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Posted: 9 years ago
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The sun rose and it's light filling up the whole room. The couple were still in deep slumber, both were in each other's arms. razia's head rested on mirza's chest. Light fell on razia's eyes which woke her up. Her eyes were closed. She could feel the cold sheets touching her bare body and worst part she felt someone beside her. Someone's hand was wrapped around her. Did she spend a night with a guy? Duh! Obviously! Why would you be like that to beside a guy? Obviously they weren't playing here... razia had a throbbing headache and this made her lose her mind.Stupid Hangover! Guilt washed her away. She had unknowingly cheated mirza.. Unknowingly? razia did not dare to open her eyes and face the harsh reality. She felt "the guy" move beside her and he murmured her name "razia." razia's eyes flew open as she realized that it was none other then "MIRZA" she cried out. razia's shrill cry made mirza wake up from his deep slumber.. His head was throbbing. "What happened razia why are you screaming?" He rubbed his eyes to get rid of the blury vision. "You!" cried out razia. Now mirza opened his eyes and looked at razia, who had covered herself up with the blanket. Reality struck him and he went numb. What had he done? Tears weld up on razia's eyes and she began crying. "Why mirza? Why? Why did you punish me like this?" mirza was frustrated. How did he do it? The last thing he remembered razia sobbing and him kissing her. Then everything went blury. mirza stuttered "razia.. I.. I mean.. We were drunk and I have no idea how did this happen. I am sorry.." mirza lowered his eyes. He was ashamed of himself. razia "I want some time alone.Please." mirza nodded and wrapped himself up in the white bed sheet, grabbed his clothes and went to the living room of their suite.


razia immediately broke down. She buried her face in the pillow and sobbed. "Why did he do it? Why? Well maybe it wasn't all his fault. He was drunk and so was I. I carried myself away. Why did I let him do it? It's not entirely his fault. I also share the equal responsibility. Look at the bright side razia. Atleast you didn't sleep with another man. A stranger! As far as I remember if mirza didn't save me from that guy I would've woken up beside him. Atleast he is your husband.. Uggghhh! But how can I ignore to the fact that I spent a night with a Jallad! What the hell razia! Why are you blaming yourself? He must have done something to me and I ended up sleeping with him. This was all a part of his master plan. But I won't let him succeed! I will have to pretend that this incident didnt affect me in anyway. Yes! Yes razia!" razia finally came to the conclusion that all of it was his plan. She decided to be strong and pretend that everything is alright between them. She chose a pink dress for the day and went inside the washroom.


mirza paced back and fro in the living room thinking about the incident that took place. He was damn worried about it. He took a water bottle out of the water and drank the whole bottle in one gulp to get rid of the headache. He heard the door open and he instantly turned back. There she was standing all normal and not a single trace of pain was visible on her face. She looked as fresh as a raindrop. The pink dress and the hair and band made her look like a teenager. mirza moved forward to razia and opened his mouth to say something when razia interrupted in between. "mirza, let's not talk about what happened last night. It was a stupid accident. We were both drunk and out of our senses. We cannot change what happened but we can forget it and move on right? I'm sure that in future we don't commit the same
MISTAKE again." Emphasizing on the word mistake. mirza's heart ached. she considered it a mistake. razia smiled at mirza.


tum bhi tanha the

hum bhi tanha the

milke rone lage

ek jaise the dono ke gum daga hone lage

tujh me muskurate hai tujhme gun gun ate hai

tere hi khayalon me dube dube jate hai...

mirza gave a confused look to razia. Something is definitely fishy, cauz this woman is not that type who forgets. razia snapped her fingers in front of mirza "Jallad! You there? Remember we need to go for shopping?" mirza nodded and was about to walk out from the room when razia grabbed his wrist. mirza froze on his tracks. Her touch sent shiver down his spine. "Mister, I am not going out with you like that. It's harsh but you stink. Get a quick shower and meet me at the lobby." mirza simply nodded and walked inside their room. razia's smile disappeared "this is going to be hard to act normal in front of him." She rolled her eyes and shut the door behind her.


Their destiny was slowly removing all differences between each other. It was putting all it's strength to bring them closer. Now it was their turn to see the sign of their fate that they are made for each other. For one another.


"Kal Meera tadpi Kanha ko
Sab laj samaaj ganwaai re
Ab prem mein tadpan tarsan ki
Hai baari Kanha ki aayi re

Mori jaan gayi (Mori jaan gayi..)
O.. tora khel hua (Tora khel hua..)
Mujh se main rootha
Mujh mein main toota aa..

O.. mujh se main rootha
Mujh mein main toota
Mujhko maine ishq wafaa mein
Khud hi hai loota (Khud hi hai loota..)
Lut lut ke, lut lut ke..
Jeena hai marna baanke yaar bina

Saaiyaan.. hun main ki karaan
Saaiyaan.. jeena ya maraan
Saaiyaan.. rab mujhse khafa
Saaiyaan..

Saaiyaan.. hunn main kee karaan
Saaiyaan.. jeena ya maraan
Saaiyaan.. Rab mujhse khafa
Saaiyaan.."

Quote of the Day
😳
Love is our true destiny. We do not find the meaning of life by ourselves alone - we find it with another.
Thomas Merton




***************end of Ch-11**************


Precap: back to India and mirza-razia coming close.

CHAPTER 12 : SCROLL DOWN

Edited by cuteshravani - 9 years ago
ISHANI222 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
HERE i 've jotted down the most normal feeling what they could have...hope u people 'll like it😊
~thank u~
~~shravani~~
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
AMaZINGly true feelings displayed πŸ‘ I love it
As I said in my previous comment... very natural of Razia to be defensive of her feelings...

P. S : previous comment updated... plz read

Love
Shopau
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Ah the feeels
good to know that mirza feels more
ohh god when will she stop misunderstanding him
but then again i shouldnt complain coz if it wasnt for these mis understandings then they wouldnt have got married only in the first placeπŸ˜†

Im smiling so broadly right now that my collegue is thinking im chatting with my lover on the PC hahhahaa

Thank u Shravani πŸ€—πŸ€—
i loved every bit of this
feeling sooo damn happy
chapter 12 kab aayega ?
update sooon !!!! *haaye*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Ye misunderstandings .! Inhi ne toh inn dono ko ek saath kiya , pta nahi ab kya kya gul khilayengi ye ..!
So happy to watch a strong Razia or rather read πŸ˜†.
N ya I love Pankh/razia in pink n blue d most. Thnks 4 using d same.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Lovely chapter
Amazingly portrays their feelings
Loved every bit of it
Keep writing shravani
I'm excited for the precap
Thanks for PM
-Manu-
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 12

They had their breakfast in silence. Their hearts were screaming to speak with each other, clear all the doubts and confusions, ask each other dozens of questions but both of them kept quiet. MIRZA wiped His Lips with the napkin and noticed something on RAZIA's lips. mirza signaled her that something was on her lips. razia's hand moved towards her lips but after a few attempts of removing the thing she gave up. "Let it be." she sighed. But mirza, Mr. Perfection, couldn't help himself. His hand reached towards razia's lips. razia was taken aback with his sudden gesture. But she let mirza continue his work. He gently brushed his thumb on the corner of her lips. The warmth of his touch sent shivers down her body. She closed her eyes and suddenly felt the warmth gone. mirza had removed his hands and was now staring at razia.He thought to himself "What is happening to me? Get a grip on yourself mirza." razia also stared back at mirza and she saw the softness in his eyes, which is very rare. She had never seen him like this before. and both of them shared an eye lock. Both of their eyes were asking each other millions of questions but not a single word escaped from their lips. They broke the eye lock when a waiter arrived with their coffee and disturbed them "Your Coffee." razia realized that she had been staring at mirza for quite a long time and she was kind of embarrassed. mirza mentally cursed the waiter for disturbing between them, he spoke in a tone which clearly reflected his irritation towards the waiter "Thank you and now you can leave." The waiter understood the situation and greeted mirza once and then moved to the next table.mirza got up from his seat and like a gentleman he went beside razia and helped her up. razia was astonished with the sudden change in mirza's behaviour. Was it all a plan? Or was he really feeling guilty of what had happened.She gave a faint smile to mirza for the help and move towards the door. "razia.." She stopped on her tracks as she heard him calling her and she turned around. "Wo..ummm. I am thinking of taking you to shopping. I think you will like it. I mean girls like shoppong right. Would you like to come with me? I mean..Ummm... Im not forcing you to co.." razia cut him and said "Sure.I just have to get my pursue from the room. Wait for me here." mirza smiled genuinely. He was really happy and a rush of excitement circulated around his stomach. He wanted to make things right between them as he knew that she was upset with him. No matter what she says he knew that she was upset of what had happened between them.He had to set things right because he couldn't see the sadness in her face .After about fifteen minutes razia met mirza at the lobby. razia "Let's call for a taxi." mirza smiled at razia and said "Why don't we take a walk to the mall nearby. It's a fifteen minutes walk and on the way I can show you the street shops." razia nodded and they started their walk. mirza held razia's hand and razia was taken aback with this. She tried to free herself from his grip, which made him tighten the grip more. razia raised a brow at him "What are you doing?" He moved his face towards her ears and whispered " You know Bangkok is not a safe place for girls and its for your own good. They have to understand that you are already taken and that you are only mine." razia kept quiet on this remark of his. mirza pointed at the shops in the pavement and said "These shop might be in the pavement but they are very famous. People are crazy for these things. But I think its better to buy stuff from shopping malls rather then pavements." razia smiled "I don't agree with you on this one. I know the things found in shopping malls are far better then these things but not all can afford it like you. Even though my father is one of the richest industrialist in India, I had to buy my stuff from small shops because he never gave me enough money and the facilities and I never complained about it because it really doesn't matter to me what one wears. The only thing I want in life is love and happiness which I think I don't have in my fate." she said sadly. mirza felt for razia but he wanted to let her know that he would give her everything she wanted. All the happiness in the world would be wrapped neatly in a gift box just for her. "razia I will always be here for you. My shoulder would be there when you need my support. razia had walked a bit further when mirza was lost in his thoughts. He heard the honking of a car and saw the car speeding its way towards razia. He tightly grasped her wrist and pulled her towards him "WATCH IT RAZIA!" mirza shouted at the top of his voice. razia on the other hand got frightened and dug her face on mirza's chest,her hands tightly clutching his shirt.A cool breeze blew pass them and the scenary was very filmy. The heroine in the hero's arm and the hero saving the heroine and the cherry on the top the soothing breeze. Time stood still for the couple as they were lost in each other's arm in the middle of the road!They heard a whistle come from the pavement which made them break their hug. mirza unwilling moved his arms away from razia and so did razia. "Let's go.." spoke razia in a low tone and mirza simply nodded and they walked to the mall Robinson. razia looked around the shop and nothing really caught her eyes. She went to the 4th floor and mirza stayed in the 1st floor. A shiny stone caught his eyes and he went to the counter to have a better look at it. He carefully looked at the shiny diamond which rested in his palm. It was a a gold ring studded with diamonds. He could imagine razia wearing the ring and the ring would look awesome on her.He told the sales person to pack it up in a gift box. He swiped his card and went to the 4th floor.razia had the least interest in shopping.She seemed to be lost in her own world.It was really hard for her to digest the fact that she had spent her night with mirza. It was neither his fault nor hers. Maybe it had to happen.Maybe it was meant to be. She wiped the tears which were emerging from her.She felt someone's hand on her shoulder and she knew it was him. "mirza.." she turned around and found someone else..It was not mirza. It was Suryabhan. She gave a faint smile to him and gently spoke "What a pleasant surprise Surya!"

mirza got off the elevator and found razia giggling with Suryabhan. He clenched his fist in anger at this scenario. His blood boiled in anger. Jealousy hit him hard. He couldn't stand the sight of razia with another guy ,especially laughing and giggling. He moved forward to get a better view of what was going on between them. He froze on the way after seeing Suryabhan moving his arms forward to hug razia. His heart stopped for a minute.He wanted to see razia's reaction to it before he took any further action. razia moved backwards "Suryanbhan it would be better if we don't hug each other. You see Im already married and its not that mirza would feel bad, but the thing is that I would not like it. I hope you understand." Suryabhan was taken aback. His heart ached with her words. Yes,he had loved her from their college dayss but he didn't have the courage to tell razia about his feelings for her in the fear of rejection.On the other hand mirza's heart jumped in happiness. He wanted to run to her and hold on to her forever.Never in his life he felt so happy. This small statement had brought a genuine smile upon his face. He moved forward and cleared his throat to get their attention. "Nice to see you Mr.Suryabhan." mirza said sarcastically and it was quite visible in his tone. razia's eyes grew wide with mirza's behavior. mirza slide his hands on razia's waist protectively and pulled her closer. "Nice to see you to Mr.mirza." said Suryabhan politely. "So what are you doing here? Stalking my beautiful wife, ehhh?" mirza let out a chuckle. razia pressed her lips on mirza's remark "What is he doing?" Suryabhan let out a laugh "You are funny mirza! Yes I was stalking your wife because everyone's not like you to have a beautiful wife like yours." mirza smirked "Man you are right about one thing! She is beautiful and she is mine." mirza said possessively. "Woah man.. Take it easy.. I was just playing around with you.I ha d a business conference here and I came here to get some stuff for Ma." "Good for you.Ummm.. Suryabhan I was thinking that you can join us on dinner at our hotel Grand President." razia thought to herself "Oh! What is he up to now!" Suryabhan "I don't know man.." mirza, still not leaving razia's waist, looked at her and said "Come on man.. razia will feel good. It will be fun." After giving a thought to it Suryabhan finally agreed. "Alright!" They bid each other goodbyes and they parted. mirza thought to himself "Ill show you Suryabhan that Im the only man in razia's life and heart."

Precap:razia-mirza dance.πŸ˜†

CHAPTER 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/125846725

Edited by cuteshravani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshia200

Ah the feeels
good to know that mirza feels more
ohh god when will she stop misunderstanding him
but then again i shouldnt complain coz if it wasnt for these mis understandings then they wouldnt have got married only in the first placeπŸ˜†

Im smiling so broadly right now that my collegue is thinking im chatting with my lover on the PC hahhahaa

Thank u Shravani πŸ€—πŸ€—
i loved every bit of this
feeling sooo damn happy
chapter 12 kab aayega ?
update sooon !!!! *haaye*


OH GOD !! EVERYTHING IS DUE TO THE MISUNDERSTANDINGS HER THEY GOT MARRIED DUE TO A MISUNDERSTANDING AND ON THE OTHER HAND YOUR COLLEAGUES ARE HAVING ANOTHER MISUNDERSTANDING ANYWAYS I'AM SO HAPPY TO KNOW THAT U LIKED THE CHAPTER...THANK U SO MUCH
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Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Lovely chapter

Amazingly portrays their feelings
Loved every bit of it
Keep writing shravani
I'm excited for the precap
Thanks for PM
-Manu-


THANK U SO MUCH !!! i'am so happy that u read it and liked it too!!
~take care~
~~shravani~~
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shopau

AMaZINGly true feelings displayed πŸ‘ I love it

As I said in my previous comment... very natural of Razia to be defensive of her feelings...

P. S : previous comment updated... plz read

Love
Shopau


oh! yes i read it and u know what u encouraged me so much but really the passion u have presented in nek dil zaalim is really awaesome and destiny is nothing compared to that... plz update soon your ff.
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