Originally posted by: RamAayenge
Very nice analogy u made and example u gave of Acharya Chanakya's take on it is indeed perfect here.
Episode was good and expressions of all I liked...the way breakdown was shown by Shri Ram,Ma Sita, Brothers,Mothers... portrayal of all was good....Sujay was amazing in depicting Helplessness of Husband and stoicism & neutrality Of King in expressions as well as speech...
Hanumanji u asked why missing? Actually in original text also,in this part there is no mention of Hanumanji...but I think he will get separate dedicated scene where he will want to stay with Sita Maa to take care of her but she will deny reminding him of promise she took frm him to stay with Shri Ram always in seena cheerne wala episode...then she will send him back to Ayodhya....aisa kuch scene denge hi I think....
Yeh sab added self written scenes dete hue ek original scene hai woh Naa bhul jaaye to accha .....I want that scene....
Sumantra and Lakshman's discussion on destiny and how Sumantra consoled Lakshman and told him story of Rishi Bhrigu ka shraap and Siya Ram viyog destined wala story....and on returning Lakshman consoled Broken ShriRam for getting back to kingly duties....
Yeh parts totally naa sahi... kisi na kisi tareeke se add karde.... Lakshman consoling or giving moral support to ShriRam,,yeh side of him is visible in this plus many other incidents in VR...but this series has never shown his empathy... atleast yaha dikha de to acha....waise today bhi when Ram told them there will be no Agnipariksha,a slight variation in Lakshman's expressions told that he anticipated the upcoming tragedy as he asked Ram that his heart is sinking,,what's going on in ur mind???And Sumantra Lakshman talk also...back story bhi and how destiny plays yeh dono parts intellectual hai....kisi form mein include kar de short scene hi sahi to accha hoga...
Tbh Bharat ka 1 dialogue personally muje ajeeb Laga thoda....these ppl pay attention while writing dialogues of Ram,Sita ,guruji, Hanuman ji and Antagonist bus .... Brothers ke dialogues Kai baar unke actual characterisation ke sync mein nahi hote... sometimes even mothers ke bhi....
What was that...Hum bhi apni patni ka tyag karenge?Matlab context ke bahar ka dialogue tha....debate ke bhi valid points hote hai...In VR ,many times debates hv come between Ram Lakshman,but their points and arguments r so Intellectual itself making entire debate so learning for us...same was chitrakoot debate of Ram Bharat....brothers r also full of wisdom and such dialogues doesn't suit their intellect sometimes even in emotions...waha bhi emotional dialogue isse accha ho sakta hai... Better was their sobbing heavily...
Baki iske alawa overall sabke dialogues performances especially Sujay was very nice...
Shatrughna was also missing... otherwise is scene mein Ram actually calls all brothers to tell them abt this as per text also...but maybe that actor wld be in some other show...
Aaj Urmila came back finally after many days...that scene of Lakshman telling Urmila was Also good...his last dialogue was actually very true depicting his personal dilemma,,, between his conscience and Loyalty,,,
Sita Ma ka valkal mein aana, Shri Ram not able to see her like that....turned away but soon turned back but before that she walked away.... Trying not to increase his agony....that scene was very impactful.
Wish that the parting happened in a more non verbal way where he is tightly clutching her hands ,not wanting to let go,looking at the belly , remembering how his father must have felt while letting his ons go 14 years ago.The reluctance should have been more visible.Then once she leaves,he keeps on crying but then he adorns the crown once again,takes few more minutes to get sombre and then the " stone faced cruel " king Ram standing before the brothers to give them the order.
Am I being too dramatic...??
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