Thinking of Her... A Shakhi OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: PehliDafaHai

Wonderfully penned. That last line. ❤️

The last part is my favorite too ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Couldn't comment last night bcz I was too sleepy 😆

It was absolutely amazing. In a way I found it very real that he will do something like this. Even though I know that he is a great teacher but still. Sometimes people do unfair things when they are emotionally distraught. I like the way you have described his desperation to avoid Anokhi.

Anokhi was so in character when she sunaofied him again 🤣

Great work! Looking forward to more.

Lol! Don’t worry, falling asleep before being to comment on a story is something I’m very familiar with 🤣🤣

Yeah! I love how logical Shaurya is but how ILLOGICAL Anokhi makes him. Its like, with everything and everyone else he plans out what he’s gonna say and how he’s going to react but with her, he reacts impulsively. And Anokhi, she sees the world so black and white, i adore her and how flawed she is. She’s not perfect like other female lead characters, and that’s amazing!!

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Lovely...loved the interaction💖

Thank you very much 🥰🥰

It was so serene. ❤️

The pace in which you've written was soothing; slowly one detail after the other, without any hurry. It was beautiful. The portrayal of Shaurya's emotions and consciousness were perfect.

Loved it. 🤗

Do write more.

Would love to read more of your writings. You've got a nice craft with the words. 👏

Beautifully written👏 the last line though🥲

Do write more❤️

Superb 👍

Shaurya was always affected by anokhi

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

It was so serene. ❤️

The pace in which you've written was soothing; slowly one detail after the other, without any hurry. It was beautiful. The portrayal of Shaurya's emotions and consciousness were perfect.

Loved it. 🤗

Do write more.

Would love to read more of your writings. You've got a nice craft with the words. 👏

Thank you! I enjoyed writing this so i may write more. I love being in the headspace of these two characters!

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Superb 👍

Shaurya was always affected by anokhi

Yes! And i love how he tries to pretend not to be

Originally posted by: deepshiii

Beautifully written👏 the last line though🥲

Do write more❤️

The last line 😌 thank you very much!

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Nice ❤️

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