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ISHANI222 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shopau

Hey!!!!

Amazing updates and an exceptional story...👍🏼
I was initially a bit doubtful of a alzia story of the 21st century. But this one's amazing 👏

Thanks for the pm. Plz do update soon !

Love
Shopau


THANK U SO MUCH i am so happy that u liked it😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
WOW WOW WOW ME FIrst 🥳
Coming to the update...
Mirza jealous is just awww...

And can't wait for the honeymoon... Can we get some steamy scenes please???

Love
Shopau
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Shopau

WOW WOW WOW ME FIrst 🥳

Coming to the update...
Mirza jealous is just awww...

And can't wait for the honeymoon... Can we get some steamy scenes please???

Love
Shopau


hope so i'am just planning for it u know😳 i'am am happy that u liked the chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Heyy what a beautiful update i woke up to this morning...i loveee the way you described his jealousy...it was sooo cute

Im glad im seeing a more possessive and protective side of our hero mirza here...angry jealous possessive halfway deeply in love man...loving it👍🏼

brilliant update... yes and i agree with shopau...can we have a lil steamy scenes 😉

update soon...cant wait !!!

MY USUAL BIGGG WALA HUG TO YOU 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Haww the kiss☺️
And then the entire jealous of mirza
Just awesome
And Suryabhan - nice choice of names
Very well written
Waiting for honeymoon in Thailand
Keep writing
Thanks for PM
Update soonish
-Manu-
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Posted: 9 years ago
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razia adjusted her dress. She tied up her in a lose ponytail and she was ready to go.mirza was waiting for her on the car as he had to give her "the good news" Putting on the black shades mirza looked at razia through the reAr view mirror. razia opened the door and slid inside the car. As she entered the car, she gave a cute smile to mirza, which made mirza's heart skip a beat. Concentrate mirza, he thought to himself."razia, i have something to tell you and I think you will like it."he spoke with a sly grin. razia understood his indication and spoke in a soft manner" Jaldi buri khabar de dijiye(Quickly give me the bad news.)

mirza smirked at razia's remark. He sighed deeply and spoke "We are going to our very own Honeymoon to Thailand and that to tonight."Giving out a victorious smile mirza removed the shades and enjoyed razia's change in expressions.

razia was blown away with mirza's last sentence. Honeymoon? That to with him?Why is he taking me there?Is it his new ploy to ruin her?There must be a hidden motive behind this Honeymoon razia's chain of thoughts were broken by mirza "Dont get ur hope high my love.Its just a business conference and we are starting tonight." razia raised a brow at him and in an irritated tone "Uggghhh.. Then I can't come to the office today. I have to pack my bag." mirza with a smirk "Darling then you have to pack minene too as I will be busy in the office." "Why would I pack your stuff? Look mister I don't have time for nonsense." mirza shrugged his shoulders "Suit yourself. Then enjoy the rest of the day reviewing up a huge pile of files right infront of my eyes." razia put a thought to it. It would be better is she stayed back home and packed his suitcase rather then going through all those files and that to right in front of him.

"I'll pack your junk." The door flew open and in no time razia was out of the car. mirza shouted at the top of his face "Dont forget to take my Handkerchieves."with a little smirk he added "Honey.."

razia spent the entire day packing "Their" luggage. She mentally cursed mirza as she packed his luggage. It was almost the time for mirza to come.razia remembered the last thing mirza had said her. The handkerchieves.razia rushed back to the room and pulled open the cupboard and took four handkerchieves.On this process, a photo-album fell from cupboard.


It was a pink album with a white ribbon on it"Memories". "Arey yeh kya hai?"razia picked it up and just when she was about to open it, the door bell rang "Ting Tong." razia kept the photoalbum back to its place and rushed inside the washroom. "Crap! I'm late! Jallad is definetly going to eat me alive."She heard mirza entering the room"razia.. Aren't you ready yet??"

"I'm almost done. Wait for me downstairs." "Alright. But be quick." razia sighed a breathe of relief. But she had to be quick. She quickly changed herself up in a blue shirt with black pants. She quickly stroked her hair and one looked one last time in the mirror and dashed out of the room.


mirza watched the clock ticking by and there was no sign of razia. She appeared in the staircase and rushed downstairs. She almost tripped twice which made mirza twitch abit. Such a clumsy Girl she is. He glanced at her and noticed how beautiful she was looking. The Royal blue color had totally suited with her. razia snapped mirza out of his thoughts. "Aren't we running late now??" mirza ignored her and turned to leave. Both of them got inside the car. mirza kept telling razia how important this deal is for him and that they had to get it by any cost. "Ugggh! I get it! I get it! The deal is very important for your company and you don't want anything wrong to happen. How many times will u repeat the same old thing??" razia said, now very much annoyed with the on and on deal talk. mirza said coolly "Until you get it locked inside your brain." razia didn't even bother to roll her eyes. The reached the airport and within an hour they had passed the immigration and boarded on the plane. Obviously mirza and razia were traveling on business class. They sits were really comfortable and just when they entered the plane they were served with a glass of juice by a pretty air-hostess who was charmed by mirza'a handsome face. She gave a cute smile to mirza.

This wasn't unnoticed by razia. Of course she didnt have any feelings for mirza and especially love. But he was her husband and no woman in the world would want another woman to eye their husband. razia glared at the air-hostess giving her the "You better stop what you are doing now" look. The air hostess dragged her eyes away from mirza, who had noticed this and gave out a cute chuckle at razia's antics.


They plane took off. mirza was busy with his IPad whereas razia engrossed herself in an intense lovestory "half girl friend" by chetan bhagat. In the two hours flight both of them ignored each other. Just exchanged a few words and glances at each other.


The flight landed safely and it took about an hour to complete all the procedures and they were finally off for their hotel. It was already 11 pm and razia was really tired. The hotel was abit far from the airport. razia closed her eyes and soon sleep took over her. mirza on the other hand was discussing business with his employee on the phone. Suddenly he felt someone's head against his shoulder. razia's. "Abhay hold for a minute." mirza looked at the sleeping beauty who was sleeping comfortably, resting her head on his shoulder. mirza smiled inwardly. He noticed that a strand of hair had fallen on her eyelids and it was disturbing her nap. mirza moved the hair from her face. His warm breathe on her delicate soft skin. mirza moved away and cut the call as it might disturb her. razia opened her eyes and moved away from mirza "Im so sorry.. I didnt mean to rest my head on your shoulder. Ummm.. Sorry.." mirza smiled at razia. She was indeed very pure and innocent. "No need to say sorry. Look we reached the hotel." Their car entered a very luxurious hotel "The Grand President." It looked Royal from the outside but the inside was more beautiful. It had a royal touch to everything. razia looked around her surroundings and waited in the waiting room while mirza checked in a room. Both entered the lift and mirza swiped the card and pressed level 11. They walked to the room and found their room. The door had a big tag on it "Honeymoon Suite" engraved in italic. razia didn't actually mind it as she had figured that this trip is going to be a torture for her.


razia changed her dress up and slipped inside the warm blankets and dozed off. " After watching a little T.V mirza dozed off beside razia. The sun made their way through the Elegant Golden Curtains and fell on razia's face . razia opened her eyes and yawned. "Ufff! Why is this Jallad beside me???" razia threw the blanket away from her and took a quick shower.


By the time razia had finished her shower mirza was up. Both of them got ready and prepared themselves for the busy day full of presentations. At the end of the day razia-and mirza had completed all their task. "razia you take some rest in the room while I meet up with a friend. One more thing, we have a little party in the Hotel's club tonight. Come down by 9.Alright?" razia nodded. mirza left the room while razia took a power nap.



AT HOTEL CLUB 9:30pm
Taking a sip of his drink, mirza continuously kept looking at the entrance of the club. He kept checking the time on his wristwatch. "Women, I tell you." mirza heard his friend. "Waiting for your girl huh mirza?" mirza smiled at him. Somewhere he was proud that razia was HIS girl. "Yeah waiting for my wife. Why do women take so much time dressing themselves up?" His friend gave a chuckle. "Did I say something funny?" "No
Yaar.. Women dress themselves nice to tempt men." "razia is different. She is not like those type of girls."

The Club's door flew open and every single living soul had their eyes glued to the beauty who just entered the room. The red cocktail dress suited with her tall slender body. The smokey shadow complimented her hazel Doe like eyes. Her long Jet Black hair left open with rings at their end. The pink gloss made her lips look desirable. She wore a pair of black earrings, with no other jewellery except for a pearl necklace. mirza's eyes caught sight of the beauty standing by the door. He was lost. Most of the time she looked beautiful and cute, but now she looked hot and very much desirable. Who would not want a wife like her? Just then realization struck his head. The other men I. The club must've been eyeing razia.

mirza went up to razia and protectively wrapped his arms around razia's waste and said"Come with me my love." Her smell was more divine. mirza took Jodha to the sit."This is my razia." He introduced razia to his friends and they chatted for awhile. Then mirza with his friends parted from razia. She sat on the bar stool asking the bartender for a glass of orange juice. The bartender himself had bad intentions. The moment he saw razia entering the Club he wanted her for the night. "Here you go Ma'm. Your orange juice." razia took a sip of the juice and it tasted weird. She gulped down the entire glass and asked for one more.. Then one more. Then one... On and on it went...



"mirza have this." Spoke his friend "Nah man! I don't want to drink now." "Come on Yaar! Don't be such a baby! One! Try one! Just one!" mirza sighed "ok fine. But just one." mirza gulped down his drink. But then he went on and on and finished up an entire bottle.




"Leave me you son of a bit**h!" razia protested in her drunk state while the bartender tried to force himself on her. "In your dreams." razia struggled but the man was too strong for her. The bartender felt a blow right across his face and fainted. "Don't you dare touch my wife!" mirza in his drunk state tried to control his anger.


"Chalo razia!" He held razia by her hand and left from the Club.



*In their Suite*

"razia can't u stay away from trouble??Why do you always get into a mess?" mirza spoke. razia had a hiccup "aah... Now you are shouting at me! Will u leave me too?? Like my parents did?? I'm so lonely In this world." razia broke down. mirza wiped her tears "don't cry baby... I was just worried. I will always be with you."

He planted a soft kiss on razia's forehead. razia hugged mirza tightly.Desire filled up in of this body. mirza broke the hug and slowly drew his face closer to razia razia closed her eyes. mirza stopped and then kissed razia with passion. His kiss was demanding and it had
Revealed all the hidden desires inside razia's body. All kind of sensations brushed inside her body, making her crave for more. She kissed back mirza with enormous amount of passion. mirza groaned. They were soon out of breathe so they broke apart. mirza's next kiss target was her neck. He held her up and kissed her. His tongue drawing patterns all over her neck. razia's has frisked through mirza's hair, making it a mess. The shy razia was gone by now. mirza's attention return rd back to her lips. A soft moan escaped her lips. " mirza "mirza smiled at her. His eyes filled with lust and love both at the same time. She felt his warm breathe on her skin. She sagged in his arms. He just held her up.razia unbuttoned his shirt and threw it away. He went on exploring her lips. She dug nails on his bare back making him go crazy with the desires.His thumb caressed her throat, cupped deliciously over her . shewas beautifully shaped... fitted perfectly on his palm.He kissed the hollow of her throat, she gasped. His mouth burried in her .He slowly unzipped her dress, . His hands traced a path over her waist, her naked belly, the curve of her . Her body arched towards him. In no
time all there clothes were on the ground beside them. . . Making themselves one. . Both of then were drenched in sweat. After reaching the ultimate peak mirza collapsed and razia she felt she was at home home sweet home.
wasn't it too clumsy guys??? just jet me know by your comments


Jeene laga hoon..
Pehle se zyada..
Pehle se zyada
Tumpe marne laga..

Main, mera dil
Aur tum ho yahan
Phir kyun ho
Palkein jhukayein wahan
Tum sa haseen
Pehle dekha nahin
Tum isse pehle the
Jaane kahan..

Jeene laga hoon..
Pehle se zyada..
Pehle se zyada
Tumpe marne laga..



Precap: razia and mirza wake up and realise ahem ahem...

Edited by cuteshravani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ahem ahem so finally ho hii gaya...aaah im sure they r deeply gna protest abt this to each other the next morning but will be dancing n jumping from inside. Yaay
so now we can expect a pregnant razia and a very over protective mirza...🥳... but u can take ur time for that
just update it sooon again I cant wait to see what happens next when they realize they made a 'beautiful' mistake.
I loved the update...the hottest and the best one yet
jaldiii update karo chapter 11
and my big wala hug becomes more big now for u🤗
thanks for the PM too and thank u for keeping us entertained while there is a 2 day break for razia sultan.
Edited by arshia200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Shravani🤗
Such a beautiful chapter, rather hot☺️
Oh filled with whole lot of love and passion
Loved it
Your writing style is just fabulous
Precap is much engaging
I'm eager to know what will happen now
Thanks for the PM
Update soon
-Manu-
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
res ... leaving now for something urgent...
will comment in a while


unres -

Amazing update Shravani!!! way to go girl
finally they couldn't stop their true feelings to take over...

Razia really wants him to love her and that's all...

Have to wait until Mirza showers her with all his love and that's all 🤗
For a girl who doesn't receive love from her father all her life... somehow becomes more emotionally demanding from her husband. It just naturally happens...

Hope Mirza will understand!

love
Shopau
Edited by Shopau - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: arshia200

Ahem ahem so finally ho hii gaya...aaah im sure they r deeply gna protest abt this to each other the next morning but will be dancing n jumping from inside. Yaay

so now we can expect a pregnant razia and a very over protective mirza...🥳... but u can take ur time for that
just update it sooon again I cant wait to see what happens next when they realize they made a 'beautiful' mistake.
I loved the update...the hottest and the best one yet
jaldiii update karo chapter 11
and my big wala hug becomes more big now for u🤗
thanks for the PM too and thank u for keeping us entertained while there is a 2 day break for razia sultan.


calm down !!! calm down don't hurry so much it takes time foe a baby otherwise i have to add that their harmones work too fast rather than normal!!! lol i'am a bio student after all😆 anyways apart from joke thank u for the hugg and sorry but i can't fill full your wish now by the baby but soon i'll think about it😳
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