Daadi: maan bte

No response

Daadi tochad his shoulder, bte

Maan turn

Ye kya bte aapko aankho mein aansoo

Maan wipes his tears

Maan: nhi daadimaa, wo aankh me kuch chla gya tha

Daadi: bte, aap hmse bi nhi khenge

Hm jante hai, hamari wajah se

Maan: nhi daadimaa, asa kuch nhi hai

Daadi: bte na hum wo purani baatein karte,

Aur na hi aapko wo purane pal yaad aate

 

Maan hugged the daadi

Nhi daadimaa, mein to ye soch rha tha, meri wajah se geet ko kitna sb kuch dekhna peda

Aaj bi yaad hai daadimaa kuch hi pal phle mujhe itni badi khushi mili thi, aur dusre hi pal saari khusiyan firse bhikhar gyi

 

Daadi: bte, hamari taraf dekhiye, geet ko us sadme se bahar aane ke liye kitna lamba waqt lag gya, ydi unhone aapko ase dekha to unke zkhm fir se tajaa ho jayenge

Jo abhi tk puri trh bare bhi nhi hai, chaliye ab aansu puchiye, aur niche aaiye

Aapki dulhan aapka intzaar kr rhi hai

Maan pass weak smile

Hmmm

 

 

 

In maaneet room

 

Beauticians came to help geet to dress up for the wedding she wore a lehanga, it was richly embroidered , made  of heavy quality material and had a shade  of red and pink combination as it is auspicious with matching choli as they tied the knot. She shied with the squeeze she felt.

 

Once dressed ladies helped her to put on her chudas (red and white wedding bangles) and her gold heavy wedding jewellery.

The jewellery was tastefully selected to have the bend of modern and ethical flavor. Finally a red and gold duppatta was pined to her hair and then geet was ready to go.

It took hairs to dress her up. They made her wear the golden heavy anklets that glittered around the beautifully decorated legs, she looked gorgeous

 

Maan was sure to go flat.

 

Her make up was done carefully, eyelashes, lipstick, mascara etc, was applied in a way that it was adding to her prevailing beauty. She looked beautiful, her dress was shining brilliance.

 

Geet in bridal outfit


She was not able to look at herself in the mirror, she really felt shy. She looked truly maan dulhan now.

 

 

In hall

 

In mandap

 

Pandit to daadiji'shadi ka muhrat bs thode der me suru hona wala hai

Daadi: dulha to aa gya hai bs dulhan aati hogi

 

Hum abhi dekhke ate hai pndit ji

 

Pandit :ji

 

Daadi: anie jake dekho geet tyaar huyi ya nhi

Annie: ji daadimaa

 

 

 

In maaneet room

 

Beautician: madam, you look so pretty

 

Gaat: thanks

Annie knocks the door

Kya mein andhr aa skti hu

 

Geet: ha anie aayo na

Beautician: madam aaram se, aapka lehanga

Annie: bhabhi, khud ko aayne mein dekha ya nhi

 

Ek baar nazre uthake kudko dekhiye to shi bhabhi

Geet blushed more

 

Bhabhi srmana chodiye , aaj to bhaiya gaye, wo to dekhte rh jayenge

 

Beautician: really me madam aap bhut beautiful lag rhi hai

 

Annie: bhabhi common

Geet see herself in mirror and feel shyer

 

 

Annie: chliye bhabhi , aapka koi besabri se intzaar kr rha hai

Nazre jamake baithe hoge aaj to rashte pe

 

 

 

In hall

 

Daadi: maan bete ,kha dekh rhe hai

Maan: khi nhi daadi

Daadi: bete humse kaisa chupana

Hum aapki daadi hai

 

Maan: nhi daadimaa, asa kuch nhi hai, mein geet ka intzaar nhi kr rha hau

 

Daadi: bete humne kb kha aap geet ka intzar kr rhe hai

 

Maan: daaadimaa wo

Daadi: rhne bi dijiye

Hum sb jante hai

 

Wo bs aati hogi

 

Maan: hmm

 

Daadi: bete anurag koi phone aaya

Maan: nhi daadimaa

Mein abhi krke dekhta hu, pta nhi kha rh gya

 

Anurag: mein yha hu

Daadi: bete ye koi aaine ka time hai

 

Aur tani kha hai

 

Anurag: daadi ye rhi

Anurag and tani bent down and touch her foot

 

Daadi: khush rhiye bete

 

Hamari bahu bhut pyaari hai

Tani bete hath aage kriye

 

Daadi gifted a khanghan

 

Tani: daadi ye ap kya kr rhi hai

 

Daadi: daadi bhi khte ho aur sawal bhi puchte ho

Tani: sorry daadi

Both hug each other

 

Maan: mujhse nhi milenga

Anu: daadi ye kaun hai

 

Daadi: bete abhi tk aap dono ka zagda khtm nhi huya

 

Maan: common yaar

Anurag: meri shaadi mein aaya nhi

Sukr mna mein aa gya , sirf aapni daadi ki wjh se

 

Maan: wo mein

 

Anurag: mujhe pta hai, MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA  kitne busy rhte hai

 Dosto ke liye bhi waqt nhi hai

 

Maan: meri baat sumega

 

Anu: kya?

 

Maan: bs ab jo mein khu usse sun

 

 

Anu: dekha tani, ye hai maan ka gussa

 

Maan: tune bhabhi se kya kha

 

Anu: jo sch hai

 Pta nhi meri bhabhi kaise shti hogi

Waise meri bhabhi hai kha

 

 

 

 

Maan: anu

Daadi: aap dono ldna bnd kriye

Chotte bacho ki trh ladte hai

 

Anu tani aap jake fresh ho jaiye

Aur jldi se aiye

 

Anu: ji daadi

Chlo tani

 

Maan mein abhi aata hu

 

Congrates

Yaar

 

Maan and anu hugs each other

 

 

Daadi: nakul inhe guest room mein leke jaiye

 

Nakul: ji

 

 

 

 

 

Geet enter in the hall with annie

 

Meera cme near to geet and hugs

 

Geet : it  ok, thanks to babaji ,  tu shaadi hone se phle aa gyi

 

 

Meera: bs bi kr

Aa to gyi hu

Anie: aap dono baatein kriye mein abhi aati hu

Geet : hmmm

 

Acha meera dev kha rh gya

Meera: bs car park krke ate hnge

 

 

Dekh aa gye

 

Dev: hey geet, kaisi ho

Geet: dev mein bilkul thik hu

Acha hua tum dono aa gye

 

 

At other side

 

 

 

Adi: sirrr

 

Sir ko kya hua hai

 

Maan ki nazre nhi ht rhi thi geet se wo kaise aur kisi ki baat sunta

 

 

Annie came beside the maan

Anie: sshhh

Adi: sir ko kya hua hai, kuch kh kyun nhi rhe hai

 

Annie: relax, ab khenge

 

(In loud voice at the near of ear)

Bhaiii

 

Maan came back from dreams and shout on the annie

 

Maan: ye kya mjak hai anie

 

(bechara adi to drr ke mare kapne laga)

 

 

Daadi see the all act and came near towards the maan

 

Daadi: bete kya hua hai.

Aap itna gussa kyun lag rhe hai

 

Maan: kuch nhi daadi maa

Pta nhi kya ho gya tha

 

Annie: sory bhai

Maine aapko khwabo se bahar nikal diya isliye

 

Daadi: kaunse khwab

 

Maan: kuchj nhi dadimaa

 

Ye anie yuhi bakwas kr rhi hai

 

Anie: ha daadi maa ab to bhai ko meri baatein bakwas hi lagegi

Making a baby face

 

Adi: hehheheheh

 

Maan: adi

 

Adi: sory sir

 

 

 

Precap;

 Will u marry me?

 

 

Again

 

 

 

Hope u like it

Today update

 

 

Sorry for delay

 

 

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Part 8

Is pyaar ko kya naam du



 

At other side

 

 

 

Adi: sirrr

 

Sir ko kya hua hai

 

Maan ki nazre nhi ht rhi thi geet se wo kaise aur kisi ki baat sunta

 

 

Annie came beside the maan

Anie: sshhh

Adi: sir ko kya hua hai, kuch kh kyun nhi rhe hai

 

Annie: relax, ab khenge

 

(In loud voice at the near of ear)

Bhaiii

 

Maan came back from dreams and shout on the annie

 

Maan: ye kya mjak hai anie

 

(bechara adi to drr ke mare kapne laga)

 

 

Daadi see the all act and came near towards the maan

 

Daadi: bete kya hua hai.

Aap itna gussa kyun lag rhe hai

 

Maan: kuch nhi daadi maa

Pta nhi kya ho gya tha

 

Annie: sory bhai

Maine aapko khwabo se bahar nikal diya isliye

 

Daadi: kaunse khwab

 

Maan: kuchj nhi dadimaa

 

Ye anie yuhi bakwas kr rhi hai

 

Anie: ha daadi maa ab to bhai ko meri baatein bakwas hi lagegi

Making a baby face

 

Adi: hehheheheh

 

Maan: adi

 

Adi: sory sir



 

Maan: hmmm

Daadi: bte itna gussa

Maan: wo

Daadi: bte ab chliye mahurat ka time ho gya hai

Maan: hmmm

 

Maan take steps towards geet

Maan held her hands with pure love and care

Geet mein tumse kuch kha chahta hu

 

Meera: jiju abhi khena hai

Hume hi kh dijiye

Hm kh denge geet ko

 

Maan: mujhe geet se hi khena hai

Geet: maan abhi , is waqt


Maan: ha geet, phle bi khehna chahata tha, pr us waqt mere 

khne se jyada krna jaroori tha

Daadi came near to the both

 

Daadi: bte, jo bi khehna hai baad mein kh dena geet ko

Abhi muhrat ka time ho rha hai

 

Maan: nhi daadimaa, phle hi bhut late ho chukka hai, aur nhi

Daadi: thik hai bte, jaise aapki marzi

Meera dev aap aaye na hamare sath

Dev: ji daadimaa

 

 

Maan held her hands and came between the hall


Geet: maan asa kya hai jo aap khehna chahte hai,

Maan jldi khiye na, mujhe darr lg rha hai

 

Maan pressed her lips with his fingers'

Maan: chup bilkul chup


All lights off

Spot light highlighted the moment



Maan distant his finger from her lips

Maan: geet jb maine tumse shaadi ka fasla liya tha, toh 

tumse pucha tk nhi

(geet kuch khan chahti hai, lekin)

 

Mein janta hu geet tum kya khan chahti ho, mera fasla shi 

tha 

yhi na

She nodded

Pr geet fir bhi mujhe puchna chahiye tha

Geet: maan asa nhi hai


Maan: geet mein janta hu, us waqt mere liye sbse upar 

hamara pyaar tha,

Aur aaj bhi hai,

Us waqt bs mein apne pyaar ko naam dena chahte tha,

Tumse puch tk nhi ska

 

Geet: maan , aap nhi

"Hum" apne pyaar ko naam dena chahte the

Maan smiled

 

Aur aapke hr fesle mein aapki geet aapke sath hai

Mein us waqt bhi aapke sath thi,

Aaj bhu hu maan

 

Maan: mein janta hu geet, tum hamesha se mere sath ho

 

"Tum kb meri zindagi mein shamil ho gyi,

Kb in saanso ka hissa bn gyi,

Is dil ko pta hi nhi chla

 

Geet tumse kb meri zindagi jud gyi,

Iska mujhe ehsaas hi nhi huya,

Bs aaj mein itna janta hu,

MAAN GEET ke bina adhura hai,

Uske pyaar ,

Uske sath,

Ke bina wo kuch bi nhi hai"

 

Tears fall down from her eyes

 

Maan: geet ye kya , mujhe laga tha tumhe acha lagega

Geet: maan

He understand her feeling very well

 

Maan: geet aaj mein sbke samne tumse kuch khehna chahta

hu

Tumhari marzi janana chahta hu,

 

Maan bent down on his knees and take her hand in his hand


Geet: ye aap sbke samne kya kr rhe hai


Maan: geet maine abhi tumse kuch kha tha

(geet chup ho jati hai)

 

Maan:  Will you marry me

Again'

She silent

Maan: geet bolo na, mein tumhare jwab ka intzaar kr rha hu

 

She nodded

Maan: geet ase nhi

Geet see in his eyes "fir kaise"

Maan: jaise maine kaha geet

 

Geet: maan,

Mera jwab "haa" hai

 

He stands and says

"I LOVE U GEET"

She blushed

 

Maan: geet, kaho na

You love me or not

 

Geet: maan sbke samne

 

Annie: common bhabhi

Kho na

Bhai ne itne pyaar se prupose kiya hai


Meera: geet common yaar


Anurag: I am impressed maan singh khurana

Mujhe nhi ptya tha aap itne romantic bhi hai

 

Tani: geet

 

Geet see in his eyes and after this look down

 

Maan: geet  meri aankhon mein dekhe

He cupped her face from his fingers


Maan: jb maan singh khurana sbke samne kh skta hai, to 

mrs 

khurana kyun nhi

Geet: I love you maan

I love you 2



 

She blushed more and hugged his tightly

maan(whispers in her ear): sbke samne I love you khne me 

itna sarma rhi thi,

aur ab to sbke samne gale lga liya,

Waha meri mishti

He hugged her more tightly'

Abhi kitne roop baki hai aapke dekhne meri mishti

 

Lights will open

Daadi: bte hum sb bhi yhi the

Both take steps backward

Dono dur ho jate hai

 

 

At other side

Pinki:  wow sir kitne romantic hai

Hume to pta hi nhi tha

Adi: heheheheh

Ha pinki

Annie came near

Annie: hume bhi kaha pta tha

Adi:hehehehe



 

 

Precap: marriage

Kiski

Hamare maaneet ki

And one twist

Guess kr skte ho to karo

 

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago