FF- We Are Family NOTE pg. 78 6/7

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Hey guys! Im bk with a new FF!! Okay be4 you all go insane on me I will tell you I will be ending somethings so this will work okay?😉😆 Yes it will work!😳

Anyway can't talk too much now stupid Chem but here you all goo!!!

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^ thanks hottie!

Prologue

"Water! I need water!" he screamed in pain due to thirst, "Oh look there! There is water! My water!" he told the camel standing beside him.

He started running with renewed energy as he saw the pool of water being shaded by a palm tree. Naturally he would have wondered why there was a palm tree in the middle of the Sahara Desert but all thoughts evaded him as he ran to the water parched. He ran for what felt like miles and miles until he realized that it had been what felt like hours since he had found his water pool. Looking back he saw that his companion camel was nowhere in sight. Looking back at the pool, he noticed that it seemed to be the same length away it had been before.

He slowly started to walk to the pool finally seeing how the pool moved away from him the closer he got. Opening his mouth, he tried to let out a cry of desperation only to gag over sand which has been blown in his face. He coughed, trying to get the sand out and to get some saliva to entry his mouth so he could be realized, so he was not so thirsty. Sadly all that came was small grains of sand, no feeling of water anywhere in his body.

Allowing his knees to buckle, he fell down on the sandy land. It was barren, no sight of life anywhere. The water pool that been there seconds ago was now gone, nowhere in sight. Then it struck him' he had fallen prey to the heat!

He woke up with a start. Sitting up, he breathed heavily as he tried to ingest the room visually. It was pitch black, with some moonlight entering the room through the slight crack of the curtains. A small rise and fall of the blanket told him he was not alone. Swiftly getting up, he went to the table located in the middle of the room to get water.

He picked the jar up, expecting it to be full and almost flung it across the room since the thing was empty. Sighing internally he made his way out of the room after staring into the second bed which was also in the room near the door.

As he walked down to the stairs, he heard loud noises coming from one of the rooms. He stopped to make sure the voices were coming from the room that he thought they were. When he heard the name "Rhea" being exchanged in the conversation he knew.

Sighing once again he made his way down to the kitchen to get his drink. He didn't want to hear anymore than he already had. What he had heard was enough to tell him that tomorrow was going to be a long day and maybe' just maybe' he should still hope.



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Try to guess whose POV this prologue is from and I will update the next day 😃 Saachi! Promisee!!😃 So guess away!!! I will keep tabs and if anyone who guesses rite well then, update tht day!!

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Hershi!! I hope you liked it Auntiee😉


Index:

Part 1- Link

Part 2-Link

Part 3- Link

Part 4- Link

Part 5- Link

Edited by AquaBluez17 - 13 years ago


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Smileyface thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Soumi Grannyyy!!!! this was so interesting!!

honestly...i have no idea whos pov it is from...sooo im not even gonna bother LMFAO!!
That whole dessert/water thing was so interesante!!! (getting my spanish in there hehehe)
i wonder who "rhea" is and where this story is going!!

even though u have like bajillion stories...im waiting on the ones u said u would dedicate to me...that karva chauth one and something else...when are we getting thoseee?!?!?!?!!?

and nowww continue soon!!! =D

xox
hershi
Edited by Smileyface - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nw dis seems quite interestin Mya..evn though am z bit cnfused kz i cnt guess whose POV it is...😳
btw nyc title sweets...
😃
i really hpe sme1 manage 2 guess it correctly so dat we get da update soon..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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haha ..it left me confused !!

but one thing i must really comment on is the desert setting..for a minute there i was thrown back into the afreen afreen song and half expected him to open his eyes to the female protagonist offering him water as in the song.. 😍yeah yeah my imagination went wild but it was fun🤪

who is rhea? hmm hmm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice!! Is it Arnav's pov? Can't wait to read more, and thank you for the pm too. 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very interesting Mya, i recalled all the heat of the sahara desert (though now its cold). Who is it? I guess Arnav? and Rhea is the one in the other bed? uff now another mystery to wait for
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats on ur new FF..
Amazing suspenseful start...
Erm..is it arnavs POV...
Thanx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmmm let me see? is it rhea's point of view? or is it Akash? could be Mamaji... or OP!!! o please let it be OP!! hahaha i love you Mya!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wohoo you posted it!
Yaaay!
Loved it!
Hmm about the pov im guessing arnavs but thats too much of an easy guess so i dont know lol
loved it u described it so well
update soon myaa
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great Fan fiction. The starting completely thew me off ? for a second I though i was not reading an Arhi fan fic..but I am excited to see what happens next ! as for the POV, Kushi because only she would have crazy dreams like that...well Arnav might as well ;)


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