SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 101

Originally posted by: Home786

In first episode:

1. We can show character introduction of each cast where they elucidate how life changed along with relations and emotions but without revealing any secret.

2. We can show Pooja and Aditi's bonding

3. Pooja and Abir in same office regarding how they keep professional and personal life separately.

4. Aditi and Abir's bonding

5 . Rajeev and Pooja discuss regarding some case without revealing it's about Anmol.

6. Anamika's and Poojas phone conversation

7. Bua's perception regarding relationships.

In second episode:

1. There's a Puja in home and Abir and Pooja engage to work together.

2. Aditi bringing a slight cupid moments

3. Rajeev reached for Puja portraying how loyal his friendship with Pooja

4. Abir is not happy with their friendship.

5. Finally in the end of episode, when Bua calls Pooja for doing aarti along her husband. Abir comes there instead Anmol thereby breaking the first shocking secret of marriage.

Will end episode with cliffhanger why? How? When Abir married Pooja.. For next week third episode.

You know, throughout the first episode and second, the characters should talk with Anmol’s pictures, creating an illusion that Anmol is alive. What do you think?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

You know, throughout the first episode and second, the characters should talk with Anmol’s pictures, creating an illusion that Anmol is alive. What do you think?

Is the precaps okay for you??

Originally posted by: Home786

Yesss without making readers realize that Anmol is no more..

Is the precaps okay for you??

It’s just perfect shaheen 👍🏼

And also, since there are less people, the episode will go quicker.

I can’t wait.

So can we practice here? Like so that we get a better idea of how to do that scene while enacting it?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

It’s just perfect shaheen 👍🏼

And also, since there are less people, the episode will go quicker.

I can’t wait.

So can we practice here? Like so that we get a better idea of how to do that scene while enacting it?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Ah! I thought we had already told the readers. And I didn’t know that Rajeev and Pooja knew each other for 3 years so cut that out. Yeah, we should go in a way where Anmol’s death and Abir Pooja wedding is a shock to the readers. What do you think we should do Nithya?

We can rehearse here before the actual episodes.

We should look for some catchy dialogues.

We can pre discuss what we have to do and how much we have to do.

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

It's great idea. But

Anmol is dead we didn't reveal to readers yet and also Abir Pooja wedding too.

We can secure it to give a shocking twist to all readers.

We should proceed the episode in such a way that readers shouldn't analyze Anmol is dead and Abir Pooja wedding.

And Rajeev Kapoor is known to pooja since three years.

What do you think?

Okay so Rajeev know pooja

Shaheen I have some doubts

Is there any specific part I should just know from 1at season?I mean I haven't read cases regarding pooja's dad in court I believe....just asking out of curiosity 😆

Is Rajeev known to pooja through anmol already or after his death only?

I have a small suggestion don't know if it will be successful though. ...Rajeev's pov and self talks or thoughts can be hidden completely unlike other characters ....and slowly his thoughts and pov can be shown when slowly he starts revealing his true colours. ..

I'm ready for the practice too but will be super active after the Saturday

And let's also discuss the reviews from viewers too after every episode

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Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Shaheen I have some doubts

Is there any specific part I should just know from 1at season?I mean I haven't read cases regarding pooja's dad in court I believe....just asking out of curiosity 😆

Is Rajeev known to pooja through anmol already or after his death only?

I have a small suggestion don't know if it will be successful though. ...Rajeev's pov and self talks or thoughts can be hidden completely unlike other characters ....and slowly his thoughts and pov can be shown when slowly he starts revealing his true colours. ..

I'm ready for the practice too but will be super active after the Saturday

And let's also discuss the reviews from viewers too after every episode

👍🏼

That’s a great idea! 👍🏼 We have to keep the suspense going so Rajeev’s thoughts should be hidden!

Practice is really needed for the dialogues for me because i cant really think of catchy, emotional dialogues just out of blue. Nithya is awesome at it tho. Definitely should check out her dialogues in season one!

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Shaheen I have some doubts

Is there any specific part I should just know from 1at season?I mean I haven't read cases regarding pooja's dad in court I believe....just asking out of curiosity 😆

Is Rajeev known to pooja through anmol already or after his death only?

I have a small suggestion don't know if it will be successful though. ...Rajeev's pov and self talks or thoughts can be hidden completely unlike other characters ....and slowly his thoughts and pov can be shown when slowly he starts revealing his true colours. ..

I'm ready for the practice too but will be super active after the Saturday

And let's also discuss the reviews from viewers too after every episode

👍🏼

Yes, Krishna Rajeev's self talk and motives should be kept hidden until 14ty episode... We can reveal his self talks and negative motives in 15th episode as a shocking twist..Till then, Rajeev is goody goody human and most trustful friend of Pooja.

So, in first/second episode, Rajeev and Pooja should shown discussing the case but it shouldn't be reveal that it's regarding Anmol's case. Anmol is dead will only be revealed on 3rd episode and it's a murder will be revealed to readers only on 4th episode where Pooja blurts out her emotions with Rajeev.

I have already suggested and posted the precap in pg. 131. If you want, you can write your scenes in advance, so that I can give you some catchy Hindi dialogues to add... If there is any doubt, do comment here or pm me as per your comfort..

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Okay so Rajeev know pooja

If you're free gives us some good ideas for symbolic scenes to add some symbolisms in story.