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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: arshia200
First of all my usual biggg wala hug to the great author of this story for updating sooo fast on my request. Itna fast that on the phone wala scene she wrote jalal instead of mirza hehhehee ...🤗
Im lovinggg the story so far...ek request wapas karni thi...even though mirzas angry with her pls show him getting a bit more weak in the knees for her n a little longer almost romance sessions between them. U see I love angry husbands trying their level best to stop themselves from romancing their wives haha...and this toh is mirza and razia. Already your updates on their almost passionate moments are getting me excited...thoda aur likho na...😆
and nope you are not fast dear...this speed is good enough...I like fast updates anyway. ..the wait makes me depressed and I cant thank you enough for updating sooo soon😊

And lastly...minddd blowwwing super se bhi upar updates.👏...eagerly waiting to see more jealous mirzaaa !!

u know what i have not gone to school from yesterday and i have written a lot so i am going to post chapter 8 and 9 today only

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Yaaay huggs hugsss and more huggsss to u🤗🤗🤗

I cant wait I cant wait I cant wait

Thank u thankkk u thankkk u meri jaaan

😳😳😃

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RisingPhoenix

@RisingPhoenix

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Both the chpters are very beautifully written

Loved it

And even though they hate each other in the story there is too much of cuteness in their relationship whoch you have shown very well

Keep writing

And I have no complaints with your speed

Going great

-Manu-

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

CHAPTER 8

razia moved away from mirza. People clapped and applaud for the couple. They were totally in awe after they saw the newly wedded couple perform. mirza smiled a bit. "Wow Yaar!" said Rahul (mirza's bestfriend) " I am impressed with your dancing skills mirza.tge stage was on fire with the romantic dance u and Bhabhi did! raziaa blushed. mirza spoke up "Ms. razia would you excuse us for a minute?" razia nodded and moved away from there. She sat away from the crowd of people and she looked around the elegant hall. It was full of unknown faces, she felt quite bored so she took her phone out and started reading a book there. She was disturbed by a very squeaky voice calling out her name "razia!" A smile spread across her face. "Shreya?? Oh My God!!!" "You didn't invite me but I still came because u know how muCh I love you! I must say you n Jiju make a very sweet couple. You can even give competition to me and Rahul." "Rahul?? You mean mirza's friend?? You guys are togather??? Oh my God!! But I'm surprised that mirza has a friend like Rahul. Inke friend hai yahi hi surprising hai! I give a salute to Rahul." "Friends reunion." mirza came forward with Rahul. The four of them chatted for a long time. Rahul spoke "mirza your parents are here." mirza rolled his eyes and held raziaa by her hand and said "Ms. razia aab Hume Jaana Chahiye. Kaal office bhi hai." "Lekin Aapke Ma aur pappa to abhi aaye hai." "razia you and I are leaving the party this instant. I don't give a damn about them." "Paar.. Thodi der ruk jate hai mirza. Baas thodi der!" "Ms.razia.." "mirza beta!" said a woman in a sweet voice. She was wearing a pink sari and she was beautiful although she was in her 50s her skin was radiant.Beside her was a man in his 60s. He was grey haired and was tall. "Tum JA rahe ho beta?? Humse milogey bhi Nahi??" "Assalamuakaikum Ammi aur Abbu. You guys are late That's why I'm leaving." " Beta Bahu kaha hai??" "razia." called mirza. razia came forward and she was extremely nervous. " MasAllah! Noor Pari! Bohot Khubsoorat hai." razia smiled at her and took Both the couples blessings. "Aab chale." said mirza in an impatient voice. " Jallad kahika! Apne parents se baat Karne ki Tamiz Nahi hai!" Both of them sat inside the car and were on their way back to their house. ""mirza why did u act like that in front of ur parents?? Remember one thing mirza they are ur parents. Because of them u came to this world. You should show them some respect! The way u behaved!! Untolerable!" mirza put the car to a halt and calmly said "GET OUT!" "Excuse me??" mirza bit louder this time "GET OUT OF MY CAR!" "aNd where am I supposed to go in the middle of the night.. There is no transport available here and just look at the road it's so empty..." razia spoke.. "I Don't give a damn about it! just get out of my car and catch a cab..." razia had enough of it! Her heart told her that she should get out of the car.. She slowly opened the car's door and got out of the car.."

Right after she closed the door mirza drove away from there.. Leaving razia all alone in the middle of an empty road.

The air was cold and the moon hid itself behind the clouds. razia stood on the lonely road cursing her fate. She felt so lonely. She at that point yet again realized that she had no one. No one who waited for her, no one who would shout at her when she reached late home. Not a single open arm where she could rest and forget the rest of the world.. She was all alone.. Where would she go now?? She had no real home. Neither her parents would accept her and her husband... Her husband left her in the middle of a lonely road.

mirza returned Home.. He was angry with all the incident that took place. How dare she ask about my parents?? Those people! She deserved this punishment. mirza felt tired.. He made himself comfortable on the bed and closed hi eyes. razia's face flashed into his mind. mirza "Don't think about that girl mirza! In awhile she will herself come back.." In no time mirza fell asleep.

"mirza! Baachao! Baachao.." cried out the innocent voice.. razia was running.. As fast as her legs could carry her. Behind her were some men,who were completely drunk, were chasing her. Tears were trickling down her eyes. She was wet with sweat and she was breathless. The only name on her mouth was mirza.. She stopped as the tracks had ended. She had nowhere to go. "Aab kaha jayogi..." Tears streamed down her eyes.. "Plz, let me go... Hume Jana dijiye... Meina kya bigaada Aapka?? Plz Jaane dijiye..." "Kaise Jana de... Aap Bohot sundar hai aur rooz rooz aisay Khubsoorat Ladki haath Nahi lagti... Aab tumhe koi Nahi bacha sakta.." The man moved forward.. raziaa screamed "MIRZAA!!!"

mirza's eyes flew wide open and he screamed out "razia!" mirza was covered up in sweat. He realized that he had been dreaming. Nothing had happened to razia.. He touched his face and figured out that he had been crying in his sleep. He threw the blanket away and made his way downstairs. It was almost 6 o'clock.. " razia kaha reh Gayi... Meine thik Nahi kiya razia ko raste pe Chodkar... mirza you have committed a great mistake. I have to bring her back..." mirza phoned razia but it said that her phone was switched off. mirza's heart started racing..

mirza rushed inside his car and started searching for razia. First he went to the place where he had left razia.. He searched everywhere but couldn't find razia. mirza felt so guilty and feared at the same time for his wife. What had he done?? What his dream comes true?? What if razia was in danger?? It was now 8 o'clock in the morning but there was no trace of razia. Jalal "I think I should report a missing case.. I have to find razia. She is my responsibility." Suddenly mirza's phone rang "Hello."

The bell rang and mirza's mother opened the door. She said in a worried tone "mirza!" An angry mirza got inside the house. "Where is my wife??" "She is inside the room. And what wife mirza??? U left her in the middle of the Road! Where is my responsible son???" mirza looked angrily at the lady or her so called mother " you don't have to lecture me about responsibilities! razia?? razia??" He barged into the room where razia was. His mother was about to enter the room when mirza spoke up "I want to have a word with my wife alone." He closed the door and made sure it was locked.

razia got out of the washroom and was shocked to see mirza "What r u doing here?" "I'm here to take u back Home..Let's go razia." "I don't want to go!" mirza rolled his eyes "look razia I don't want to argue with u about this.. Let's go.." mirza got hold of her wrist. "Don't touch me." mirza smirked "Oh! I'm going to do more then just touch u razia" he breathed close to her cheeks "I'm going to kiss you too." His lips fell upon hers, his head dipped. Like a magnetic force, her mouth was drawing towAards his. The electric charge was too forceful for her to resist any longer.It was razia who pulled his head down and kissed him.his chiseled mouth,his searing lips,his erotic kiss. razia's hand raked wildly into his hair. He deepened the kiss. Suddenly razia realized what was happening. Her eyes flew open Nd she gasped. She pushes mirza away and herself from the kiss..

Hope u guyz liked it!

Precap: First day of office and jealousy track. 😆

CHAPTER 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/razia-sultan/4445227/destiny?pn=4

Edited by cuteshravani - 9 years ago

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix
Both the chpters are very beautifully written
Loved it
And even though they hate each other in the story there is too much of cuteness in their relationship whoch you have shown very well
Keep writing
And I have no complaints with your speed
Going great
-Manu-

THANK U SO MUCH AND AM SATISFIED THAT MY SPEED IS NO GOING TOO MUCH HIGH...

HOPE U LIKE IT😆

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darkwarrior200

@darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Mashallaahhh !! The angry cum passionate kiss. Dikhta hai dikhta hai kitna pyaar hai dono ke beech mein

brilliant update I loved it...

waiting for the jealousy out of which he will realize how much he loves her. And I want to know whats his story with his parents...why does he loathe them so much.

Thanks for the update...update chapter 9 sooonie 🤗

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Paridhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hey shravani I really like d story so far.. Its amzing..!! So many updates in one day.. I m so happy..!!

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ..radiance...
Hey shravani I really like d story so far.. Its amzing..!! So many updates in one day.. I m so happy..!!

thank u so much... i'am happy too that u liked it☺️

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Shopau

@Shopau

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Hey!!!!

Amazing updates and an exceptional story...👍🏼

I was initially a bit doubtful of a alzia story of the 21st century. But this one's amazing 👏

Thanks for the pm. Plz do update soon !

Love

Shopau

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

The phone rang and disturbed the chain of thoughts in mirza's mind. The call was from his office. He cut the call. What was happening to him? Why did he kiss razia?? mirza to himself:"Oh! I'm going to do more then just touch u..I'm going to kiss you too." Seriously mirza! Seriously! What's wrong with you?? This razia has left some effect on u!

razia was standing in the balcony enduring the cool breeze which played upon her face. An unknown smile crept on her face. All the scenes of the kiss flashed right in front of her eyes. She was suppose to hate mirza for leaving her in the middle of the road but this action of his made her think. "God! razia what's wrong with you? You're suppose to hate mirza after that incident! Then why the heck are you smiling?? Just erase that memory." razia remembered how she had broke the kiss and how quite both of them were inside the car. They haven't spoken a word to each other after 'that incident'

Unknown to both of them that this was the first step towards their friendship. No sorry correction, First step towards their lovestory. The ultimate Lovestory which was left incomplete. Now their destiny had bowed down to each other to complete the incomplete lovestory.

It was already morning and the couple got ready for office. razia wore a white shirt with a black pencil skirt, showing off her curves.Her hair was open. mirza had been waiting for razia inside his white Audi. mirza kept honking the car. razia rolled her eyes "UFf! Impatient brat!" razia got inside the car "aap thodi der ruk Nahi sakte??" mirza kept looking at razia. "Phirse ghurna chalu? Chaliye aab!" mirza immediately looked away "Wo! I was thinking that this color doesn't suit you at all.." razia "you don't have to worry about that!" They drove away to the office..

mirza entered the office.. All he employes present stood up in order to greet him. But right after mirza entered razia... All the male employes stared at the "New Girl" Everyone there was mesmerized by her beauty. They were all lost in the divine beauty. But they all had one question in mind.. Who was this angelic beauty??

mirza noticed all the male employes staring at razia. His blood boiled. How dare they stare at his razia? On the other hand razia was really uncomfortable with the stares at her. She lowered her eyes as if trying to ignore the stares. mirza noticed this as well. He wrapped his arms tight against razia's waist as if trying to say that She is HIS possession. razia was at first in shock but then she understood what he was trying to do.. He was trying to protect her from those eyes.

mirza then spoke proudly "This is MY wife razia... Mrs.razia altunia mirza." Emphasizing on the word my and Mrs..

"I know all of the men here are disappointed after hearing it but let me remind all of you, especially the men... If you ever try to hurt or look at razia in any other way, I will not only fire you.. I will make sure that you don't get a job anywhere. And let me remind all of you that I'm damn serious about it. Is it clear to everyone?" razia and all the employees present were surprised.. Why did mirza all of a sudden turn into a protective husband? Why all of a sudden these words? It was not needed... Ufff this man!!!

"One more thing.. razia will be working here as my PA" razia's mouth flew open! A PA??!!! Seriously?? All those degrees just to become a PA? Never! I won't let that happen! thought razia..

razia was shooting daggers at mirza with her eyes. mirza very well knew that razia would be pissed with this decision of his.. He was enjoying razia's expressions.. He looked at razia and smirked. "Meet me in my office."

Two hours later:
"UFf yeh khados! Kitna kaam karwa ta hai... Yeh Singh's ki file kaha hai?" She searched the entire shelf but couldn't find the file. He is surely gonna kill me! razia slowly ascended towards the door. She practiced to herself. "Sir the thing is.. I mean like... Like..I was like.. God razia!" She slowly opened the door "sir may I come in?" Sir my foot! Thought razia.

"Where were u Ms.razia?" razia "sir you told me to find the Singh's file.. So I.." mirza trying to hide his smile "When Ms.razia? Ms. razia I think you should get some sleep.. The file is right here with me.." mirza smirked.. razia under her breathe "Jallad kahika!" Just when mirza was about to reply razia an employe came and said "Sir, the Singh's are here for the meeting." "We are coming."

Both of them made their way to the meeting room. It was indeed really beautiful with the perfect interior designs. As razia entered the meeting room after mirza, she heard someone say "Tum??" A smile spread across her face. "Surya!" "razia what a pleasant surprise." Suryabhan came forward to shake hands with razia. mirza frowned. "How are you? I called you this morning but you didn't answer my call razia." "Actually I was kind of busy." mirza now irked with their conversation. "It's ok. By the way are you from their side of the company?" said Suryabhan. "Yes I am! I am Mr.mirza's Personal Assis.." before razia could complete her sentence mirza came forward and spoke in a serious tone " My wife! Mrs.razia altunia mirza." The sentence was covered wotha bucket full of possessiveness. razia noticed it and smirked. "Is he jealous?"

"razia you got married to mr. mirza?? You never told me." mirza rolled his eyes. "Let's start the meeting without wasting any time." The meeting proceeded.. mirza was not at all interested in the meeting. All the time he was looking at Suryabhan, who was continuously staring at razia. Let me tell you mirza was not liking this! mirza by now had made up his mind that he won't sign the deal. The presentation ended and everyone clapped. mirza's face showed as if he was disappointed. Suryabhan spoke confidently "So, can I consider this deal confirmed?" mirza raised his eyebrow " I am sorry to say Mr.Suryabhan that I'm not at all impressed with the presentation. I don't want my company to go in loss. And besides, I saw that your concentration was not in the presentation. Your eyes were caught in someone." mirza said mockingly. Suryabhan was embarrassed... razia couldn't understand why mirza was doing this. The presentation they had presented was quite appreciable.

No one had the slight idea about the reason behind mirza's Rejection. The real reason was razia. He was jealous. The man who believed that nothing can come between work and him was taking this desicion for a girl. Not just any girl, it was the girl with whom he got married to take revenge on... But there is a saying that everything changes according to time. The heartless man, as he states, has felt a heartbeat inside. Is this the beginning of a wonderful lovestory????

"Khamoshiya gunnguna ne lage..
Tanhayi muskura ne lage..
Sargoshi kare Hawa
Chupke se mujhe kaha
Dil ka Haal bata
Dil barse na chupa
Sunke baat yeh shaarme se mere
Aakhe Jhook Jaane lage..
Khamoshiya gunnguna ne lage..
Tanhayi muskura ne lage
Sargoshi kare Hawa
Chupke se mujhe kaha
Dil ka Haal bata
Dil barse na chupa
Sunke baat yeh shaarme se mere
Aakhe Jhook Jaane lage.."

Precap:Honeymoon to Thailand!😉

CHAPTER 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/razia-sultan/4445227/destiny?pn=5

Edited by cuteshravani - 9 years ago

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