UPS & DOWNS (MG) Epilogue (page117) 23rdJUl - Page 15

Hey shruti di!

congratzzz on new ff...

very nice story is running too fast n geet is leaving maan now what is store next for us

read the story finally... 😊👏👏

its fresh concept. altough i dont like the idea of pre marital s** really but for a fiction it could happen😉😉😉 off course it just a fiction.. and i really like the way u wrote... but Geet was unsure about her feelings for him initially, i mean if she love him or not , she told so to chameli so how can she loose herself to such an extent...and Maan also never said he is going to marry her in future and if i am not wrong he hadnt thought uptill yet about marriage... all he want is to her to be with him... i found Maan a desperate guy... doing God knows what behind the chawl and then finding peace with Chameli and then with Geet he started at every possible place.. deserted office building, empty shop... now geet is preggy, couldnt chameli advise the couple to use protection when she knew everything about thier relation and she herself use it... 😉 although i dont believe in marriages with such age diference in which guy is younger than girl but such marriages do happen, even i wittnessed 2 or 3 of them and they are successful too...

shruti ahmed😊 this was the longest comment i have ever write on IF😆... FOR YOU😳

Updateee sooon. waitinggg.😭

part 8
Geet is really a guide for Maan...
she knows how to make focus...
lovely part...

part 9
Geet is so focused...
Maan when he has to give his concentration, he doesnt get wavered...
wonder what he will become of when Geet leaves to US...
lovely part...

part 10
oh Geet left...
but Maan didnt at all understand her gesture...
dumbo Maan and uper se his gussa...
howz Geet gonna manage her studies and the baby?
hope Maan realises soon...
cont soon dear...
just awesome...