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NICE UPDATE  CONTINUE SOON PLZZZ.

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Beautiful Creation...Yaaar...IS Pyaar ka naam...Maneet Danishti hai... <3 u Maneet

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just caught up on all paarts...just one word amazing...waiting for you to unfold the past now

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waiting๐Ÿ˜”
plz update n what their past ummm
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original posted by
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just caught up on all paarts...just one word amazing...waiting for you to unfold the past now


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hey interesting ff...
read it all in one go...
wanna know wat happened in their past...
i wish if he cud travel to ooty & give her surprise...
pl cnt soon

past mein kya hua
dheere dheere pta chl jayenga
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Part 21

Maaneet ff--is pyaar ko kya naam du

 



Maan: geet ab sarmana bnd karo

Miss u jaan


Geet: miss you too.

She cuts the call and ready for enter in house.

 

Kaka came near the geet and said "geet beti tum yha"

Geet: ji kaka

Kuch kaam tha

Kaka: to beti andher chalo

Geet: meri keys kha gyi

Kaka: ek pal ruko beti, mere pass chabbi hai

Kaka opens the door.

Geet: kaka abs b kaise hai aapke pariwaar mein

Kaka: sb thik hai beti

 

Jb mein wapas aaya, na aap yha thi, aur rahul baba bi mujhpe ghar ki zimmedari  chodke chle gye...

Aur fir aap dono kbhi wapas nhi aaye...

 

Geet: kaka, mein thk gyi hu

Baad mein baat krte hai

Kaka: thi hai beti, tum aaram karo

Mein tumhare liye kuch khane ko lata hu

Geet: ji

Geet enter in her room.

 

 

 

Jb mein aur rahul yha phli baar aaye the

Kitne khush the

Hum dono ke sapno ki shurat yhi se huyi thi

 

Flashback

Geet: rahul, hum yha to aa gye

Pr rhenge kha,

Tumne to kaha tha,hospital wale tumhe ghar allot karenge, aura b unhone mana kr diya...

Rahul: to jhara chup rhengi

Ek baar bolna suru krti hai, to stop hi nhi lagati ghadi mein...

Geet: mere chup rhne se tumhari problem solve hoti hai

Toh karo...

 

 

Rahul: idea...๐Ÿ˜‰

 

Geet: kaisa idea

Rahul:chl

Geet: pr kaha

Rahul: chup chap chlna hai to chl

Geet: tum aur tumhare bekar ke idea

Btata bhi nhi hai

Rahul: tujhe ydi raat road pe hi gujarni hai...

Toh ruk yha...

Mein to chla

Geet: rahulll

Rahul: chila mat

Chl meri maa

Geet: mera saman to utha๐Ÿ˜†

Rahul:

Geet: ek hi expression dena bnd kar

Chl ab jldi kar๐Ÿ˜†

Rahul{oh god ye antic piece aapko mere pass hi bejna tha.

Babaji mujhe bachaooo'

Oh god iske sath rhte rhte mujhe bi babaji khne ki aadat lag gyi}

Geet: tujhe yhi rukna hai kya

 

 

Both came near to one house.


Geet: ye ghar kiska hai

Rahul: ye mera ghar hai

Geet: tumhara

Ye kb hua

Aur waise jb tumhare pass ghar tha'..

To hospital jo ghar allot kr rhi thi, won hi mila, to tum itna pareshan kyun huye

Rahul: question machine๐Ÿ˜ก

Geet: rahulll

Rahul: Geet please chila mat

Mein btata hu.

Maine abi is ghar ki bs down payment ki hai

Tb tak mein iski full payment nhi karta , tb tk ye ghar puri trh se mera nhi honga

Geet: oh'''

To fir bhi hum andher kaise jayenge

Rahul: chabbi se

Darwaze ko kholke

Mein gate open karu

Geet: to jldi kholo

Rahul open the door and both enter in house.

Geet: rahul ye key tere pass kha se aayi, jha tk

Rahul: Geet maine unse special ek din ke liye li hai.

Mein tumhe ye ghar dikhana chahta tha.

Ok.

Ab mein sona chahta hu

Geet: to maine kha roka hai

So ja

Pr mujhe mera room bta de.

Flashback

 

Bechare rahul ko maine kitna pareshan kiya.

Kaka: beti kuch khalo

Geet: ji

 

In Mumbai

Maan: adi, mujhe saare paper aaj hi ready chahiye

Adi: yes sir

Maan: flight kitne bje hai

Adi: sir wo

Maan: wo kya adi

Adi: sir, aaj ki koi ticket available nhi hai, wapas jane ki

Maan: maine tumhe kha tha, maine ussi din wapas jana hai

Adi: sorry sir

Maine inform kiya tha geet madam ko

Sir ki next flight ki return ticket book nhi ho payi hai.

Maan {geet ko achi trh pata tha, mujhe is baat ka pta hota, to mein meeting hi postpone kr deta.

Usne janbuzkar meri meeting book ki.}

 

Precap: small fight๐Ÿ˜ฒ


part 22

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