SERIAL WRITING ACTIVITY 2: CC# 2 [FINAL UPDATE ON PG. 130] - Page 100

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

That is true but we really have no other option. I think we can do fine. It might not be the best but we will make the best out of what we have.

It will be the best.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Main bhi 🤗

Hello people..!!

Anyone here??

Originally posted by: Home786

Hello people..!!

Anyone here??

Hi shaheen 🤗 Okay. So this is how I would like the first episode to go like. It’s detailed for I don’t know what reasons;

Pooja wakes up at 6:00 in the morning, she was sleeping in Aditi’s room. She gives a quick kiss in Aditi’s forehead before freshening up. Abir has already left for work by that point, they have like a one minute talk before Abir leaves. Pooja gets the things ready for Pooja. Bua is awake by that point. They talk about Anmol, Pooja starts tearing up remembering Anmol but quickly stops herself and finishes the Pooja. Bua leaves to her room and we get to know about her thought regarding Pooja. Her superstition is still a bit intact but it doesn’t overpower her sense of righteous. Pooja starts preparing the food and gets Anamika’s call, there’s a bit of a hint in her returning. Aditi wakes up by that point, sweet mother daughter moment. She gets Aditi ready for school.

AFTERNOON: Abir picks up Aditi, and they go to have ice cream on Aditi’s request. Then they go to a park to play for some time. When they come home, they get a little scolding from Pooja. Abir starts feeding Pooja. The doorbell rings, Pooja opens the door and she sees a man that she doesn’t seem to recognize.

“Hi, I am Mr. Rajeev Kapoor”

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Hi shaheen 🤗 Okay. So this is how I would like the first episode to go like. It’s detailed for I don’t know what reasons;

Pooja wakes up at 6:00 in the morning, she was sleeping in Aditi’s room. She gives a quick kiss in Aditi’s forehead before freshening up. Abir has already left for work by that point, they have like a one minute talk before Abir leaves. Pooja gets the things ready for Pooja. Bua is awake by that point. They talk about Anmol, Pooja starts tearing up remembering Anmol but quickly stops herself and finishes the Pooja. Bua leaves to her room and we get to know about her thought regarding Pooja. Her superstition is still a bit intact but it doesn’t overpower her sense of righteous. Pooja starts preparing the food and gets Anamika’s call, there’s a bit of a hint in her returning. Aditi wakes up by that point, sweet mother daughter moment. She gets Aditi ready for school.

AFTERNOON: Abir picks up Aditi, and they go to have ice cream on Aditi’s request. Then they go to a park to play for some time. When they come home, they get a little scolding from Pooja. Abir starts feeding Pooja. The doorbell rings, Pooja opens the door and she sees a man that she doesn’t seem to recognize.

“Hi, I am Mr. Rajeev Kapoor”

Anmol is dead we didn't reveal to readers yet and also Abir Pooja wedding too.

We can secure it to give a shocking twist to all readers.

We should proceed the episode in such a way that readers shouldn't analyze Anmol is dead and Abir Pooja wedding.

And Rajeev Kapoor is known to pooja since three years.

What do you think?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Hi shaheen 🤗 Okay. So this is how I would like the first episode to go like. It’s detailed for I don’t know what reasons;

Pooja wakes up at 6:00 in the morning, she was sleeping in Aditi’s room. She gives a quick kiss in Aditi’s forehead before freshening up. Abir has already left for work by that point, they have like a one minute talk before Abir leaves. Pooja gets the things ready for Pooja. Bua is awake by that point. They talk about Anmol, Pooja starts tearing up remembering Anmol but quickly stops herself and finishes the Pooja. Bua leaves to her room and we get to know about her thought regarding Pooja. Her superstition is still a bit intact but it doesn’t overpower her sense of righteous. Pooja starts preparing the food and gets Anamika’s call, there’s a bit of a hint in her returning. Aditi wakes up by that point, sweet mother daughter moment. She gets Aditi ready for school.

AFTERNOON: Abir picks up Aditi, and they go to have ice cream on Aditi’s request. Then they go to a park to play for some time. When they come home, they get a little scolding from Pooja. Abir starts feeding Pooja. The doorbell rings, Pooja opens the door and she sees a man that she doesn’t seem to recognize.

“Hi, I am Mr. Rajeev Kapoor”

Originally posted by: Home786

Are you sure you wanna disclose all the secrets in the first episode itself???

Oh! I thought the readers already knew about Anmol and stuff. Cut that out then. What do you want in the first episode Shaheen?

Originally posted by: RoyalDreams97

It's great idea. But

Anmol is dead we didn't reveal to readers yet and also Abir Pooja wedding too.

We can secure it to give a shocking twist to all readers.

We should proceed the episode in such a way that readers shouldn't analyze Anmol is dead and Abir Pooja wedding.

And Rajeev Kapoor is known to pooja since three years.

What do you think?

Ah! I thought we had already told the readers. And I didn’t know that Rajeev and Pooja knew each other for 3 years so cut that out. Yeah, we should go in a way where Anmol’s death and Abir Pooja wedding is a shock to the readers. What do you think we should do Nithya?

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Oh! I thought the readers already knew about Anmol and stuff. Cut that out then.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Oh! I thought the readers already knew about Anmol and stuff. Cut that out then. What do you want in the first episode Shaheen?

1. We can show character introduction of each cast where they elucidate how life changed along with relations and emotions but without revealing any secret.

2. We can show Pooja and Aditi's bonding

3. Pooja and Abir in same office regarding how they keep professional and personal life separately.

4. Aditi and Abir's bonding

5 . Rajeev and Pooja discuss regarding some case without revealing it's about Anmol.

6. Anamika's and Poojas phone conversation

7. Bua's perception regarding relationships.

In second episode:

1. There's a Puja in home and Abir and Pooja engage to work together.

2. Aditi bringing a slight cupid moments

3. Rajeev reached for Puja portraying how loyal his friendship with Pooja

4. Abir is not happy with their friendship.

5. Finally in the end of episode, when Bua calls Pooja for doing aarti along her husband. Abir comes there instead Anmol thereby breaking the first shocking secret of marriage.

Will end episode with cliffhanger why? How? When Abir married Pooja.. For next week third episode.