Maaneet FF: A Twisted Fate #1: Link Pg. 148 - Page 5

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hapinezz13 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
get Dev slapped...he deserves it!!!

I like Geet....she gave it right back to Maan....ab bolo Khurana ji......now the test will prove it too!!

great update naina!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Yesh yesh yesh!!!!
The truth will be out soon!!!!!
N kya yaar!
Armaan ko busy kyun rakha?
Aur thoda comedy bhi la lete..I mean like 1st everyone in the hospital is shocked looking at Geet. The receptionist staring at them n lastly Maaneet n Muskaan staring at each other!
That would have been hilarious!
I'm not saying that you have done a bad job
I'm just giving you some ideas 😊
The part was good
Maan realising....woohoo
Waiting for the next part!
Thanks for the PM
Take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Oh, how I love this fiery Geet! Ha, finally Dev is here.....and Maan.....he has started to like her.....nice! This part was really too good....and even the Muskaan Chadda bit was nicely comprised! Do continue soon and thanx for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
hey that was awesome!
atleast theres a showdown here lol.
geet and muskaan haha nice.
pm me pleaseeeeeeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks to everyone for liking the post! shona2010, -divya247-, Sunny1999, cute-aly, dee30, shahidkaarmaan, kal884, raziya56, Maaneet, shalini_s, Sweet_Ashum, AKANargis, sweet-and-cute, *angel94*, Iqbal Neha1, Starry_night, hapinezz13, *payal_15*,

@scorpiangyal: lolol! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! you'll see what happens in the next update 😉

@dee30: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! and definitely dev is a complete wimp, but wait and see what happens :)

@AKANargis: thanks a ton for reading and commenting! haha dev will definitely be hurt...lets just see who hurts him...k? haha what Maan will do with Geet....for that you'll just have to wait....hope you enjoy the next part though :)

@Maaneet: Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! It's always great to see new people reading my ff :) I'll def. add you to my pm list...hope you like the next part also :)

@miss_precious: haha hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! and the question remains....what will maan do with geet?

@-divya247-: thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I hope you enjoy the next part also :)

@shalini_s: haha hi! how did you knoww? hehe thanks a lot for reading and commenting!

@sosweetsumi: thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I'm really glad you enjoyed the update :) hope you like the next part too!

@gauri92: haha maan and dev...the fiery showdown! i hope you like it :) and as to see what maan will do with geet...you'll just have to keep reading!

@raziya56: thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I hope you enjoy the next part too :)

@sweet-and-cute: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed this part :)

@hapinezz13: thanks a ton for reading and commenting! hahaha the test sure does prove it....hope you like the showdown! hehe im so glad you enjoyed the update!

@Sweet_Ashum: haha i loved your idea...sigh i wish i just thought of that sooner hehe :) and armaan will be in the story...don't you worry, geet does need to have doctors checkups, dont you think? 😆 but yeah these parts are going to be a tad bit serious, and then i promise, i'll include as much comedy as i can hehe...ill just message you for advice =D anyways, i hope you like the next update too!

@Starry_night: haha thanks a lot for reading and commenting! im so glad you enjoyed this post! hehe i like the Muskaan/Geet thing..idk why though :) hope you like the next part too!

@shahidkaarmaan: hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ill defintiely add you to the pm list :) hope you enjoy the next part too! ps. please do continue your ff with sid/riddhima =D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 3:

"Well Mr. Khurana…." she began.

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"The results from the paternity test came by right now, and well, here are the reports" said Dr. Chadda, handing over the file to Mr. Khurana.

With trembling hands, his own nervousness and fear was astonishing him, he opened the file to read the words POSITIVE. BABY'S FATHER IS MR. DEV KHURANA.

He dropped the file in shock, although he wasn't completely unaware of his brother's foolishness, he never thought he would stoop to this level, and father a baby with some woman without even committing to her. His voice thundered as he asked the doctor "WHERE IS HE?"

Both Muskaan and Geet looked at him shocked, astounded at how anger seemed to have taken over his face and how loud his voice had gotten. Everyone who was within a kilometer seemed to have heard his voice as people slowly peered into the room to see what was going on.

Muskaan, her voice shivering with fright, stuttered "Um..um..He left. He walked out of the hospital even when we were screaming to him to stop."

"THEN WHY DIDN'T ANYONE BOTHER TO COME AND INFORM ME?" his voice was now like a lion's roar and the poor babies in the hospital had began to cry hearing this man scream.

Muskaan gained her voice back, after seeing how he was behaving, and with a strict tone, she told him "Mr. Khurana. Yeh ek hospital hain. This isn't your own house where you can scream and yell and do whatever you want. So please leave before I will have to call security to escort you out of the building."

Geet, sensing how embarrassing this could be for the Khuranas if he was led out by security, imaging how the media would have a party with this news, she placed a hand on his shoulder, smiling softly at Dr. Chadda, and said "No need for security. We'll leave now. Thanks for all your help."

Without saying a word, he began to follow Geet out the door, realizing how out of control his anger was getting and how he needed to calm down. As he was leaving though he herd Dr. Chadda muttering under her breath "Poor sweet girl. She's stuck with such a khadoos."

Both of them got into the car, where he ordered the driver to take them to the Khurana mansion. Geet, clutching the file tightly in her hands, was a ball of nerves as to what would happen when they reached. The car slowly pulled to a stop in front of the Khurana Mansion. He grabbed her hand and literally dragged her out of the car and into the house.

The man who opened the door, Ramu Kaka, stared bewildered at his anger and fury and was even more surprised at seeing him drag the girl to the study. However, not wanting to interfere, he quickly left the scene and busied himself in the kitchen.

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Back in the study, he was pacing back and forth, really bent on creating a dent in the floor. Geet however, was just standing on the side, waiting for him to say something. "Can…Can I leave now?" she questioned, her voice low, as she realized it was getting late and her roommate would start worrying.

"WHAT DO YOU THINK OF YOURSELF? YOU CREATED THIS ENTIRE MESS SO NOW SHUT UP AND STAY HERE UNTIL I FIGURE OUT A WAY TO DEAL WITH IT" he shouted, erupting on the poor girl in front of him.

Luckily for Geet, Dev chose right that moment to knock on the door, and walked inside into his brother's study, more like walking into the lion's cave. 😆

"Bhaiya…" he began, "It was a mistake…"

"WHAT was a mistake? The fact that you could have been so careless? The fact that you got her pregnant? Or the fact that you weren't willing to take responsibility for your actions? What's wrong with you? I thought you actually had common sense, but you seem to be lacking in even that department." He burst out, marking the beginning of the long tirade that would follow.

"Bhaiya. Just give me a chance to speak. I'll learn from my mistakes, just let it go na, just this once?" pleaded his brother.

"Don't you dare call me bhaiya again. I'm ashamed to even think of you as my own brother. But what were you saying? You'll learn from your mistakes? Do you think I'm going to let you out of my sight after this stupidity of yours? And let what go? Tell me, I need to here this."

"Um…Um.. It was a mistake that night. I was just so drunk and out of my rational thinking and she was so beautiful. I couldn't resist. We'll just get her to have an abortion and everything will be alright. It won't happen again, I promise" Dev blurted really quickly.

Suddenly, he felt a hand strike his cheeks, not once but twice, the resounding noise still ringing in his ears. Looking up, he was shocked to see Geet standing in front of him, fury blazing in her eyes. "You fool, you pig, you disgusting piece of filth. How dare you suggest I abort my child! Just because you don't want it doesn't mean that I don't either" she screamed, as she slapped him once more really hard across his cheek.

Shocked that some girl, someone of a lower social status than him, some mere worker, would slap him in the face. Him, the rich and powerful Dev Khurana, he raised his hand to slap her back, meaning to teach her a lesson. However, a sudden powerful grip on his wrist stopped him from doing so right away, as he looked into the eyes of his brother, who stated in a dangerously low voice "Don't you dare think about hitting the girl."

Turning to Geet he said, "Move back to the sofa. Let me deal with this." Not wanting to get in the way of Dev being punished, Geet quickly scurried away back to the sofa, ready to watch what would happen.

"How dare you suggest the idea of an abortion. You are a Khurana and I will not tolerate any Khurana blood being raised by a single mother. You are going to marry her" he said, turning back to Dev, tightening his grip on his younger brother's hand.

"Marry her?" Dev looked dumbfounded. He didn't want to marry some village girl, he had just wanted to have some fun with her. What was his brother thinking?

"I'm not marrying her…She said she's fine raising the child by herself, so let her. We'll just send her some money every month" Dev replied indignantly.

Another slap on his cheek, this time one from his own brother. "Do you not understand what I'm saying? Or do I have to speak in another language for you to understand something so simple? You are going to marry her and raise the kid together, whether you like it or not."

Dev suddenly pulled away from his grasp. "No I won't, and there's nothing you can do about it."

"Yes there is" replied his brother, an evil smirk playing on his face. "Mr. Dev Khurana, there's a lot I can do to you if you refuse to follow what I'm saying."

"Oh really? Like what?" replied his brother, suddenly filled with an arrogance and a certain malice.

"Like kick you out of the house, which is mine according to the will" he replied, a malicious look appearing on his face.

"You know what? You don't have to kick me out of the house. I'm going to leave by myself" Dev replied instantaneously.

"And how do you plan on surviving?" his brother questioned him.

"With the money from the will of course, I'll get a job eventually and I will survive. And if you didn't notice, I have a lot of friends. Unlike you, who's always so into the work. Friends become useful you know" stated Dev, as he moved further and further back.

"We'll just see about that Dev" replied his brother as he watched him retreat from the study. "We'll just see about that."

"Mr. Khurana. I will be back soon. I will be back very soon." Then turning to Geet, Dev said "And you Geet, I would watch out if I were you. You are the cause of all of this, of me leaving my house, of me and my brother being separated. Don't think I won't get my revenge." Turning around he went out of the house, slamming the door behind him.

Precap: Geet attempts to leave, and someone stops her. Who is this new entry?

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So Everyone...how did you like the showdown?! I honestly wish Geet said all this and more to Dev and Dev really did just end up leaving...and leave our Maneet together 😍

Anyways, what Maan ends up doing with Geet will be coming up in the next update! so stay tuned :)

as always, do read and comment and press the like button. any comments, criticisms, suggestions welcome :) these are the most important things for any writer. pms coming out soon!

~NainaEdited by naina.patel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
I am sooooooooo glad that Dev has been kicked out of the house!!

Great update naina.....n loved it when Maan screamed!! can't wait to read what maan comes up with as a solution!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
lol maan just loves to shout doesnt he? and way to go geet! she slapped dev then maan slapped dev. i hope u bring in dadi so she can slap dev too [its a slap dev party!!!]
cant wait for the updateeeeeeeee
why r they so small???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
lovely yaar
do continue
glad maan is have such strong sense of Honor
that pig dev
he is so bad
idiot gadda
punish him form my side also
bye sumi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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