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Simran Singh

@SpicyHarmony

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Posted: 5 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: PehliDafaHai
Wonderfully penned. That last line. ❤️

The last part is my favorite too ❤️❤️

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Simran Singh

@SpicyHarmony

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Posted: 5 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AK_2010
Couldn't comment last night bcz I was too sleepy 😆
It was absolutely amazing. In a way I found it very real that he will do something like this. Even though I know that he is a great teacher but still. Sometimes people do unfair things when they are emotionally distraught. I like the way you have described his desperation to avoid Anokhi.
Anokhi was so in character when she sunaofied him again 🤣
Great work! Looking forward to more.

Lol! Don’t worry, falling asleep before being to comment on a story is something I’m very familiar with 🤣🤣

Yeah! I love how logical Shaurya is but how ILLOGICAL Anokhi makes him. Its like, with everything and everyone else he plans out what he’s gonna say and how he’s going to react but with her, he reacts impulsively. And Anokhi, she sees the world so black and white, i adore her and how flawed she is. She’s not perfect like other female lead characters, and that’s amazing!!

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Simran Singh

@SpicyHarmony

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Posted: 5 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: GHKPM
Lovely...loved the interaction💖

Thank you very much 🥰🥰

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Meera

@MeeraWrites

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Posted: 5 years ago

#14

It was so serene. ❤️

The pace in which you've written was soothing; slowly one detail after the other, without any hurry. It was beautiful. The portrayal of Shaurya's emotions and consciousness were perfect.

Loved it. 🤗

Do write more.

Would love to read more of your writings. You've got a nice craft with the words. 👏

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Deepshi

@deepshiii

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Posted: 5 years ago

#15

Beautifully written👏 the last line though🥲

Do write more❤️

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

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Posted: 5 years ago

#16

Superb 👍

Shaurya was always affected by anokhi

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Simran Singh

@SpicyHarmony

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Posted: 5 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites
It was so serene. ❤️
The pace in which you've written was soothing; slowly one detail after the other, without any hurry. It was beautiful. The portrayal of Shaurya's emotions and consciousness were perfect.

Loved it. 🤗

Do write more.
Would love to read more of your writings. You've got a nice craft with the words. 👏

Thank you! I enjoyed writing this so i may write more. I love being in the headspace of these two characters!