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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

so introduce this part with "possible romance "at current scenario...o thnx jii, thnx a lot...


this champi thing made me laugh😆

too gud...

 i wanted it dat way...

aap itna acha ud likhte ho, main aapki at least kuch smiles ka reason tho bann hi sakti ho na.



ayega ayega woh din bhi ayeaga


i know meri speed se thoda delay ho raha tha....sachhi kha h aapne, bhott slow ho aap..


legally in lov, cindy, silver amulet, n latest n funniest(meri buddy-ash wala) taming d shrew..😍



but ayega😊





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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys i made one change that is  ananya is 20yrs old instead of 18 yrs. as her father's will stated that at when she wil be 20yr the khurana property will be on her name so as the owner she cud transfer it to anyone ,so by the evil trio was going to dupe her by proving her mentally ill.

so bottom line; change is only that she is 20 yrs old and she suffered the evil trio torture for four years

This is A  combo update as i m updating after months 

so take ur sweet time to read it . absolutely no hurry to read it
read it according to ur convenience . i divided it into parts and subparts
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                     A=ENTRY OF FAIRY GODMOTHER
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thr might b mistakes,sorry abt it


Veer escorted ananya towards the door so they can go to the office.veer came to a halt when heard seema calling his name. He told ananya to sit inside the car he be out in a minute.

Veer- yes bhabhi

Seema- listen as u are going out I need u to do something

Veer- but we r kind in a rush

Seema- its 4 piyu

Veer- O, so wat is it?

Seema- as u know school's silver jublee function is on toll. There is lot to be done by PTA ( parent teacher association). As the head everythings just comes on me. So wud  u pls take these designs to Farida aunty .She had given these to me earlier to approve the costumes for the children's play .i had to give to her by today.or the work won't proceed.

Veer- f9 I'll drop these on my way. But is Farida aunty herself doing the costumes

Seema- I pursued her ;u know piyu is like a granddaughter 2 her . she happy to do it for her.

Veer-piyu must be excited abt this

Seema- yes she is

veer took the folder and left . as he went outside he found annaya standing near his Aston martin. he moved towards her.ananya smiled at him

ananya- shall we go (she turned and opened the back door)

veer- o, we r not going by this.

At same instant driver arrived with another car

Veer-here's our ride

Veer opened the door for her and she got inside the car. They both took

 

As they hit the road a red jeep was following them. The car  halted infront of the  boutique named "GULMOHOUR" .

Ananya- are we there?

Veer- no actually I had to run some errands here. If u want 2 come u can (he just said this out of  politeness  ; he thought it might be rude to leave her in the car)

Ananya-ok

 

They entered the boutique through the revolving door .the boutique was magnificent ,

The attendants and female customers were eyeing veer (hottie alert😆) , ananya got confused and asked him "why they staring at me?"

 

Veer clearing her doubts "I guess they r looking at me"

Ananya in confusion "why"

Veer "ahh..."

 

"Veer" ,a voice called him out , with a smile on his face he moved towards the figure and hugged  her  . she was  elderly woman in her 60's  dressed in white salwar suit,they did small talk.

Farida Jalal


 

Then Farida angled her head as veer was blocking her view  to see ananya;  who was self consciously standing amidst the room.

 

Farida -Veer I guess I need to be introduce to u r wife n my DIL

VEER-Aunty u  know wat situation led to this . she's not really  my...

But farida cut him by saying "whatever may b the reason she is here I m waiting for introduction"

They walked towards Ananya

Veer gesturing towards Ananya "Aunty this is Ananya '"

Farida with a smile , "such beautiful name" cupping ananya 's cheek and placing a kiss on her forehead

ANANYA felt very happy abt the affectionate gesture.

 

Few moments   later both A N V were sitted on the couch in faraida' cabin.

"seema's selection is very nice", she said examining the file . "I think the costumes are gonna turn out gr8, veer let me show u some more of the material for them"

 

"ananya why don't see some of our collection , if u like something u can have it"

 

Ananya "me'."

 

Farida "why not"

Veer too encouraged her "if u wish something u can have"

Ananya "ok but not now"

 

Farida "sweetheart whenever u wish to have something just drop in here , I wil give personal attention to my DIL"


when ananaya left alone in the cabin , the attendant came in with a glass of  orange juice.when she drank it tasted weird apart from the orange tangy flavour there was something else sensitizing her taste buds but she didn;t pay any heed to it and finished the drink.


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Now sooper fast update , bohot bore ho raha hai filler likhe  ko toh so maine cut shot kar rahi  hu ,only stating wat is happening in quick fashion

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Finally they reached the office ananya signed the papers.

Vicky walks in the cabin.

 

Vicky "so u must be annaya . hi I m Vicky."

 

They shook hand , he was very friendly

Vicky "if need to anthing abt veer , u call me I know all his secret"

Veer 2 vic "ya rite ! "

 

later veer accompanied ananya downstairs ,he had already called in thedriver  to bring his ASTON MARTIN at the office as he needed his to drive to silvasa &, to drive ananya home in the BMW they just drove in.

 

When they were leaving the office stepmom (vamp) saw them and followed them along with texting someone.

 

Veer and ananya went to basement car parking where his driver had rose from the parked  ASTON MARTIN, and gave the keys 2 veer .

 

Then veer pulled the door of the BMW for ananya and bid her good bye . ananya was feeling light headed ,she thought may coz of the excursion but she didn't told anyone.

 

The car took off  but its engine died off before even getting out of the parking lot. So the driver told ananya to sit there and he went off to get veer

 

Ananya wasn't feeling well but she noticed her engagement ring wasn't in her hand , she realized it wasn't there in her finger at the boutique too.

She got out of the car thinking she must haved dropped it in veer's A-M wen they drove out of the mansion.

She swayed slightly while walking away from the BMW

But she continued to saunter towards Veer's A-M .

 

The driver WAS GETTING in the lift to go upstairs ,but as the door opened naintara (stepmom) came out the lift and said that  she is ananya's mom and veer told her to take ananya home in her car.

 

The driver told his concern  and doubts to inform veer but she cut him out by ordering him to know his place and she is too the director the company and veer's mother in law.

 

So finally the driver gave in , but naintara issued him a new  order of taking the company car to the airport to receive a certain client, so the driver instead of going upstairs went the other parking yard  where the company cars were suppose to be parked.

 

When he left naintara took a phone and punched the number and blurted on the cellphone

 

"get her now she alone. Hope she won't b conscious by now , so there won't be any problem getting her "

 

Finally ananya reached the A-M , as its back seat door'd lock was broken , she easily got into the backseat ,closing the door behind her, she was planning to bend over ,peek to the front  side to search for her ring. But her vision was getting blurred ,she wasn't feeling her legs , then the next second she was flat on the back seat ,unconscious ,as the cars glassed were tinted; no could see inside the car ,on top of that she was lying flat which hid her.

 

 

A man entered the parking lot   ,his eyes fell on BMW  , in no time he was near it and he unlocked the door , with the help two metal pointed things which resembled surgical instruments , the door was ajar , then getting in the car ,his eyes were ransacking it as in looking for someone but no one was there.

 

Then he searched the parking lot twice or thrice but eyes didn't spot even a single soul.

He called stepmom   from the phone and said "she is not here"

 

Sm  "ur out of ur mind ,where can she go in that state; look properly"

 

Man "she is not here"

 

Naintara (sm) was in a  fierce mood , she just barked instruction to him to look outside .

Then she made another call and said "listen I want singh mansion's phoneline tapped, I don't care how much money is required ;just do it" 

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After few hrs at around 8-9 pm , veer had changed; instead of office attire he was wearing earlier , now he donned casuals actually semi casuals i.e. blazer and shirt . he was abt leave downstairs to his Aston martin . but Vicky joined him and they entered the elevator ,and veer pressed the parking lot button , and  they started descending from 15 th floor

 

 

Vicky- Listen

Veer=Wat

Vicky-  Abt ur new relationship...

Veer R we gonna go through that talk again

Vicky-  Fine . But one thing . Just u had one bad , messed experience , it doesn't mean u r not gonna  give life another chance. Give love another chance .

 

Veer I guess i had love once

Vicky- U r gonna call that love

Veer It was

Vicky- -No it wasn't . Forget it unless u will experience the real "LOVE", u will not  know the difference  between wat u call love and the real one.

 

Veer R we done ,with my life story

And I m not  gonna have anymore love . I don't want it

 

Vicky- But u need it . don't worry u have already got it . u just have to stretch ur hand to take it

Veer Wat r u talking abt

Vicky- -Ananya . she loves u

Veer U had met her hardly for 10 min.

Vicky- It only takes one look to recognize love

Veer Since wen u became love guru?

Vicky- Since I have been in love , love senses love

Veer Have been reading some chick books , or sia is brainwashing u

Vicky- Hey...

Veer I mean u practically used "love" approximately equal to the floor we traveled. And still haven't shut up.

Vicky- f9 I will shut up now ,but no matter wat u do love will find u

Veer First that's cheesy. Second she isn't in love with me , its just gratitude

 

They entered the parking lot , veer had his overcoat in his hand , they hugged eachother & bid goodbye,

 

Veer traveled towards his car , he just inserted the key to open the driver seat door , this car was an old model  without digital remote controlled operated locks, he still remembered on their first year anniversary as a couple ; he asked HER  wat SHE  wished to have ,when She demanded that she doesn't want anything for HERSELF but she wanted him to have new car , so that their long drives wud be better , SHE used just hate the old car  which veer used to drive in college which originally belonged to his grandfather .

 

Veer was abt to lean in & get in  the car and turn on the car lights but someone called him out , he unceremoniously dumped in overcoat ;which he was holding;  on the backseat and turned .It was  his assistant who needed veer to sign some papers ,which veer quickly did and he took the driver seat , fired off the engine and took off.


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Edited by pranita1202 - 11 years ago
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there might be mistakes so sorry abt it

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The  night was windswept, the stars were appearing as the sun slowly disappeared behind the mountains . Veer  was driving out of the city.  He blinked, shook his head as if trying to rid himself of his own tired thoughts. Vicky 's words were ringing in his head and piyu was cold to him these days .After all he did for his family ,most beloved member was upset with him. Finally the daylight fell to the darkness of night he could feel the change in temperature on his skin. A chilly mist can be felt in the wind blowing off. He continued driving. The headlights shone just as bright like the blazing sun to guide him through the way. The road was concrete but deserted with no street light or signs; just greenery and foliage on both sides which would  really be pleasant to view in daylight but at night it was terrifying.The sound of waves was soothing . He kept on driving.

 

Suddenly there was movement in the backseat & a figure rose. Sensation of moving confused her, she rubbed her eyes n saw a black pavement coming closer and dark ,weird shapes moving backwards.Then her eyes fell upon steering wheel driven by 2 strong hands dressed in a black blazer  and she moved her gaze above the shoulder saw head whose jet black hair were waving due the wind .She slowly placed her shivering hand on his shoulder and uttered 'veer'

Being alarmed he turned back & being baffled in utter surprise he said "you" and at the same time ,he applied the brake of the car causing them to experience a jerk due to which her forehead struck the back driver's seat and started bleeding. 


Veer hustled out of the car and reached for the backseat's door and got in & asked "r u alright" cupping her face .'O I m so sorry; I was shocked' he took his hanky out and wiped the blood with the water from the'bisleri' bottle lying down in the car . 

Ananya mumbled in pain "sssh".


Veer- I' m sorry (he blew air from his mouth slowly over the bruise n cleaned it whereas ananya's eyes stuck on his face in the car light).are u ok

 

Ananya- I'm now (suddenly realizing wat she said, she covered up).I mean after u cleaned up the wound I m f9.

         Suddenly the thought struck veer why he was bemused cause his "his newly wed wife" was in the back of the car when he was half way to silvasa rather then being home resting

 

Veer- what  r u doing here

Ananya '(  placing  frisky hair behind her ear as for recollecting something)

I don't remember. My car broke   in the office parking lot n I wasn't feeling well i got into your car to look for my ring  n then all blank I think I fell asleep.

Veer- u feel asleep ! I have being driving for hours & u  were in u r sweet slumber on the leather seat with my over coat as blanket . I must say u r a good sleeper.

VEER- i guess I should call home n get some one here to get u back .if u want to sleep u can.

 

Ananya- no I guess I had my share of sleep

 Veer smiled at her and got out ; then locked the door , got on driver seat adjusted his seat belt and fired the engine and started off.

It was around 3am, the surrounding was quite. Just two souls moving forward away from the hustle & bustle of the city

 

 

 

Veer- r u hungry?

Annaya - no

Veer- how so u must haven't eaten for atleast 7 to 8 hrs

Annaya- I had juice that the botiqu...

Veer(interrupted)- here(he handed over a nutrition bar) now eat

 Ananaya slowly ate it it was large in quantity she finished only half & said

''I'll keep rest 4 later"

Veer--As u wish . should I turn on the music

Ananya- music  (her ears didn't tasted the wine of music for a while n she was unaware as to wat he was  gonna play so she just gave affirmative answer ) sure  (he slid the cd in and it started playing )

 

The song began surprisingly the song was a classic children song. It was piyu's favourite musical so obvious that it had to be in veer's collection & as usual piyu must have exchanged the covers of the CD. The song began

 

Suddenly when the song stuck her ears .a sensation tickled upon her pale ice cold dry cheeks. A single drop of grief welled up from the corner of his eye .it was noticed by veer, he was confused

 

Veer- (worringly)-wats wrong

Ananya wasn't aware that veer was watching she wiped the tear drop & said "nothing"

 

 

 Veer was aware that she was upset but can't figure out why . has he done anything wrong. He stepped out of the car, ananya got surprised as it broke her chain of thought.He got out of the car ,unlocked the back door and approached anu. " miss ananya would u pls care to join me in front sit "he said mocking her with his extra formal way.ananya too reciprocated, "why not sir,I be glad". Veer gladly stretched his hand "shall we"

Ananya smiled ,placing her hand on his "we shall".he escorted her to the front seat locked the door and got behind the wheel, wore his belt , signaled  at ananya to wear her too.annaya pulled her seat belt on but she was unable to buckle it properly.Veer bends towards her to buckle it up .though it too just seconds but it seemed a something else to annanya.in these seconds she was centimeters away from the man she loved the most.As he leaned towards her .She was wasn;t able to resist his exquisite features his black eyes and she couldn't help but stare at his perfectly clear skin and his luscious lips. He bend over making sure that their bodies don't touch eachother and buckled up and moved away from her as he getting aback she admired his loose strand of his jet black hair . She sat straight she was memorizing this entire incident  with her eyes down ,not speaking anything. Veer wasn't sure why she is quite but he didn't know how to ask .But he didn't know  though she was upset before in last one minute a storm was going on in her heart . A new set feelings were creeping in her. Without a word spoken between them he drove.

  Finally they reached the destination .

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As  he had stated "haveli" this wasn't it ; it was pleasantly different. The water ripples  sound from the sea was evident ,  the sky was blackish shade of blue with sunlight pouring from the horizon like honey .Morning sky was indeed beautiful , Veer held the door for ananya ,SHE got off the car. He directed towards the house .

 




After being cramped in the car for half  a day ananya  felt delighted  for the encounter with fresh  and open surrounding. With last four years being devoid of  the things people didn't have time to notice ,she was not taking it for granted. She took time circling around and assimilating the  gorgeous view.

Veer was watching the pure happiness on her face ,and said "isn't it beautiful"

Her eyes fell on him and with a smile she nodded, they started walking towards the house. Veer was telling her how he loves this place apart from the farmhouse and the ranch.

After entering the threshold

A "but this is not the haveli ?"

 V " No; its not, this is our bungalow ,my grandfather gifted it to my grandmother as she used to hate staying at the haveli ,as she wasn't keen abt the decor there, she loved open spaces . so as kids too we spend time here "

 

Ananya loved his glittering eyes , he really loved this place.

 

Finally the house keeper came to greet  .veer introduced ananya to komal who was working for them since veer was kid. She was surprise to see veer bringing someone in here coz apart from piyu he never brought anyone here not even HER.

 

Veer entrusting ananya to komal ;took a leave to his room upstairs stating that he had inform abt ananya's presence here at the singh mansion . Ananya 's eyes followed him till he disappeared .With the expert eyes  Komal guessed that ananya is awfully in love with her veer baba. But it didn't miss her expert eyes that it was ('a teenage lingo guys )"one way traffic".'

 

She was really nice with ananya , she ran a bath for her and as ananya had no other outfits ,she asked ananya to give her the clothes she was wearing and provided her with a flowery robe to wear till the clothes were  washed and dried off.

 

After the warm bath she was in the dining area clad in the loose flowery robe ,her hair were a riot , and thick mass was blown off (expanded in volume) with half wet ,they were kind of messed up , so their wasn't a  point in combing and clutching in clip wasn't an option as they were not dried completely.

 

When she asked abt veer ,komal informed her he is out as he had to run some errands, ananya was dismayed but komal tried to cheer her up and said to enjoy her breakfast . she set the table with warm Indian delicacies like paratha and upma. Ananya didn't wanna make komal effort go vain ,so she spooned the upma ,but she was coughing in no time as she swallowed it as the hint of spice didn't suit her. As for nearly four yrs she wasn't accustomed to tastes, except for medicines ,milk , meals for patients.

 

Komal provided a glass of water quickly ,ananya drank it seizing the cough. Komal was feeling very guilty and she apologized . ananya told her it wasn't her fault as ananya  herself wasn't used to normal food. Finally komal fixed a bowl of oatmeal and glass of  juice for ananya .

 

Veer was out screening the view of mountains ,and beaches and the greenery. He informed the family abt ananya being with him and just was taking the view to forget the changes in his life in last two days.

 

Few yards away on the main road a jeep pulled over and someone got off from it and  was eying the Aston martin parked on the road and then spotted veer standing through the binoculars. And took the phone and made a call

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At singh's mansion

Wannabee's bedroom

 

Gia- geez that gal is fast

Ria (was combing her hair in front of mirror)-who?

Gia- ugly duckling who else. I mean two days into marriage and she got herself into honeymoon with chachu.

Ria- they r not on honeymoon

Gia- ya rite , keep on thinking that , but have to agree how smartly she cornered chachu and kept him for herself.

 

Piyu was crestfallen listening to this who was standing beside the door of the bedroom .

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Veer returned to the villa at evening ,he was tied up in work or so to say but  he just needed some space .

Komal told him off  that this is no way to leave his new bride at home waiting for him. So she suggested him to take ANANYA for sight seeing .

 

Veer went to ananya'room ,she was sitting cross legged  on the window seat eyeing the the orange sun through the glass window .

When her eyes fell on him dressed in simple T-shirt with a V neck , accentuating his chest muscles and black jacket.

 

When he approached her , she stood up and greeted him good evening, she dressed the same loose grey long sleeved top and faded jeans, which frisky and tangled mass to hair clutched  in a clip.

 

Veer began the conversation , "wud u like to go for sightseeing"

 

Annaya "I don't mean to intrude in your work afterall u r here to crack a deal "

 

Veer assured her it won't be a problem and insisted her to join him .He knew if he didn't take her outing komal wud really displeased and he wud end up getting burnt dinner tonight. And it won't kill him to be nice to her and play host . after all she was his guest , not only here at the farm house but in his life too , once everything recovered , her heath and his families financial condition he would let her go entrusting her money and property to her .

 

They drove off in his ASTON MARTIN ,this was the first time when any woman other than piyu  had occupied the seat beside the driver's seat after "HER"

 

They drove away ,unbeknownst to the knowledge that a jeep was tailing them,

 

After sometime as they were returning home , he glanced at the figure ,beside him , she had dozed off after they got into the car  after spending the time on beach watching the sun sinking in the water.

 

When they departed from the house he first took her to a cafe  , where they had they had beverages , he went for coffee and she just opted to vanilla milk shake .

 

Then as the beach was close ,they stroll towards it , and wandered barefooted on sand , veer continued to make polite convo abt how he likes being here. She was thinking how she liked being with him anywhere.

 

The feeling of the waves on her feet was so refreshingly new and she  enjoyed every bit of this new rendezvous with nature .

 

When they were relaxed  , sited on the beach eyeing sun going down . he listened himself asking her out of concern that why she was upset in the car.

 

She answerd , "O that, actually the song  u played was our song I mean my & dad's . "

V "SORRY u were upset'"

A "no need to be sorry . I wasn't upset just happy to remember him"

V "u miss him right . life was unfair to u"

A "ya a lot but . but things happen "

V "u had sufferd a lot"

A "but not anymore. I have u...i mean my  dad's not here , but god has sent you to take care of me "

 

Veer thought ruefully abt her optimistic perception to look at the life was good thing or a bad thing for her

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The car was covering the distance on the  concrete road .The evening was pleasant . THE road was encased on both sides with greenery . There was dense vegetation during rainy season in Silvassa . The road was built amidst the forest. THE FLOCK of birds returning to their nests , the sound of leaves , the water waves sound dominated the  ambience .

 

Suddenly something caught veer's eyes and he pressed the brakes of the car. The figure was flattened on the road , eyeing him veer reasoned  that it was a man and there was pool of red around him ;concluding that it was an accident victim. Veer got off the car and moved towards him .

 

When Veer leaned over and bending his head to examine him. He felt a blow at the back of his head, suddenly the world seemed spinning ,the "accident victim" was on his feet in no time, with a evil smirk on his face .

When veer turned , his legs shaky , he spotted a man with a long wooden log in his hand.

Veer fell on his knees with a hand on his head .with blurred vision he saw ananya shouting and screeching ,and being dragged out of the car by someone . suddenly everything went blank

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Slowly ananya's eyes moved , her brain started intaking wat had happened , she remembered being dragged out of the car when she was half asleep and vision of veer collapsing on the ground. Her struggle to free herself from the arms which were dragging her other way and her mouth and nose covered by white hanky , and she inhaled a weird chemical sort of smell , making her senses dizzy and making her leave the grip towards the reality and she was dragged into numbness ,feeling nothing and going into state of sleep.


After assimilating the surrounding ,she got to know that she was sited leaning her back to a tree among the dense foliage and she cud clearly hear the loud noise of water falling from a height , stating the fact that their was waterfall nearby

Under her hooded eyes she was stealing glances of the surrounding without moving , she saw a man few feet away from her . with a hand to his ears he was evidently engrossed in a phone call.

Ananya heard him speak

"yes its done... no he didn't gave us hard time. When shud we call for ransom'...he continued to talk.



Ananya quitely made an attempt to move without making noise, she was bare footed .She must has dropped her footwear while she was being dragged.

She carefully got herself in standing position with the support of the tree and swiftly slid the other way without making a sound and made a way into the thick woods. She just kept on walking ,glancing behind , being afraid of being followed . she was feeling like a lost weak kitten.

When she heard footstep she got alert ,she was near the cliff ,there was no way forward only vertical downpour of ivory water falling down at a rocket speed . she turned right and hid behind the bushes.


Through the bushes she was only able to see the feet of the person, she had held in her breathe ,due the fear of being caught .

The person began calling her name "ANANYA "

It was veer !

With a sigh of relief she raised her head and stretched her hand and was about to reply him , but suddenly was she being smothered as a large hand ruthlessly covered her mouth ,and other twisting her arm .making her unable to move.



Veer was frantically scanning the arena. Sometime before when he regained his consciousness . He replayed everything wat happened and was scared as hell when he found ananya was not in the car.

After he ransacked the forest like mad in search of her ,when he heard two men looking for someone , he hid and listened to their conversation ,it was evident from their convo that ananya has got away.

Picking up the near by wooden log , he moved behind them and knocked out one of them by hitting the man at the back of his head. But this alerted the other one , he quickly turned and and banged his fist to veer;s jaw ,causing it to bleed .

But in no time veer recovered from the blow and blocked the other attack coming from the man by grabbing his fist by one hand and then twisting it, and giving him a thunderous blow on his face , making him immobile and lying flat on the ground .


By eyeing the surrounding veer thought ,she must have gone other way as this was a dead end with the waterfall in forward direction .

So veer retreated from the spot , ananya was struggling very hard to signal him but she had a tight hold over her mouth , she began to wiggle her feet hysterically ,but her eyes had lost the sight of veer,next moment she was bodily being carried the man , she struggled but his hold was too tight .

With ananya struggling in his arms ,her mouth now stuffed with a hanky . He came out of the bushes and was about to take on the path away from the waterfall, but he felt his collar being dragged behind his back which inturn made him loosen the hold on ananya and she took the opportunity to free herself ,and spiting out the stuffed piece of cloth from her mouth ,she turned to face him.

To her relief she saw veer , he had his arm strangled around his (man's) neck , there was blood on veer's lips



But he elbowed veer's stomach and caused him to jerk . then facing him he knocked veer out causing him to fall on the surface.

Then the man moved towards ananya with the horrific expression on his face. Ananya felt like prey .

She backed out the steps in fear , making her stand at the edge of the cliff.

The man stretched a hand to haul her , causing her to flinch. She was on a slippery surface .

But as the man leapt forward ; he was flatten on the ground ,with his face hitting the ground making unconscious ;as veer dragged his feet making him loose his balance.

Veer still was on the ground . with head raised towards her.

She was relieved , & moved her feet to go towards veer but due the slippery surface , she lost her balance and was descended in the vortex of the water .


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"Hey wake up " he blurted out apprehensively patting her cheek ,she was lying still ,drenched in his arms. He quickly carried her towards the land. He placed her gently on the surface and he pumped her stomach ,so to get the water off her nose and mouth. She blurted out some water. A sense of relief engulfed him as she moved. He pumped her tummy to make her cough out the remaining water. He swiftly placed his ear to her chest to check the breathing movement which certainly didn't seem normal. The basic disaster first aid skills came very naturally to him as in colleges days he and his friends were into extreme sports and trekking and other activities, which in turn skilled him in this field.

He shifted his gaze towards her face ,she was pale and still, his hands curled into fists, he bend his head down with a reluctant expression on his anxious face as though he is been told to jump from a plane without a parachute. He took a deep breathe, moved towards her icy lips which had turned colourless ; landed his mouth on hers. Bracketed her face with his hands after uncurling them. With his hands he made sure that her head is kept still in the position. He blew air in her mouth and asserted the mouth-to-mouth resuscitation. He strongly breathe into her mouth couple of times with one hand supporting her head and one he used to pinch her nose .He repeated the process to clear the airway through her lungs and prevent it from clogging. She haste out a cough and began breathing. He again placed his ear on her chest to monitor her heartbeat and grabbed her wrist to check her pulse. Gladly she was revived but she wasn't stable. The sound of thunder dragged his attention towards the sky it was cloudy, giving clear indication to of having a downpour. He gently lifted her up in his arm and began walking.

Almost half an hour of the trek with her in his arms he spotted a light among the foliage of the dense forest. He ascended towards it and spotted a small cottage And knocked the door impatiently

"Hello hello. Is anybody there . I need help" .Disappointed with the no approval from the other side, he vigorously kicked the door and it opened ;the door of the cottage

He called out ,if some is there .but he received no reply. The cottage was small and not at all modernized .He reckon if it was a cottage or a stable, heap of hay were on the ground, with logs of wood assembled properly on one side , he turned his head to and fro & spotted a small cabinet. He placed Ananya carefully ,who was shivering, on the hay. Hastily walked towards the cabin , luckily there were sheets and blankets in there. Though the white sheet clearly seemed yellow and the two blankets were evidently sewed from the pieces of rags. He certainly had no time to observe the quality of the clothing. He ransacked the cabinet inorder to find something useful ; there were some utensils ,rags'.,he luckily found a match box. He was startled by the noise of roaring clouds followed by the blistering of the water on the roof .it had started raining heavily. He grabbed all the things and moved towards her

He quickly fixed some hay to form a bed sort of surface , he spread the thin sheet over it.

He rushed to attend ananya,she was lying at other side, her hair were damped ,she was completely drenched and was shivering. Veer took a deep breathe as if garnering some strength to tackle some impossible task. He covered her with the blanket ,again took a breathe, and glided his hands beneath the blanket and peeled off her wet clothes. He placed all her garments aside ; gently picked her up wrapped in the blanket and placed on the hay bed .HE gazed at her face which was lusterless, not that she was glowing earlier when she was fine. But now her facial condition seemed bad to worst . She was pale and shivering

He swiftly made the fire by arranging the logs and igniting it ,bolted the door so as the room temperature won't drop down further. He placed his hand above the fire to absorb some heat then; He rubbed ananya's feet by his hands , he did the same with her palms for some time but she was showing no sign of recovery.

He checked her pulse which was weak, moving his ear towards her nose, it was evident that her breathing was shallow, by monitoring he concluded that certainly she was suffering from hypothermia.

He again rubbed her feet and palm but all in vain , currently she was shivering violently, he placed his hand over her forehead; her body temperature was dropping. She was in a very fragile state, guess lying on the threshold of freezing to death. Realizing his incompetence to save her covered his face with frustration, suddenly something clicked him. Perplex by his own thought, he abruptly got up from her side and moved towards the window, the turmoil going through his mind was clearly reflected on his face. He pushed his hair back, standing the verge of decision making; he was facing the question to do something he was suppose to do inorder to avert the situation or just to surrender his inner voice of not to do anything he didn't wished for; even if the situation demands.

It was raining heavily outside; she was on the brink of fatal consequences. Now he had to reason this situation with common sense, scientific knowledge and conscious. The first he indubitably possessed but the third one he wasn't sure, was going in which direction. Should he listened to his conscious to reason this thing; BUT his belief of touching other person who he wasn't having any affection towards was killing him. However he has to consider the humanity factor. She was dying; there was absolutely no time to reason with his notion of her 'being in a vulnerable position and him taking advantage of her'.

So kicked back his thoughts ; he had to do what has to be done in his power to save her. His hands clenched in disappointment, he never felt so powerless. He took few breathes of desperation to steady the tug of war going in his mind. He glanced at her, she was feeble living being losing the battle to defend her mere existence on earth. He shut his eyes tight , released some air of his lungs as in preparing his mind to do something he never wished to do. He unbuttoned his shirt and stripped himself. He sat on the his knees beside ananya, he moved his hand towards he face; as if something was withholding him ; he clenched it back.

By gathering some strength to reason with his mind, he slowly moved his hand over her forehead & then to her cheek, she was frigidity. He lifted her blanket slightly and moved inside it. He lay beside her, he jerked out all the thoughts of reluctance ,he glided his hand around her waist inorder to face her towards him so that skin to skin contact can be made, to raise her body temperature. Though how much scientifically he reasoned this in his mind ,he felt as if he has been told to walk on the surface of burning coal. He pressed his chest against her to let her body absorb the warmth, he rubbed her back to stimulate the heat. Few moments later he moved her up in a sitting position in his arms as such her back would be in the proximity of the fire. He let the heat from the from the flames transfer some warmth to her back and her frontal portion was pressed against his body; providing her over all re-warming.

Couple hours later; she was in the insulation of his arm. Her condition had became stable. Her shivering was moderate. but she wasn't conscious.

After some time she opened her eyes confused as to where is she? She could feel the warmth from the fire and something moving on her back continuously as though molding her as if she is sculpture. She cud feel his body against her, she was not completely awake ,she was partially conscious, her visions where blurred ,she slowly rose her head and raise her gaze upward, with sleepy eyes her gaze met his anxious gaze. She examined his face he seemed worried. He spoke out " ananya how are feeling ?".


She could not see him so clearly with her blurred vision but subconsciously she knew with him nothing wrong cud happen. She made absolutely no effort to regain complete consciousness or to vitalize her brain for exploring the situation or even to eyeball where is she or to inspect her surrounding. She just knew Veer was with her so absolutely nothing can go wrong. She moved her still lying hands and curled them around him and held his eyes with her own eyes for nanoseconds and a small curve formed on her lips , in slurred speech she said "veeerrr" and rested her head on his heart and closed her eyes and she went into state of slumber. Veer was taken aback by her action. But he reasoned with his thoughts that she was not in her usual state and such delusional behavior was normal.

Shutting his rebelling thought, he straighten himself and her on the hay and held her close to sustain her body temperature. She had yet not let her grip loose and had her hands around him. He eased her head on his arm. He finally closed his eyes , he was feeling as if he had touched some loose wires and he was suffering from pain from electric shock. But he cannot let go those wires even if he wanted coz someone's life was depending on it. Finally with all the storm in his mind and her in his arms, he finally surrendered to sleep.

Silence was all over the arena, the rain had stopped but the fragrance of earth flowedthrough the atmosphere.


She gradually opened her eyes, she perceived a thatched roof, by revolving her gaze left to right , her eyes fell on him. His magnificent eyes were covered under the curtain of eyelids, with thick eyelashes she upheld her head so that she cud survey his face ;as a helicopter might overview the land.

His skin was milky white ,contrasting with his jet black. His perfect features. She smiled thinking how her life has change within just days; 4 days ago she didn't even imagine to ever perceive even a ray of sunlight. And now with him , her life was enlightened with not only sunlight but with various colorful rainbows.

She went into memory lane how he rescued her , how he fought for her. The way he claimed her to be his wife when she had no one.She kept on gazing him

(song from raja hindustani.if possible play in background and imagine)

Aaye ho meri zindagi mein, tum bahar banke
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke (2)

Ankhon mein tum base ho, sapne hazaar ban ke
Mere dil mein yunhi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke-

Aaye ho,...

Mere saathi mere sajan, mere saath yun hi chalna
Badalega rang zamana, par tum nahi badalna

Meri mang yun hi bharna, taare hazaar ban ke
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna, tum pyar pyar ban ke...

Agar main jo rooth jaoon, to tum mujhe manana
Thama hai haath mera, phir umr bhar nibhana

Mujhe chod ke na jana, wade hazaar kar ke
Mere dil mein yun hi rahna tum pyar pyar ban ke---

Aaye ho...

She leaned her head towards him and planted a small token of love on his lips .She then filled her eyes with his image and placed her head on his heart and fell a asleep with the sweet feeling that love of her life was with her.

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The girl with a silver amulet




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Edited by pranita1202 - 11 years ago
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UPDATED👍🏼


read it according to ur convenience
take ur sweet time😊
i suggest u read in parts as it is long so reading in one go is not possible
i only hope that u will enjoy it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg dat was awesome and the hut scene was great but veer still doesnt show any sign of love yet

p.s thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome pari,really awesome
this SM is really a...really a witch ya she is a witch,chudail she is not leaving a single chance to harm our poor anu but no one can harm her unless n untill veer is with her,finally veer ne apni herogiri dikhai n saved our anu
n that cottage scene,oh so u r talking about it n i thought u r writting an ss,when u said our minds r working in same directions
n anu is in her dreamland but how she will feel when she got to know that he doesn't luv her
update soon
luv u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for pm it was really great
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum
superb
mindblowing
lovely
amazing upd
w8 for d next part
keep it up
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~EDITED~

Hey, I loved seems aunty

 She is sweet,

 N unhe aapni DIL bhot acho lagi isliye…

 Achi kyu nhi lagegi..

 Meri choice jo h veer k liye..

 Kaisi h?/? mast h na…

 Mei hun hi hit.. n anu tho superhit h.. u wil know later…

Hmm.. veer ki formalities na.. uuf!.. gentleman feeling lata h..

 But beta, thodi tho niyatt kharaab karo aapni..

 Tumahri biwi h vo..

 N plz…pati aapni sunder biwiyonn ko flaunt karte h.. chupate nhi h…saamjhe..

 Ab ye sab bhi mei sikho tumhe veer, comeom dude…mr dexterity, merit ho shaddi bhii nhi hoi hab tak….but phir bhi im telling u..

 Flaut your wifey.. she rockzz…

So, seema dadi..h na anu humare veer k liye yogya bahu…

Anu ko kisi cheeez ka lalach nhi sirf pyaar hveer se..

Mela sweetie pie h anu.. I lov her…

Log mujhe pamper karte h n mei anu ko.. vah!kya kismatt payi h ananya ne.. rashmi se pampering le rahi h.. verna mei tho sabki jhand hi bajati rahthi hun.


chalo lets jum[p to next prt.

 

 

 

 


Edited by sweetsanyo - 11 years ago